silver: hey readers what up
jak: hey silver
keira: hey i hope yall enjoy this we worked hard on it
silver: that we did without further ado the story
jaks pov
samos wheres keira
i dont know
what ahhhhh i need to talk to her
try the stadium
10 minites later "keira are you here" daxter who was there "hey jak its one of those message things"
your right erols face pops up hello jak
"erol give me keira now" he heard her voice in the back ground " JAK HELP" " im coming keira"
keiras pov on the boat
"ahhhhhhhhhhh" she screamed "now tell me where the heart of mar is"
"i dont know" she cried " fine more electricity"
" no- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" she sceamed " JAK HELP"
JAKs pov
no one hurts my keira he growled daxter wait till i distract erol you free keira ok" " but jak" daxter said to late he was all ready running to erol " EROL" he yealled but erol hit jak and slamed him to the ground then put him in chains " any ways now keira one more time WHERES THE HEART OF MAR"he yelled " i dont know" keira cried erol hit her jak growled erol smiled " ohhhh does that hurt the eco FREAK" erol spat
" hit her again and ill make sure you meet with the the baron" he growled
erol smiled and hit keira again "AHHHHHHHHHH" jak growled at him "EROL"
as he broke the chains and chased erol daxter undid the chains on keira two gun shots whent of " JAK ... JAK!" she yelled and ran to the sound and found jak nearly dead on the floor "jak" she said " keira " her asked weakly
" ohhh my god jak your bleeding ill ge-" she was cut off my him " no im not gonna make it" he said " jak im so sorry if it wernt for me you woulnt be like this" and started crying
"hey dont cry i risked my life because i love you and didnt want to live without you plus i would rather die than you you have family tess all i have is daxter." he said " jak please dont leave" "i love you keira say you love me to" "ja-" "i want to hear you say it one last time" his breathing was slowing" i love you jak mar always have always will i have a song for you jak" "really" here it goes
sleep my darling shut your eyes and rest sleep tight dream in peace for all i want you to know is how much i love you
jaks breathing stopped "i love you jak" she laid beside him and cried she sat up and saw jak glow a blue color there was no more bleeding jak moaned and started breathing opened his eyes and looked at keira " your live" she cried and hugged him he hugged her back " keira" "yes" before anything else happens " he pulled out a ring and said " keira you are the love of my life well you are my life and i want to be with you the rest of my life will you mary me" he aske " yes who else loves me like you do" and she kissed him
"lets go home" he said the end
silver: what did you think
keira: i thought it was cute siver it was amazing
jak: i liked it i got kick erols but and got to marry keira
silver: jak when dont you like to kick peoples but
jak: i dont know
silver: im glad you guys liked it there may be a sequel come on and r&r
everyone: peace out