All right this is my first fanfic so don't judge to harshly. Now on with the story.
"Speech"
'Thought'
"Kyuubi"
'Kyuubi thoughts'
Justu
(A/N: Author Note)
Flashback
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or any of the lyrics that you see in this story. If I did I wouldn't have to write this to cover my ass.
SuperiorShortness: Thanks for the advice and I'll try to keep the tiger comment in mind
Chapter 1: An odd mask
Pain lots of Pain
That was the only way to describe 6 year old Uzumaki Naruto, who wandered the streets since he was three, right now as a mob was beating him in an alley. 'Why what have I done to deserve this' "I'm sorry for whatever it is I've done please stop," He pleaded while being kicked, punched, clawed, and stabbed.
"The demon asks us to stop, pfft, did you stop when you attacked us, no, come on while the Hokage's not here let's kill it!," a chunnin. "Yeah," came the villagers shout. They picked up Naruto and nailed him to the wall of the alley by shoving kunai threw his ripped white shirt and torn up blue shorts, amazingly not cutting or stabbing him.
"Alright move out of the way," shouted a drunken jounin. He then took out a poison laced kunai and threw it at Naruto's heart.
'So this is it I'm going to be killed for crimes I didn't commit,' he thought. "No! I will live and become Hokage and they will acknowledge through fear or respect." The kunai was getting closer then everything went black and he found himself in front of a cage with a tag on it with the kanji for seal.
"So my host decides to pay me a visit," came a booming voice.
"Who are you," said Naruto. He knew he should fear this voice the cage reeked of something evil, but he didn't he felt calm here. Why should he fear who or whatever this was his life was already hell why should meeting a monster be any different?
"Hahahaha! Who am I? I am the Strongest of the Biju," the figures roared. Hearing this Naruto started to realize who it was but it was impossible. Then a giant fox with reddish orange fur with long ears and nine long tails appeared behind the cage.
"No way" Naruto whispered.
"I am the great devil known as the Kyuubi no Kitsune!" The fox roared.
"Why are you here your supposed to be dead. The Yondaime-" he was cutoff.
"Sealed me inside you." he finished.
"What?!" He yelled.
"Yes that fool Yondaime sealed me into you to save this village that treats you like the plague. You are the only thing keeping me from destroying this pitiful village. I have seen how this village treats you like you are me, ha, the irony" he finished.
Naruto just looked at the demon lord with no fear, or anger just a blank stare.
"Look at the brave kit showing no fear," he said looking down at him.
"My life is already hell. Meeting a local of the place doesn't scare me and speaking of places where are we?" he said as he turned to look at the devil.
"Where in your mind, kit," he said casually. But on the inside he was intrigued by this boy who showed no fear in his presence, the boy with blue eyes that showed broken pieces of what little emotions he had.
"Why am I here?" he asked.
"You body is in shock and you must have been sent here as a result," he answered.
"So I'm close to death," he said. "Well maybe then my suffering will end at the hand of thesevillagers," he said looking down.
"How pathetic, is this what you are reduced to, a coward," Kyuubi harshly said. "Since you could hear you have been called a monster. Since you could walk you have felt pain and abandonment. Since you could run you have been hunted. Since you could remember your life has bee a personal hell. Despite this you have continued forward with strength a devil could admire."
Naruto was sinking into acceptance of his death when the Kyuubi began to talking to him. Naruto began to feel the fire spark in him, the burning determination that the villagers could not put, what kept him going his whole life.
He looked up at the devil fox, "Your right, I kept going despite everything and I'm not going down now, not after all the bullshit. Can't believe you saved me."
"Do not read to much into it. If you die then so do I, just means to an end," the fox said looking at his container. "So If I wish to keep living then we must get stronger."
"What do you mean we?"
"Kit if you are weak then so am I," The boy just cocked his head to the side and squinted his eyes like a curious, or confused fox. "Huugh, I have power but if I can not use it therefore I am weak so if I can help you gain your own power and teach to control mine we will become stronger. Get it."
"Got it."
"Good then a deal is necessary."
"A deal?"
"Yes, I will make you strong, stronger than any ninja," Kyuubi said.
"What do you get in return," he asked.
"I want you to show the world our power, our strength and to kill one vile piece of shit for me." the fox said.
"Who?"
"A demon that killed some special to me his name is Shikkan," Kyuubi said growling out the name.
"Okay, whose the other one."
"He is an old enemy of mine that killed my close comrades and his sons. We will talk about him later." Kyuubi said looking at his container.
"I just have to take out this Orochimaru guy, some mystery enemy and I'll have the power to make my dreams a reality… humph, you got a deal Fuzzy." Said the smirking blond.
"Impudent gaki," Kyuubi growled out but if you look closely a smirk was present.
"So, how are we doing this," Naruto asked the great devil.
"Rip off a piece of the seal." The fox said pointing to the seal on it's cage. Naruto nodded and climbed up the cage. Once he ripped off a piece of the seal the Kyuubi said something that would piss Naruto off later.
"By the way it is going to hurt a lot."
As soon as the Kyuubi said that red chakra flew out of the cage and grabbed Naruto and suspended him in mid air.
Naruto clenched hit teeth in pain as the demonic chakra began to enter his system. It felt like all his nerves were on fire and his organ were being squeezed.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRHHHHH"
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(Hokage's Office)
It had been hell for the Hokage this morning. They had found Sasuke Uchiha at the Uchiha compound to find his whole clan massacred.
They had found the Uchiha heir in the fettle position muttering "Why Itachi" over and over again before one of the ANBU knocked him out. The Sandaime had sent hunter-nin after Itachi to neutralize him though he doubted they could do it. Sasuke had fallen into a coma induced by the Tsukiyomi that Itachi had used.
Knock, knock, knock
"Come in" the Hokage said. The door opened to reveal two nin. The first was wearing a dog mask and his gray hair seemed to defy gravity. He was also wearing ANBU armor with black ANBU style pants with a kunai pouch strapped to his right leg and a ninjato strapped to his back. He was also wearing gloves with metal plating on his backhand and studs on the knuckles.
The other ninja was a kunoichi that has purple hair tied into a short ponytail. She had brown eyes and face that would be considered hot by the male population. She was wearing a trench coat with a fish net shirt under it that did not leave much to the imagination. She was also wearing a short skirt, shin guards, and black ninja sandals with a kunai pouch strapped to her right leg.
"Inu (dog) report!" the hokage ordered.
"Hokage-sama," 'Inu' saluted. "We have found no other surviving Uchiha's at the compound, it seems Itachi was thorough in slaughtering his clan, the hunter-nins have returned but they lost any trace of Itachi's trail," the dog masked nin reported
"Hmm I see, Anko Report!" the Hokage ordered.
"Hokage-sama," Anko saluted. "There are no clues to why Itachi might have done this or where he went. We interrogated anyone that saw Itachi the day before. He didn't have any friends, besides Shusui so there was no one to question on his whereabouts," Anko reported.
"So we have a whole clan dead except for two members, one a traitor, and one in a coma. Fortunately the doctors told me Sasuke will be up in a few months or so," the Hokage said rubbing his temples. "The council will be worried about the other villages and the villagers will be in uproar. With the loss of the Uchiha Clan, Konoha's strength has fallen significantly and will be weaker than ever before... Not to mention the material loss of almost our
entire police force.
"I can see why you pulled me, cat, and bear off of guard duty for Naruto," Kakashi said.
"Naruto you mean the fox boy?" Anko asked with no malice. She knew what it felt like to be the village pariah and how it felt to be hated for someone else's actions. She was one of the people who respected the boy and had protected him.
"Speaking of him let me check up on him to make sure he's not causing trouble," the hokage said chuckling. Kakashi and Anko chuckled along with him. Everyone in the village knew that Naruto had a prankster streak and amazingly he could outrun the ANBU for eight hours an impressive feat for a six year old.
"He does cause a lot trouble and I hope I'm not one to chase him when he gets older," Kakashi shuddered and so did the hokage and Anko. "That kid has got crazy stamina I wonder how he would be in the sack in a few years, if only I was a few years younger," Anko said causing both men to sweat drop.
The Hokage cleared his throat and pulled out the scribing orb and called up the image of Naruto's whereabouts and it did not please him. He saw Naruto being beating by the mob of twenty civilians and shinobi. "Damn, Kakashi, Anko follow me," the hokage said. The two leaf ninja immediately agreed seeing the mob.
(2 minutes later at the alley)
The hokage and the two leaf nin appeared in time to see the kunai pierce Naruto's throat. "Naruto!" the hokage shouted. The two leaf nin had other thoughts. 'Minato-sensei I failed you,' were Kakashi's thoughts as he looked on helplessly. 'Damn villagers he didn't deserve this!' Anko thought pledging to torture them horrifically.
Then all hell broke loose.
Red chakra surrounded Naruto and dislodged the kunai and healed his wounds. Then it burst outwards and everyone felt the killing intent. They had not felt it since the Kyuubi attack and it chilled them to the bone to feel it again. The villagers had heart attacks while the shinobi could not breathe or move at all. Then they heard something that will haunt them until they died which would be very soon.
"I am going to make you all disappear," Kyuubi knew off the three shinobi there and knew he couldn't take them while in temporary control of the body. If they knew he had awakened then they might kill Naruto, he could not risk that. So he played the part of a hurt angry Naruto. "I'm going to make you all," he made his move. "Disappear!"
No one knew what happened one second Naruto was talking and then he had his hand through the heart of the jonin that threw the kunai. He was dead before he hit the floor. 'Naruto' flexed his claws and charged towards the mob.
'He' used his claws and slit the throat of a chunin and took the kunai he held in his hands.
'He' stabbed a civilian through the heart be for proceeding to the next victim.
'Naruto' killed the civilians and shinobi one by one either striking them in vital points or slitting their throats.
One shinobi tried to fight back only to have his head sliced off. Another tried the same but had his arm promptly ripped off and impaled with the kunai held in the torn off appendage. He went through all off them in a matter seconds until he came to a lone chunin. 'He' approached the chunin slowly with the kunai in his hands "Any last words," 'he' said. "Please have mercy," he asked.
Ironically this was the same chunin that Naruto had begged to. The ninja then found a kunai in his heart and collapsed on the ground lifeless. "Sorry all out of that," 'Naruto' said. He looked the bodies and roared letting out a chakra pulse that was felt by the shinobi and had them their in an instance before slipping into unconsciousness.
(With the hokage and most of the shinobi)
"Oh kami," the hokage said. He had felt that chakra before and realized many ninja would be after him so he acted quickly. "Kakashi, Anko retrieve Naruto," the hokage ordered.
"Hai!"
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(An hour later)
"Kill the demon," "Finish what the Yondaime started" "We most dispose of it". Were the words Sarutobi heard from the council.
"Hokage-sama you felt that chakra and you know we must dispose of it," said one Hitomi Haruno. This was of course followed by shouts or agreement. "Haruno-san the boy was nearly killed by our own villagers and ninjas it's this that caused him to use that chakra," the hokage stated. "The boy must be killed before he becomes a threat," said Inoichi Yamanaka.
"He is not a threat the only reason that chakra came out was because he was attacked," the hokage retorted. "Furthermore though you have forgotten the last wishes of the Yondaime, I have not, no harm will come to the boy," the hokage said.
"I agree with hokage-sama on leaving the boy alone he has done nothing wrong," one Hiashi Hyuuga said which served to silence most of the council because the hokage and the Hyuuga clan had the most influence and no one would dare go against their wishes.
" Thank you Hiashi, there will be no further discussion on what will happen to the boy, dismissed," the hokage said and to up to check on Naruto who was resting on the couch in his office.
The hokage walked in to see Kakashi and Anko watching over the boy. "How is Naruto-kun doing Kakashi," the hokage asked. "He's fine just suffering from mental exhaustion and the strain the chakra put him through," Kakashi said.
"The paperwork for this incident is going to give me a headache," the hokage said clearly showing his hated for the bane of the kages. "I'll look after him until he wakes up let's hope nothing else happens," the hokage said. Unfortunately this would not be the case as major changes would happen that would shake Konoha to its core once theses changes were found out.
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(In Naruto's mindscape)
Naruto was sitting in Kyuubi's cage with the fox right in front of him.
"Well kit it seems I was able to save your life and it looks like the old man with the red and white robes is guarding you," Kyuubi said.
"So the old man is guarding me great I knew I could count on him," Naruto said happily. "True, I sense no malice from him so it seems you can trust him, now there something we have to talk about," Kyuubi replied.
"What do we have to talk about fuzzy?" Naruto asked using his new nick name for Kyuubi. He growled a bit at this but continued, "Well first let's change this cage into something a bit more comfortable." Kyuubi told Naruto how to use his mind to change his mindscape. Naruto turned the sewers into a big field with a giant forest to the west, a great lake to the south, huge mountains to the north, a valley to the east, a the big field they were standing in being the center. The bar of the cage flew out of the ground and wrapped themselves around the Kyuubi's neck, front and back legs, and his tails "Aah, Feels good to stretch my body again. Now kit when you tore the seal something happened."
"Of course you could have warned me about the searing pain!" Naruto shouted.
"Not that brat. Right now youki is invading and overwhelming you chakra system and turning you into a hanyou," Kyuubi said.
"What! Shit if the village ever finds out I'm dead," Naruto said.
"Don't worry about that you won't gain any notable features except for your eyes becoming slits, your whiskers becoming more pronounced, and heightened senses but…," Kyuubi trialed off at the end.
"But what fox?"
"The whiskers and eyes can be hidden but your going to grow fox ears." Kyuubi said quickly.
"What how the hell am I supposed to hide the ears?!" Naruto shouted.
"There is an artifact close to the village that could solve your problem as well as keep you hidden while you change." Naruto looked up at the fox as he said that.
"What do you mean change I thought I would've changed by now." The fox looked at Naruto and sighed.
"You still have a lot to learn before making assumptions kit. Right now the youki is coursing through your system enlarging your chakra system. Your transformation will occur soon so you might want to find a nice empty field," the fox said.
"How long before I wake up?" Naruto asked. "Right about now," Kyuubi said.
(Real world: Hokage's office)
Sarutobi Hiruzen, the Third Hokage, nicknamed The Professor, and The God of Shinobi was being beaten by the most powerful enemy any kage could ever face…paperwork.
'Sometimes I wish I hadn't taken this job up again,' stamping another form for a new genin who had been killed. 'Another young leaf falls from the tree,' the aged shinobi sadly thought. He looked at the young boy whose clothes were torn and blood stained a few hours ago were now replaced with a blue shirt with the hidden leaf symbol on the back, a pair of green shorts, and shinobi sandals. "I wish you would wake up already Naruto."
As if on cue Naruto opened his eyes and sat up to see the hokage doing staring at him. "Oi, Oji-san what am I doing in your office."
The hokage stared at Naruto, looked around room and shook his head before responding. "Ah, Naruto-kun you are awake. You were out for a couple of hours. Now I must tell you-"the hokage was cutoff.
"Maybe later Oji-san I have things to do," Naruto said before rush out of the office and the tower.
"Hmm, I wonder," the kage said to himself, "I wish something would get rid of this paperwork." The hokage looked around and nothing happened.
"Damn, well it was worth a," at that moment a red boar jumped through the window, ate the paperwork, looked around the room, and jumped out of the window from whence it came. The Hokage stared at the remains of his paperwork before reaching into a secret compartment in his desk and puling out a little orange book, "Best not to look a gift horse in the mouth
(With Naruto)
Naruto sped off toward an abandoned training area, ignoring the glares because he did not care.
Once he got there he felt pain in his whole body before his body began to convulse. He felt chakra rushing through him and let out a roar of pain. The chakra in his system was overloading him making his body bulge. He felt as if he was being burned alive and felt like he was being stretched from the inside. To him it felt like hours had passed when it had only been ten minutes. As soon as the pain came it went and he felt his body adjust to the chakra. He collapsed on the ground and slipped into unconsciousness.
He woke up later with a sore throat, so he picked himself up, looked around noticing it was night, and trudged towards a lake he saw and drank from it. "Ah, better," he said then he caught his reflection in the lake. Where his ears used to be were two fox ears that were both blond and ended in black tips. He felt something on his backside and saw it was a blond tail that ended in a black tip. His hair was still blond but a bit longer. His finger and toenails were now black claws and he seemed to be taller, he used to be short for an eight year old but now he seemed to the height of someone two years older then him. His face lost its baby fat and his body seemed to be a bit muscled. His eyes were still blue but now his pupil was now a slit and his whisker marks where more profound. "This form is much better than my human form," Naruto said with awe in his voice. He could hear, see, smell, and think much more clearly.
"Of course kit, being turned into a hanyou pretty much heightened and strengthened your body and mind, basically it's an upgrade," Kyuubi said.
"Kyuubi is that you I can't see you anywhere," Naruto said looking around the clearing.
"Of course you cant I am speaking to you through a mental link and don't talk to me you can communicate through your thoughts we don't need people thinking your crazy, it would make it easy for those bastards to kill you," Kyuubi said.
'Right, this is pretty useful for the future, but there's one problem how am I supposed to get around the village without being killed when I have two fox ears on top of my head and a tail sticking out of my ass!' Naruto thought.
"Hmm, I thought this might be a problem so I tried to locate an item that would completely alter your body."
"Really that sounds cool lets go get it"
"We can't I located it 600 feet underground."
"So what do we do now fox."
"I found the next best thing, it can hide you under an illusion. No one but powerful ninja or illusion specialist will be able to notice it and none can dispel it."
"Well its not as good as a complete body change but it'll due."
"Alright now let's go get that item I mentioned. I can lead you to it but you're going to have to hide," Kyuubi said.
'Let's go,' Naruto said hopping into the trees jumping through them with ease thanks to his new body. He traveled through the forest avoiding any people he came across. He reached the south gate of Konoha. He observed the two guards on watch from behind a tree in the park across the gate.
"The item is on the other side of this wall near a shrine," Kyuubi said.
'How am I going to sneak by the guards, fuzzy,' Naruto thought while looking at the two chunin who were guarding the gate.
"How about you think if an idea, think of it as a test with high consequences," Kyuubi told his container. 'I really don't feel like thinking up of something.'
'Alright this'll be a piece of cake,' Naruto told the fox while thinking up of an idea. 'Hmm, what could I do? I could-no I don't have anything to work with. Damn, what can I- I got it.'
Looking around the park he found two rocks. Sneaking over to the alley next to the park he found what he needed a couple of pails. Luckily he was wearing a dark green shirt and blue pants gifts from the nice ramen bar owner to blend in.
Hiding behind a building next to the guard station he climbed up onto one of the ledges and made racket with the pails.
"Hmm? Kotetsu what was that."
"Don't know but you should probably check it out Izumo."
"It's probably just a cat."
.BANG
"That wasn't a cat come on."
"It came from this alley, careful Kotetsu."
The chunin guards entered the alley with kunai drawn and looked around. BANG. They turned to their left and saw… a cat. "Hmph, jeez and you got me all spooked out for that. I told you it was a cat."
"Sorry, but it could have been something more serious," Izumo said not realizing how true his words were. At this point Naruto, who was standing on top of a ledge, sprung his trap.
"Banzai!"
"Huh?" The only thing the pair of unlucky chunin saw was the bottom of their respective pail before it was slammed on their heads. With their heads covered the chunin ran around like chickens with their heads cutoff, until they ran into the alley walls, knocking them selves out.
Holding in his laughter at the scene Naruto ran out the gates and headed to the shrine. It took awhile. When he was close he found a path that had no been used in a long time, if all weeds and grass randomly popping out of the road was any clue.
After walking down he found a shrine that had been burned down to nothing but black structures sticking out of the ground. There were also fox statues around the shrine all broken or had graffiti on them.
"THOSE BASTARDS! Look at what they did to mistress Inari's shrine." The fox shouted in anger.
"Mistress Inari?' Naruto asked.
"Before I became a devil I was a zenko, a servant of Inari, like some foxes. We disagreed on something and she banished me." Kyuubi explained to the young boy.
'Wow you worked for a goddess, cool.'
"Yes it was a grand experience, she cared for us and we in turn served her faithfully," replied the fox sadly.
Naruto, while looking around the shrine, replied to the fox, 'Wow you sound like you actually care for her.'
"Yes I loved her, we all loved her, her kindness was inhuman, to us she was all that mattered," the fox replied nostalgically.
'Was there anyone else you cared for?' Naruto inquired.
"Yes there was, but were getting distracted welp, let us find the mask," shaking his head the fox closed his eyes trying to remember where the mask was located. "Check one of the fox statues, the ones that aren't broken," the fox told the boy.
'That narrows it down a lot,' Naruto remarked seeing as there were 3 unbroken statues resting on pedestals. He stepped up to the first which was scorched black probably why it wasn't broken. He climbed on top of the statue as he was short and only reached the paws. 'So, what am I looking for?'
"Reach into the mouth and there should be a switch," Kyuubi told his container. Naruto reached into the fox's mouth and dug around. He felt a small button on the back of the mouthand pressed.
Naruto hear a click before pain erupted from his hand, "AAAAAUGH!," he pulled his hand out to see that he was missing three fingers. "AAAAAAAAUGH, UUUUUAAAGH, FUUUUUUUUUUUCK!" Naruto kept screaming clutching his bleeding hand, well more like two fingered stump.
Then his finger started to smoke and he looked at them, wide eyed. His fingers were healing at a fast rate, he watched in morbid fascination as bone grew making cracking sounds, then meat, blood, veins, and skin.
"Huff, huff, huff, what the fuck was that!?" He shouted at the fox.
"Well that was your regeneration kicking in, it will activate automaticall-" Kyuubi's explanation was cut off by the short boy's shouts.
"Not that! I mean the goddamn trap that bit my fucking fingers off!" shouted Naruto.
"It was a trap, there's no more to it," came the nonchalant reply of the fox.
"Why the fuck didn't you tell me that could happen!" shouted an angered Naruto.
"It must've slipped my mind," the fox replied nonchalantly. 'Slipped your mind? SLIPPED YOUR MIND! FUCK YOU! SLIPPED YOUR MIND MY A-'
"Yes, yes, That's all good and nice but lets look for that mask," Kyuubi replied nonchalantly. Muttering something that sounded like 'asshole fox', Naruto kept searching for the mask. The next fox statue was similar to the last but this time Naruto was cautious on any switches and levers that could activate any traps. He felt around the fox's mouth and felt a switch. Not wanting to take any risk he grabbed a stick, pushed the switch and pulled his hand out of the fox's mouth.
This was the best thing he could have done since the fox head decided to explode sending cement everywhere. Some of the shrapnel hit Naruto hard enough to break skin. "SON OF A BITCH!"
While Kyuubi was fixing his wounds Naruto decided to voice his comments. 'This is fucking bullshit! Even being careful I still get hurt. This mask better be worth it.'
Going to the third statue, Naruto decided to forgo any caution just stuck his hand into the statue's mouth felt a button and pressed it. After a few seconds nothing happened, so he pressed it again, nothing happened, so he pressed it again, and again, and again, and again, and again. "AAAAAAAhhhhhhhh! Screw this, and screw that mask," yelled Naruto punching the fox statue.
When his fist connected to with the statue it pressed a hidden panel which made the statue bend forward and hit him on the head. When the statue bent over a small compartment opened on the statues pedestal revealing a mask. The mask looked completely different from the mask he had seen on the ANBU who chased him. It resembled a fox's head, the fox's lips were black like a regular fox, a black nose, the eyes were open but covered in the same material that made the mask, two white fox ears, and except for the black parts the mask was completely bone white.
Picking himself up and rubbing his head Naruto walked over and picked up the masked, examining it. 'This is one weird ass mask,' said the boy to the fox looking at they eyes, 'How the hell are you supposed to look out of this thing.'
"Just put it on, boy" Kyuubi said annoyed by the child's shouting.
"Hmph! Fine I will," Naruto said bringing the mask to his face, hesitating for awhile, before putting it on. "…Well I can't see, this, this is great. I mean why not just- whoa!" This was the best word Naruto could use as he could now see out of the mask but his eyes seem to be in the wrong places. He touched the eyes of the mask and saw that his fingers were touching his eyes but not hurting it. "What the hell?"
Naruto then touched the top of his and found his ears were gone replace by the two ears of the mask and his tail was gone as well. "Well that's better but the way the mask looks will be more trouble."
As soon as he said that the mask made cracking noises as it grew smaller and smaller until it was a white chip that started on his forehead and ended at the tip of his nose both ends were pointed.
'Well this will keep me from being murdered, does it do anything else.'
"No it just hides you, that's it." came the casual reply from the fox.
'What that's all it does, what a rip off.' The blond boy huffed crossing his arms. "It was meant to hide fox demons with out illusions so hunters could not find them. The other item was a gauntlet that would have given you complete control of earth, and sped up your training by giving three times the results in half the time, oh well your doing things the hard way."
'You sure know how to brighten up someone's day,' sarcasm dripping from every word. "You know what! Its fine with me doing it the hard way, everything else in life has been a bitch for me, and I will become stronger for it. So when do we get started."
"HA HA HA HA! You've got spirit welp," said the grinning fox, "By the way your going to bleed a lot."
'Fine with me."
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Finally finished my first chapter took me awhile too with all the school work.
I just going to skip ahead to the graduation because writing about the academy days is boring except for those authors who do it well but I'm not one of them.
Also some character will be a little OC but that will be explained in a flashback, later in the story, or as a cause of something in the story.