Hey there readers! Sapphire9941 here, typing this and eating a Fiber One chewy bar 3 ! Since I stopped I Met Him In Detention, my friend and I got bored and started a new story. The story is also on Tri-Sierra-Tops account! We've got Sierra156 to agree to be our awesome Beta reader! But, she didn't look at this chapter so it might be horrible. Sierra's A/N is weird, you should read it... Disclaimers? Disclaimers? No, no I don't like them (:

"How do I look?" I asked Ella as I looked at myself in the mirror.

"You look fine, Max! Stop whinning!" Ella said as she rolled her eyes.

"Don't roll your eyes at me missy! Any ways, he told me he had something important to tell me!" I said excitedly, trying on different earrings. "He might finally tell me he loves me!"

And this is where I'm going to stop. 'Cause just what I said right there, the 'He might finally tell me he loves me!' was way off. Not even close. Let me just cut to the part when he tell me his…big news.

"Max! Why don't sit down right here." Fang said with a small smile. He pulled out a chair from the table. I smiled brightly at him and sat down.

"So, what did you want to tell me?" I asked casually, taking a sip of water.

"Umm, I don't really know how to say this…" He said quietly. Okay, Max, get ready. He's going to say it! He's really going to say it!

"You can tell me anything. You know that, right?" I asked, edging him to speak more.

"So here's the thing…You're a great girl. You're very beautiful, smart, funny, and just…just a great girl." He said with a sad smile…wait wait, sad? He should not be sad when he tells me he loves me!

"And you're a great guy too, Fang!" I said brightly. Why is he freaking sad?

"But, I think we should see other people…"

"I love you t-wait, what?" I yelled.

"Shh!" Fang said, taking my hand as he looked around.

"And why, Fang, would you want to break up with me!" I yelled as I stood up. People were glancing at me but like I give fucking shit!

"Max, come on, you're making a scene," he murmured.

"You really think I give freaking hell if I make a scene! Just tell me why the fucking hell you're breaking up with me!" I screamed.

"Max, I just don't think were very…compatible for each other," Fang said quietly, looking down.

"Compatible! COMPATIBLE? Why do you think we're not fucking compatible?"

"Look, can we talk about this somewhere more…private?"

"Why! Cause you're embarrassed to be with me, is that it?"

"What? No, no that's not it!"

"Maybe that's why you've been acting so weird. What? Am I just not pretty enough to be your girlfriend? Well I am so sorry I don't dress like a slut like Lissa."

"NO! It's not how you dress, I love the way you dress!"

"Oh? So why are you breaking up with me?"

"I just...I just don't feel the same when we started dating," he murmured.

"Oh…" I said, looking down at my hands. How can he not like me anymore? Does he not feel like every time we see each other was like the first time we met, like me?

"Well, I guess I'll just go, see you around" as I hurried out of the restaurant, I pulled my coat closer. Tears pricking the back of my eyes, no, I will not cry over a boy, the fierce Maximum Ride will not cry over a boy. I kept telling myself this, the tears came anyway.

"Max!" I heard the faint call. I kept walking.

"Max!" the voice called out again. This time it was closer. I ignored it again.

"MAX! WAIT!" the voice called out really close this time. I started to run, knowing who it was. Tears streaked down my cheeks, most likely ruining my make-up and making it run.

"Max!" said the voice right behind me, grabbing my arm and pulling me to a stop.

"At least let me give you a ride home. It's snowing out! I don't want you to freeze" Fang said. Not trusting my voice, I nodded my head, casting my gaze on the ground. I hope he couldn't see my face.

"Come on, my cars over here." He grabbed my arm and pulled me towards the restaurant. Usually when we walk and there's a silence, it's very comfortable. But today, it was just plan awkward. I tried to wipe the tears out of my eyes, but they kept on coming. "Max…are you okay?" Fang said as he looked at me. I didn't realize that we were at his car until I heard the beep beep when he unlocked his car.

"Umm, yeah," I coughed, still not convinced my voice will stay even. I felt Fang's fingers brush off the hair in front of my eyes. He grasped my chin lightly and pulled my head up, so my eyes met his. His eyes widened a tiny bit when he saw my tears.

"Max, I'm sorry. We can still be friends, right?" He asked with a small smile. What the hell? When a guy says 'we can still be friends' after a break up is like your mom tells you your dog died but you can keep the bones.

"Yeah, of course," I said, forcing a smile. He opened the passengers' door for me and waved his hand elegantly towards the open door. I rolled my eyes and got in his black Pontiac Firebird.

The car ride home was awkward and quiet. I kept on catching him glancing at me at the corner of my eyes. Half way through the ride, he turned on the radio. The song I Walk Alone by Green Day came on. What a perfect song for this situation… He quickly turned off the radio and murmured something that resembled 'Why me?'

He drove through the swirling snowflakes. It was really awkward until we pulled up to my house. I grabbed my bag and opened the door, but before I could get up Fang reached his arm in front of me and pulled the door shut.

"Max, I… I'm really sorry about before it's just… I don't know!" he said frustrated.

"Well when you figure out your priorities, don't come and find me. I'm done with you!" I said with malice. With that I pushed open the door, got out and slammed the door. I ran into the house with tears in my eyes.

LINE BREAK! WHAT WHAT! Ima gangsta line break! Yo yo! Lol fail courtesy of Tri-Sierra-Tops(...oh Sierrra ~ Sapphire)

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God I'm so stupid! Why did I break up with her? I can't believe I broke up with the love of my life! I'm such a wimp! Every time I get close to a girl I push her away.

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