Ok guys new and improved longer chapter 1 it's really just the same at chapter 1 as two nothing is really diffrent.
"Tris honey, it's time to get up." I whisper in her ear. "Tobias just 10 more minuets please?" She sounds like a sad little kid when you pouts like that. She keeps her eyes closed trying to avoid getting up. "No, Tris you were already late once this week you need to get to the tattoo shop."I kiss her once more then I start tickling her. She squirms trying to get me to stop. "Tobias, stop!" She says laughing. She finally sits up and goes to get dressed. I sit contently at the end of the bed watching my beautiful wife. Wow she's my wife, and the love of my life. She instantly blushes when she sees me watching her.
"I woke you up early enough that we can go get breakfast for once." I say mocking the amount she sleeps in. She sticks her tongue out at me "Hey! I'm not that late I just like my sleep." I put my hand on her cheek and kiss her. The kiss full of passion.I kiss down her neck to her collar bone. I kiss each of her birds with my hands on her waist. She lets out a small moan pulling me closer. I kiss her a few more times and she is pulling at my shirt. "Tobias we should go get food" she says out of breath. "Aw,Tris,please lets just stay here,"I plead as I put my hands under her shirt and rub her sides just like she loves. She takes a big breath in as if trying to convince herself of something. "No, Tobias stop . You were the one who woke me up to get breakfast and I need to tell Tori I'm helping train initiates which means I need to help set up tomorrow." She moves my hands. I let out a sigh and say "Fine, we will do what you want."I'm hoping if I continue to kiss her I can convince her to stay in and just eat a muffin on the way like normal. AS I continue I know I've won when I have to pull away for air and she is pulling me back.
I pick her up bridal style and lay her back on our bed. Then her phone starts going off. She is trying to ignore it and as much as I want to I know we cant avoid responsibility. "Tris, answer your phone I'll be here when you get off of it." I roll off of her and she grabs the phone. "Hello Tris answering."she listens to what the other person says. "Ok we will be there tonight." Great more plans I want a night where we don't have plans. "Christina we will be there stop freaking out ok see you tonight bye." She rolls her eyes very dramatically. "Where are we going this time?" I ask her I know she can hear the annoyance in my voice. It's just we have gone out every night this week with this person or that. "Christina wants us to have dinner with her and Will she said she had some huge news for us." I smile at her she's so beautiful. She doesn't know I already know the huge news is that Will proposed. He came to me a couple of weeks ago asking me how I did it.
Hey guys enjoy this flash back more to come when I have time time write
Flashback. Tris and Tobias point of view
Tris,
Hey meet me by the train at 8:30 please. I promise it will be worth it I'm gonna take you somewhere special. I love you see you there.
Love, Tobias
I read the note, it's the third one I have found. I wonder what he is up too. I look at the clock,7:50. I go into our room I look through my clothing. It sure would help if I knew what we were doing tonight. I pick up a pair of leggings and a cute bright red jumper.I add a black belt so the red doesn't make me look amity and head to the bathroom to put on makeup. I curl my hair just enough to make loose waves and make a smoky eye as I'm adding the final touch of red lipstick . I slip on my boots and look at the clock again,8:15. I head out the door grabbing my key sure Tobias forgot his.
Tobias POV
I hope she saw at least one of the ten notes I left. What if she doesn't show.. What if she says no? No I can't think about that. I check my watch for the third time, 8:24. Wow a whole two minuets since I checked the last time. She will be here. I feel arms wrap around me from behind. "Tobias what could you possibly be that deep in thought about that you didn't notice me standing behind you watching you check your watch 7 times?" Her voice is the most beautiful sound. "Nothing Tris, just zoned I guess." Hoping to distract her from questioning me more I lean down and kiss her. She kisses me back full of compassion. I put my hand on the small of her back and pull her closer to me. We are interrupted by the train whistle.
I jump on first the she lands right after me. She comes over and sits right between my legs resting her head on me chest. We sit like that the entire ride. She quickly falls asleep. After about 40 min on the train I wake her. I lightly kiss her head and whisper "Tris, wake up time for your surprise." We both jump off and then I blind fold her. "Tobias what in the world are you doing?" I laugh as I finish tying it. "Hm, well I really want you to be surprised so I'm gonna carry you there blind folded." I kiss her and go grab the basket of food I hid earlier. I pick her up bridal style and kiss her forehead. I carry her the rest of the way there. I had us get off the train early so she would have no idea where we were.