Fluff.
That stuff that flow outs when your dog
guts a teddy bear.
Not cool.
*Shutters* I can't take it anymore! I'm rewriting this story for several reasons.
17 is a boring number
This was my first story and it was awful…don't argue it was. I've spent my entire day editing it.
I listened too much to my critics. While reviews an opinions are good, Ive realized you cannot let them completely determine your story (you write fluff-and too much fluff is just too….fluffy)
While I kept quite a bit of my former story, I've changed it. Considerably.
I could go on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on…
But I shan't.
SO
Without Further Ado, I presenteth to thee, mine most recented updatethed story.
I'm the writer. You're the reader. Readers Read On!
~Case Haley