Happily Ever After?

by magicalunicorn000

The story starts when Carter is having weird things happen to him, like strange Ba dreams and odd messages that he thinks Zia sent to him, asking him to rescue her. Carter resolves he must find Zia before she is plunged into insanity. The revised and rewritten chapter 6 is up! Complete!

1. Chapter 1: Brooklyn

Hi! This is my first ever story! If you like it Hi-five! If you don't... everybody is a critic. So... enjoy! My best friend Zia will do the disclaimer... Take it away Zia!

Zia: (Ah-hem) magicalunicorn000 does not own the Kane Chronicles... How was that?

Me: Perfect!

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January is a very cold month, especially in Brooklyn. There was a foot of snow on the ground, and a bitter cold breeze whipped past my face, turning my nose bright red. I slipped out my wand, quickly raised the door to Amos' mansion, and jumped inside, where it was nice and warm. I skipped steps up to the third floor to my room. It was rather exquisite... (What, I can't use funny adjectives? Be quiet Sadie!) Anyways, my room was elaborately decorated with Egyptian artifacts lining the walls, ancient wands, staffs, and hieroglyphics stood out against the navy blue paint. Sadie says I'm a nerd, but, hey, what's wrong with embracing your heritage?

My room isn't all ancient though. It is also complete with a 47' flat screen TV, an X-box 360, a sweet sound system to crank some tunes, a desk, a lime green DELL laptop, a cool lime green couch, and of course, my awesome loft bed. It's like a bunk bed, but instead of having a bottom bunk, it is a couch underneath, with bookshelves on both sides, holding up my bed on top.

I threw my leather bag in the corner and collapsed on the couch. I pulled my MP3 out of my pocket, scrolled for a while, then finally decided on Stereo Heart. My eyes felt so heavy, I barely got through two minutes of the song before shutting my eyes and drifting off. Unfortunately, my ba had other ideas.

Okay everyone... that is my first ever chapter of my first ever story. I know what you're thinking, what's the plot? Well, every story need an boring introduction chapter, and this is mine. Do not worry, this is not how the whole story will be. There will be plenty of Zarter in the upcoming chapters, but carter needs to f... Oops! No spoilers! You'll have to read on to find what happens! I also need a little help. I can't decide whether I like Salt or Sanubis better, so I need your help. Please review and tell me which Sadie couple you like best. Thanks! Peace out!