Hey guys, this is my first story that I have written. I have no idea what the reactions are going to be but I love fan fiction so I will often update (Not once a day though...) Please write reviews and recommend my stories if you like them. I am writing 3 books at the minute so keep checking my account! I will read your stories if you ask me. Well here it is. Enjoy :) Cinderpelt x
Chapter 1
Dear Diary, Today I appeared in some random forest with some other cats. I found information flooding through my brain. At once I wanted to explore but I had to hunt for the clan and feed the elders. I had no idea how I know this exactly, it just felt natural. I became an apprentice 3 days ago and my mentor (Redtail) took me to the training hollow to start practising my moves. I wanted to go to the river separating us from River Clan but Erin Hunter hadn't written that in yet. Bluestar, she's our clan leader, received some dumb prophecy about how fire would save the clan. That's just stupid! I HATE fire. That is one of the first things our mothers tell us, (Fire = bad!) But anyway, being an apprentice is hard, well at least I don't have a life like Ravenpaw. He's scared stiff must days, but he's my friend so I don't care. I don't blame him either, Tigerclaw's a cat you need to look out for! He is the most know-it-all, "I'm the best" kind of cat around. But one thing's for sure, he is totally not a Chuck Norris type! Scourge is you say Erin Hunter? Excuse me Erin, whose diary is this here? Oh who cares. Anyway, he'll claw your ears off for nothing, no literally I mean it. He made me pick fleas of the elders the other day for missing a rabbit! Sandpaw and Dustpaw are trouble though (they're the other apprentices by the way.) I don't know what those to do apart from criticize everyone and talk sarcastically about me and Ravenpaw. Life here is pretty good though... UNTIL! Yep, you guessed it. Firestar *cough cough* I mean Rusty came to the clan. (? Rusty becomes leader? Oh god.) How do I even know that? The truth is I do secretly get annoyed at that fiery cat. But first I'll tell you how it happened. One day I was out catching prey, minding my own business... when I spot this fiery orange pelt sitting in the bush sniffing nothing. Honestly, did he see a mouse 'cause if he did he must be blind. There were absolutely NO prey scents there. As I was saying, well he was across the border line so what'd you expect me to do? I pounced. And surprisingly, he fought back. I suddenly recognised the scent. A kittypet. I snarled at him - like a boss. (Oh yeah, sorry Ravenpaw I forgot thats your line.) I've got to admit he had pretty good moves, but what do you expect from a character who turns out to: (SPOILER ALERT)
1. Save the clan from most certain death
2. Save the clan from dogs
3. Save the clan from the fire
4. Illegally fall in love with a medicine cat (like a boss)
5. Illegally feeds RiverClan (with me)
6. Then mate with a cat who practically hissed at us all during our time as apprentices
7. Kills the evil Scourge
8. Becomes clan leader
9. Has two extremely cute and important kits (Squirrelflight & Leafpool)
10. Mentor one of the evilest cats in the whole entire forest!
11. Owwwwwwwww, Erin Hunter was that really necessary, ok ok I'll stop saying spoilers now
12. Oh, and Fires... Owwwwwww!
Back to the story. He actually nearly beat me. I said nearly. Don't think I was beaten. All of a sudden, Bluestar and Whitestorm appeared and offered the cat into the clan. All that hard work for nothing! Then there was this boring lecture from Bluestar bla bla bla... Finally, we left the cat to go back to his beloved twolegs. He had actually seemed like a pretty nice cat. Back at camp, I dreamt of mice and orange coloured toms that night. So that's basically the last week or so.
Bye for now, Greystripe :)
Hello again, so what did you think? Should I continue? Just a rough idea that I wrote when I was bored. Please leave a review :)