This is my first fanfiction so sorry if it's bad D: Please review etc because I'd love to know what you think! Enjoy.
Everyone falls silent, waiting. Eric steps to the side to uncover the screen, his heavy footsteps making the only sound in the room. His fierce expression makes me nervous as I sit still and silent with the rest of Dauntless, and I can't help but wipe my sweaty palms on my jeans – an old habit. The names begin to appear on the screen.
"First: Tris Prior"
I let out a huge sigh of relief as my fellow initiates clap me on the back, pleased too with their own acceptance into Dauntless.
"We're in!" I shout. I see Tobias making his way over, a huge grin on his face. He pulls me into a hug and I let my body relax. He doesn't seem to care that people are staring.
"Well done, Tris." He whispers to me as he pulls away. I smile at him and he smiles back. Nothing could ruin this moment. I see him glance at my lips and start to lean in, but everything stops. The lights flicker and go out.
o o o
I am awoken by the sound of people talking, but my eyes don't open.
"But what's wrong with moths, Christina?" a male voice teases.
"They're horrible! Their papery wings and their little bug bodies! Ugh!" a female voice responds.
Someone snorts. "Pansycake…"
"Hey! Don't be mean to my girlfriend, Uriah. Tell him, Four!" another boys says.
"Shh!" someone silences them, "I think she's awake!"
My eyelids feel lighter and I manage to open them. I am greeted by four faces.
"Thank heavens you're alive! I thought you were dead!" a boy with dark skin and brown hair says dramatically. The willowy girl next to him elbows him in the ribs.
"How are you feeling? You hit your head pretty hard." This comes from a blonde boy; his green eyes showing his concern. The fourth person - an older, more muscular boy with dark hair - tries to smile. I look around at the unfamiliar faces, and then scan the room. Where am I? I can hear my heart beating loudly in my ears. I bring my hand up to my head, feeling dizzy.
"What?" my voice is hoarse and it comes out like a whisper. I clear my throat. "W-Who are you?"
Yeah… so that's the first chapter. Did you like it? Should I write more?