Hey and welcome to my first English fanfiction (OMG ENGLISH)!

I'm from Germany and I wrote this FF 3 years ago, so the ages aren't the right one in here.

I hope you'll read the story anyway :D

Have fun and please let me know what you think, if I should translate more and so on :)

Greets

Characters and prologue:

Name: Nils Allen Stewart Jr.
Nickname: Booboo
Age: (15)16 (21.1.1994)
Haircolor: Black
Hairlength: Short
Eyecolor: Brown

Name: Trent Heaven Stewart
Nickname: Fivel
Age: 13 (4.11.1996)
Haircolor: Black
Hairlength: until the shoulder blade
Eyecolor: Brown

Name: Rachel Leeds
Nickname: Honey
Age: 14 (1.1.1996)
Haircolor: Darkbrown
Hairlength: Until her hip
Eyecolor: Green-Brown

Name: Davin Smith
Age: 16 (25.12.1993)
Haircolor: Black
Hairlength: Medi-Long
Eyecolor: Green-Brown

Honey´s point of view:
"Come on, Rachel! We don't have all the time it the world!"
Completely exhausted I pressed the recording button and sat down on the white sofa right next to Fivel.
"Hey guys, here are Fivel and Rachel." We started the video.
"So.. We thought we could make a new video and besides..." Fivel meant - "It's a special day!" I said and sounded a blue and yellow striped horn.
"You wanna know why?" Fivel asked. She looked at me.
"So... Today, ten years ago Fivel and I met the first time on a playground. Since then we're best friends!" I said, looking into the camera.
Fivel puffs out paper streamers and wrapped them around me.
"Yeah, as you can see I've always been a slave of my better half. She took away my toys, too!" I said laughing.
"Psst, shut up! By the way, what we wanted to say, or what we wanted to remind you of: Tomorrow is my dearest brother's birthday!" Fivel announced.
"And we thought we could surprise him with a video. So, film yourself, wherever, with whomsoever you like and wish him all the best!" I continued.
"So yeah, we want to see as many videos as possible! See you then, cuties!" We said goodbye and turned off the camera.

"I can't believe Booboo's sixteen tomorrow!" I said, laughing, while Fivel uploaded the video.
"Well, otherwise we wouldn't be sitting here, waiting for his guests. Besides, Boo's got a mate, his name is Tom or so, and I think he's cute..."
"Oh, Fivel... They're all sixteen or seventeen! They don't want to have such a little fruit like you, I'm sorry!"
"Little fruit? Well Honey, I'll give you this little fruit!" She said laughing loudly.
Honey's my nickname. I don't know why, it just happened.
"Yes, maybe, noo.." I mumbled.

I stood up and went to the large mirror in Fivel's simply designed room.
But it was luxurious, anyway. She had a two meter wide waterbed and many other accessories.
I pulled out my cosmetics and refreshed my makeup.
"Well and for whom are you styling yourself? If just sixteen and seventeen year olds are going to be here?" Fivel asked sarcastically.
Yeah, if only you knew..., I thought.

Okay, thank you for your attention :)

Hoping for one or two reviews, so I get to know if I should translate more..

Bye xx