Okay, I'm normally not the type of person to do this kind of thing, but I've been in a bad mood today, my readers know why, and this person TOTALLY just made my day : so, I would normally take even this well, but, since she insulted all my readers as well, I'd like you to enjoy it, and since they don't read mail, i hope they read this, since they consider themselves a god or something and think it is their quest to get rid of bad fanfiction in the Fruba gallery (My mission: To seek out every nasty, bad or just plain ugly piece of fanfiction and put them in my growing collection of the Worst Fanfics Ever.
Authors can either leave their pathetic fic the way it is so that it can be a monument of their epic failure as a fanfiction writer, Or they can do us (those who care about fanfiction anyway) all a favor and delete their crap off of this site to make room for decent fanfics.
Or, if they actually give a shit about their writing, they may make the wise choice to REVISE their story and making it illegible enough to read and be called "fanfiction".) these are their words exactly, taken from their page, however, this person has no stories written, so I don't feel the need to be totally offended, and yet I do. Anyway, this is what they said to me, word for word:
(Um, not that I have any offense against yaoi or yuri, but that was very poor in quality. There was no description, the pace was too fast, and the characters were just...out of it. This is very unbelievable to me. I'm not flaming this, I'm just pointing out that you could have done better, yet you didn't. :( It's a shame when authors don't try their best and put whatever junk they think is good up. It's even sadder when readers are actually turned on by such crap.) I do believe this was an insult to me and my readers, so I hope you won't mind me posting it, I'm sure I'll run into them again. I'm not sure if she hates all my work, or just "protecting you" but I plan to find out. I did report her, and hopefully something is done. Thank you for bearing with me. I hope you enjoy the story anyway X3.XXXXXXXXXX
"If you want to keep a pet, you must clip it's wings."
Kyo walked down the hall, smiling as each of his dolls' walked by, each one waving as they did.
"I'll see you all after your 'tune up'" Kyo smiled as they all left to go to the spa.
"Bye master Kyo!"
"Good bye." Kyo went inside and went to his room, eyes landing on the one doll that remained in the house. The 'doll', as Kyo referred to all his sex slaves, was the only boy doll. The boy had lavender eyes, and soft moonlit hair.
"Hello Moon-baby." Kyo smirked, going over to the boy.
"So nice of you to stay with me." The boy glared.
"Only because I'm chained to the fucking bed!" He screamed, struggling.
"You're pretty, you don't need a spa." Kyo grabbed the boy's face kissing him. He struggled, chains rattling.
"Let me go!"
"Aw, my sweet Yuki, why would I let you go?" Kyo kissed his neck, "I like you so much right here."
"Asshole." Kyo glared and grabbed Yuki by his hair.
"Such awful words should never be spoken by a face of such beauty." Kyo smirked. "Maybe I should get you a lovely dress to go with that LOVELY attitude. And maybe a pretty little collar, so i won't have to chain you to the bed by your hands anymore." Yuki kicked Kyo between his legs. The orange-haired man growled and slapped him.
"Learn some respect!" Yuki struggled.
"I'm not your doll!" Kyo froze and Yuki lightly shook before Kyo grabbed the nearest object, a candle stick, and struck Yuki across the face.
"You ARE my doll, you better get used to it!" Kyo stood up and left the room, leaving the smaller man to cry alone.
'Where did you go?'
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Kyo in the bedroom with the candle stick XD I laugh every time i read that part, as sad as it is. Hope you all enjoyed. And make sure you get "turned on" XD