Ok…. This is my first fan fiction so, be nice please. But, I take constructive criticism pretty well, so here you go.
I stared blankly out the window of his truck. The wind was whipping through my hair. It reminded me that I was saying good-bye. I rolled the window up trying to forget. The airport was only 15 minutes away now, I had to say something. I took a deep breathe and gathered up my courage.
"Dylan, I don't know what you want to hear. I'm sorry ok? This wouldn't work out. I can't stay here on my own and you know good and well that Renee wouldn't let me stay with your family." It came out in a jumble I hoped he would understand what I was saying. I loved him. I was moving to the ever rainy town in the Olympic peninsula of Forks. I visited my dad, Charlie, there every summer for the first fourteen years of my life. It wasn't until the past three years that I put my foot down and made him go vacation with me in California.
"Is that so? You know that Renee wouldn't have gone anywhere with Phil if you hadn't have said you'd move in with Charlie. Look, I'm sorry. I love you, Bella. I'm just going to miss you so much. I can't stand it." Dylan had tears in his eyes. I hated seeing him sad like this I had to do something.
"Maybe now you can go out on a date with that Rebecca girl who likes you so much." That was a big mistake on my part.
"FINE! Bells, I can't believe you just said that! I always knew you were jealous of her! That is just fine. I will go on a date with Rebecca and Rebecca and I will be closer than you and I ever were!" That cut me deeply. I was always jealous of Rebecca. She was so beautiful and I was so average. Dylan was so angry his face was red. He pulled over on the side of the road and took four deep breaths, then pulled back onto the road. We were at the airport now and I was crying silently. He got out of the truck and got my two bags out of the bed of the truck and came around and opened my door. We were silent all the way to security.
"Bella," Dylan looked at me and smiled sadly. "I love you. And I'll miss you so much. But this is good-bye." He gave me a kiss lightly.
"I love you too, Dylan." Tears rolled down my cheeks. I closed my eyes only to gather up the courage to say something else and when I opened them to talk he was already walking away. I gave up and said good-bye to the hot Phoenix air.
When the plane landed in Port Angeles it was raining. I climbed out of the plane and saw my Dad standing there.
"Hey! DAD!" I called to my dad. It had almost been a year until I had seen him.
"Hey Bells! I see you haven't changed much. Before I forget, close your eyes. I've got a surprise for you!"