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Hi everyone my first my first proper long fic, so please be nice, but I'm open to suggestions and criticisms. Please review and tell me what you think if, everyone likes it, I'll carry on…..deal?

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It was unusually quiet when Gibbs walked into the bullpen each of his agents had their heads down. Unusual? Tony was silent but had what anyone who knew him would know as a dirty smirk. The I know something you don't know look – bad news for either Ziva or McGee.

Gibbs cleared his voice, only Ziva looked up

"Anything?"

"Afraid not"

"ARGRA"

"Gibbs I can't do it, I'm sorry, please don't make me, I'll change I promise!"

"Sorry Ziva mandatory, no case, no excuses"

Finally Tony looked up,

"It's your fault, you hit a suspect in the groin, I heard the pain"

"For the last time Tony, he was being uncooperative, all he did was ask to go to the toilet, you were the one who kept saying no!!"

"He wouldn't say please"

Tony eyed Ziva angrily; it was her fault they had to go to sensitivity training, again.

"Don't look at me like that DiNozzo, or I'll poke your eyes out with a bullet"

Suddenly Ziva's computer binged, Tony stood quietly to see who it was.

Israeli Chick has been invited to join hotguy346 and McGorgeous

McGorgeous- Ziva thought you might want to see this!

Underneath was a picture, an incriminating picture.

Israeli Chick- Where did you find it McGee?

McGorgeous- Rather not say…. Sorry

Israeli Chick- Has Tony seen it?

Hotguy346 rejoined conversation

McGorgeous- No

Israelichick– Good it stays that way, or me and Abby shall have a little

chat, about bullets.

Hotguy346- What? Me confused?

Israelichick- Shut up idiot

Hotguy346-Sad

Forensicfighter- Nice pic Zi.

Israeli chick- You've seen it?????

Forensicfighter- Yeah, I found it on the computer, very good pic, take it yourself?

Hotguy346- Please someone tell me what's going on!

Israelichick- Yes actually. Please don't show anyone!!

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Forensicfighter- I won't one condition, you go see Brain matter with me!

Israelichick- Then you'll delete it?

Forensicfighter- Yeah of course!

Isrealichick-Deal!

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------------------------------Forensicfighter has logged off----------------------

McGorgeous- Guys?

McGorgeous- Fine bye then!!

---------------------------------McGorgeous has logged off----------------------

"Gibbs"

"Jenny?"

"I need to talk to you and all of the team excluding Jimmy in my office"

"Ok, whats this about"

"I'll tell you in a minute"

With Jenny walked away, with Gibbs sending Tony to fetch Ducky and McGee fetch Abby as Gibbs and Ziva made their way upstairs.

Within 5 minutes everyone had assembled in Director Shepard office.

"What's this about Jenny?"

"We have a problem, Honourably discharged Navy Captain Mariano and his wife Lorelai were found murdered in their home last night, their 4 year old daughter was found cowering in a cupboard, we need to get their and find their killer. This is high priority and highly secretive, no one at NCIS expect you, will find out or be involved in this case or any information related to it. Any questions?"

"Yeah were do they live?"

"California, Orange County"

"WooHoo, road trip"

"No Tony, high priority, private jet. Everyone go home and pack for about a month away we leave at 21:00, everyone goes even you Abby"

"Yes, I never get to go anywhere!!"

"How are you planning on us running the investigation Jenny?"

NCIS, OC will be assisting as they are already involved!"

"Off you go. Go pack. We meet here at 20:30"

As the team left the directors office only one person spoke.

"Pack your bikini and dresses Ziva, I plan on having some fun!!"

So that's the first chapter, tell me what you think, should I carry on?

Review!!! PLEASE!!