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"Team, we have a new case. It's in Salt Lake City, Utah where a serial killer is on the rampage and the local police can't handle it. They called us in because the killer kidnaps white males between the ages of 29-33, the unsub keeps them alive for three weeks then tortures them to death, then dumps their body pieces in surrounding parks. So far there have been no witnesses and nothing at the crime scenes to help us," Hotch told his team of profilers.
Three hours later the team has loaded up on the plane and is headed towards their next case. In the plane Reid is playing chess against Morgan when Reid realizes that all the victims so far are the same age as him, have the same colored hair and eyes, about the same height as him, and looks just as skinny as him. He didn't want to jump to conclusions so he kept the news to himself until he knew for sure.
"Reid, it's your move and I'm pretty sure that you won too since I'm no match for you Pretty Boy," Morgan snapped Reid out of his thoughts.
"Oh, sorry about that I was just lost in thought and you are right I have you check mated and it's Reid not Pretty Boy Morgan," Reid said kind of irritated at Morgan for calling him Pretty Boy yet again. Before Morgan could reply however; they landed at the airport in Salt Lake City and had to get started on their newest case.
They all got off the plane and loaded into cars headed to the police department to get started on the case and to look over all the evidence and case files to start getting a profile on the unsub and the geographical profile. "Reid you will be working on the geographical profile and seeing if you can find any pattern for the kidnappings or the dump site. J.J. and Emily you guys go interview the victim's families and to see if there is anything there that we can work with. Morgan, Rossi, and I will go to the latest crime scene to see if the killer left anything behind," Hotch dismissed everyone.
"Emily, don't you think that all the victims so far look uncannily like Reid?" J.J. asked her friend Emily. J.J. got this weird look from Emily telling her that she didn't want to think about things like that because then the memories of Reid being kidnapped by Tobias come rushing back to her like a bad nightmare.
"It's too early in the case to tell and anyways we have never had a case here so it's unlikely that the unsub knows anything about us or Reid. He is probably killing people who look like him because of personal reasons that triggered all of this. The first victim had no immediate family in the area, but he did have close friends and acquaintances that we should talk to." Emily told J.J.
They got nothing new from questioning the victim's friends and family so they called Hotch to let him know that they were headed back to the police station to start going through the case files for any new leads. When they got to the station they saw Reid working hard on the geographical profile, "I noticed that he dumps the bodies within a half a mile of each other that looks like it is circling around the city limits. He also kidnaps in what appears to be random places, but looks like it to stays close together around the city limits. I told Hotch, but what doesn't make sense is that this last victim was found out of the circle like patter and was kidnapped from outside the city limits," Reid informed them.
"Maybe the real killer noticed that he was making a pattern that would be recognized and decided to change so that way no one could make a pattern and he was safe to continue his sick demented game of his," J.J. pitched in. Reid looked at her and then got that look in his eyes where he was on to something and needed to be alone to finish his thinking process in order to solve the case yet again.
After a few hours the lead detective came in and declared, "We just found another body that we believe fits the profile of the other murders, but the victim wasn't killed the same way as the others, but fits the victim profile. Do you want to head out to the crime scene to see if you can find anything useful that might just solve this case and put that sick bastard away for life?" SSA J.J. and SSA Emily went to the crime scene with the detective after they left a voicemail to Hotch to inform him of the new development.
"Hotch, I was looking over the case files, the evidence that was collected, the geographical profile, the victim profile, and a few other things and I think I know why the unsub is killing white males between the ages of 29-33 with brown hair and brown eyes. I think it's a female who was recently raped, abused, assaulted, or violently attacked. I also believe that she has an existing record with the police and may not have a steady job at the moment that is anti-social," Reid informed Hotch.
Hotch told Reid, "That's good work Reid, but we need to make it easier and more narrow for Garcia to pick through. Call Garcia though and see what she can come up with that much information and see if you can narrow it down even further." So Reid called Garcia and she said that she would work with it and see what came up and that she would also see if the victims had anything else in common with each other.
What the team didn't currently know is that the unsub was watching them work and listening in to their conversations because his plan was finally being put into action after almost 7 years of planning the perfect crime. As the unsub was walking home he whispered to himself, "Very soon you will be mine, no one will be able to take you away from me this time and that we will finally have our happily ever after ending like we always planned on. I'm sorry for taking my time on getting you back, but don't worry we will make up for all that lost time and then you will always be mine until death do us part."
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