This is my first attempt to write a fan-fic so it might not be too good. This is an Eviatro one for all you Evan haters out there!!! So if you LOVE Evan or pietro please DONT READ!!! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!! Kurt rating: 4/10 Scott rating: 2/10 Kitty rating:6/10 Evan rating:10/10 Pietro rating:10/10 based on how much they appear. *****= scene change - - - - - -=Fade out ++++++=Fade in ~_______________________________________________________________________~ +++++++++ We see Pietro in a comic shop called Stanly's comic's looking at a comic of "It came from hell!" As he walks up to the counter he notices a bag of pixie stix. "Wow a jumbo size bag of pixie stix!" puts it on the conter along whith his comic 'shold I really be buying this? I mean sugar makes me reeeeeeal hyper' Cashier: That be all for yea'? Pietro: Thats it. ***** Meanwhille Evan, (dressed really stupid in tight girly pants and tank top) riding his skateboard, was coming up to a sign that read Stanly's comic's. Pietro coming out of the shop,eating pixie stix, crashed into Evan. KRASH!! Evan: "Whoa! Dude! Pietro watch where your goin'!" Pietro: "Me! You're the one not lookin' Daniels! Evan:"That does it Pietro!" Spikes emerge from his body Evan:"Prepare to be spiked!" Pietro: "Yea sure, love to but I gotta go" Dissapears with a rush of wind,Evan looks down and sees a pixie stick. Evan: "A pixie stick? Sugar mixed with pietro's hyperness..........Oh no! Pietro! ***** ~At the brotherhood house~ Pietro bursts in Pietro: "hey guys i'm home.....Guy's?" - - - - - - - Well thts it for chapter one I know it's short but I'll have chapee two up soon so please R&R!