Hello everypony! My name is Robert, and I would like to thank you for showing interest in my fanfiction, this is my first fanfiction so it's probably not the best, This fanfiction will be a series of stories starring me and my girlfriends OCs, Loopy and Faith, I have quite a few stories planned for this fanfiction and i hope you stick around and enjoy the fanfiction!
Be sure to favorite and review! it'll help me out a lot!
Without further adieu, lets jump right in!
Chapter 1: Welcome to Ponyville!
The Conductor of the train called out to everypony "Next stop Ponyville!" He said
The train began to come to a stop, Strangely, Only 2 ponies came off the train
The first pony was a Male Pegasus, he was Red with a dark brown mane and brown eyes.
The second pony to come out was a Female Unicorn, She was Light blue with a light brown mane and brown eyes. The Pegasus turned to the Unicorn: "Here we are, Ponyville..." He said
The Unicorn breathed in the fresh air: "This is the perfect place for us to live!" She then tackled the Pegasus in a bear hug: "Where did you find out about this place Loopy?!"
"I heard a couple ponies talk about it in Canterlot, I heard it was very peaceful here." Loopy stated a smile on his face "From what I heard, it sounded perfect for us Faith!"
Faith was really happy, almost too happy, ponies started looked at the Unicorn causing a scene
Loopy felt a blush creep onto his face: "Okay, you can let go now..."
Faith suddenly let go, blushing furiously "Um, Shall we start looking for a house?" Loopy nodded "Yeah I think so."
As they walked around the new environment, they suddenly saw... something pink bouncing around, It turned out to be a pink pony with poofy hair, She looked at us for a minute and then let out a huge gasp, then she ran off.
Loopy just scratched his head "That was... certainly something." he then just shrugged it off.
Loopy and Faith continued making small talk, when Loopy spotted a yellow house with a red roof he thought it would be perfect for them, it was fairly small but big enough for a small family. This is perfect! Loopy thought to himself, he then nudged Faith who looked at Loopy "What is it?" Loopy pointed his hoof to the home and asked "What do you think about this house Faith?"
Faith looked over it for a bit then nodded "I think its perfect!"
Loopy smiled then looked in his bit bag, I hope we have enough for it! he thought to himself
Loopy looked around for where he could buy their possible new house
He then thought he should ask for directions, he saw another Pegasus flying by and then attempted to get their attention "Excuse me!" he shouted up at the Pegasus, the Pegasus heard him and flew back down, it was a mare with rainbow colored hair violet eyes and a blue coat she looked at Loopy "May I help you?"
He cleared his throat and asked "Do you know where I can go to buy houses around here?" The Pegasus looked at Loopy and then asked "Are you new here?" Loopy nodded "My name is Loopy and this is my... friend Faith" He kind of hesitated on that last part, but the Pegasus didn't notice
She then answered their question "You can buy a house over at the city hall." She then pointed in the direction to go, Loopy nodded and started to walk off when the Pegasus shouted at Loopy"My names Rainbow dash by the way!" Loopy rolled his eyes, not wanting to deal with somepony else right now." He turned around "Nice to meet you." He said with an annoyed tone
Rainbow raised an eyebrow but then flew off afterwards, She's finally gone... He thought to himself
He and Faith walked into the City hall, it was pretty impressive on the inside, but Loopy was more focused on getting that house for the mare he secretly loved, He never admitted it because he's afraid she'll reject him.
They walked in to be greeted by the mayor, She smiled at them "How may I help you?" she said, Loopy responded "Hi there, I'd like to purchase an estate here." He said, sounding a little bit in a rush, thankfully the mayor didn't notice "Oh! Well come sit down!" she said, they both sat down and looked at the mayor. "So what house are you looking to buy?" She asked
"We saw this a house on our way there and I thought it would be perfect!" Loopy responded, sounding a little excited
The Mayor nodded, opening a small book that had pictures of each house that was for sale, She handed to Loopy and Faith and they flipped the pages until they found the house they wanted "There." He said pointing his hoof at the house, The Mayor took the book back and then nodded "Alright this estate is gonna cost 1000 bits" Loopy looked down at his bag he sighed with relief, they had just enough for it thanks to his parents giving them about 1200 bits to spend, he counted 1000 bits and handed them to the mayor, She smiled and took the bits
The Mayor then put a piece of paper in front of Loopy and Faith "I'm gonna need both of you to sign here"
Faith took the quill with her magic and signed it, Then Loopy took the quill and signed it with a smile on his face.
"Alright you're all set!" The Mayor gave Loopy the key to their new home, Loopy took it "Thank you very much." and with that they both walked out
Twilight and Spike were arranging books in the castle library then all of a sudden Rainbow Dash flew in, She looked a bit ticked off.
"Rainbow, Are you alright?" Twilight said with a worried look on her face.
Rainbow Dash indeed was bothered about something.
"Well there are a few new ponies in town, in fact one of them asked directions on where they could buy a house, but he didn't seem very friendly." Rainbow said with an annoyed look "He didn't even thank me!"
"Maybe he just needs time to adjust to the new environment." Twilight said
Rainbow sighed "Maybe, but that isn't an excuse for not thanking me!"
"We should introduce ourselves when they gets settled in, I'm sure he'll be in a better mood by then." Twilight reassured Rainbow.
Loopy and Faith walked to their new home, Loopy had a big smile on his face, He was so excited of finally leaving Canterlot and moving into somewhere calm and peaceful. Loopy took another breath of the air "This air is more fresher then Canterlot." He said, Faith nodded "Yeah, and the environment is incredible!" Loopy smiled Ugh when will i be able to man up and tell her how i feel!? He thought to himself then sighed She's just so... beautiful, UGH SNAP OUT OF IT LOOPY, We're just friends, that probably will never change... Loopy then looked down at the ground with a frown.
Faith saw this and went over to him. "Are you okay Loopy? You look a little down..." Loopy instantly put on a fake smile "No i'm fine..." Faith gave him a smile but still seemed worried.
Loopy then unlocked the door, but it was already unlocked? Strange... He opened it and what waited for him inside nearly gave him a heartattck
A bunch of ponies yelled out "SURPRISE!" Causing Loopy to jump up and fall back on his flank, He then saw a familiar looking pink pony hop over to him, he instantly recognized her Crap... He thought
"Hey there! My name is Pinkie Pie! You remember me don't you?" Pinkie said up in his face, He groaned "Yes I remember you, and i have this thing called Personal space..." He said clearly annoyed, Shockingly Pinkie was unfazed "Oh sorry!" She stepped away "The moment I saw you I thought to myself, I've never seen these ponies around here, they must be new cause if they weren't new then I would have recognized you, And then i ran off to plan a "Welcome to Ponyville" PARTY!" She shouted the last word really loudly, Faith laughed "Thank you Pinkie, That's so sweet of you!" Loopy rolled his eyes Guess I'll have to try to avoid blowing up, though it'll be hard... He thought, Instantly he saw a Pegasus with a Rainbow colored mane flying through the air, He instantly recognized her as that Pegasus he asked for directions, Loopy didn't remember her name though It was Rainbow something... Loopy just shrugged it off, he'll find out later.
Halfway through the party, Loopy heard a pop, he turned to see... this weird creature, Loopy stared at the creature.
Pinkie hopped up to the creature and began talking to it, Loopy couldn't hear what they were saying, but Loopy instantly froze and the strange creature flew towards him
"Hey there! My name is Discord!" The Creature introduced himself, Holding out his Paw for a hoofshake
Loopy just stared at it, then he slowly put his hoof into the creatures paw and immediately got shocked, Loopy cried out "OUCH!"
Discord started laughing really hard "Oh, the look on your face, PRICELESS" He continued laughing
Loopy took a deep breath to make sure he didn't blow up yet and then asked "What are you exactly?"
Discord wiped away a tear and answered "I am a Draconequus."
Loopy stared at him "A What?"
"A Draconequus" Discord repeated himself, He was growing impatient with Loopy though.
"A Draconequus?" Loopy repeated Discord
"You got it, Whats your name anyways?" Discord asked
"M-My name is L-Loopy" Loopy stuttered still trying to process what was standing in front of him
Discord sighed "You're probably scared of me, I don't blame you." Discord's ears dropped to his head and he started to walk away
Loopy instantly felt bad, even if he tried to prank him "Wait." he said causing Discord to turn around
"You're not that scary, just misunderstood." Loopy said in a surprisingly calm voice
Discord instantly perked up "Really? You don't mind that I look like this?" Discord said in an excited tone
"Well... It'll take some getting used too, but I really don't mind, You look kind of cool actually!" Loopy said, trying to cheer up the Draconequus, It seemed to be working
Discord instantly pulled Loopy into a hug "Oh thank you!" Discord was hugging Loopy very tightly, Loopy was gasping for air "Can't... breathe..." Discord instantly dropped Loopy "Whoops sorry, Guess i don't know my own strength." Discord laughed awkwardly
Loopy looked up at him, Actually smiling "Don't worry about it!" Loopy said, putting his hoof up
The party was going on, Loopy was sitting down with Faith who seemed to be enjoying herself
Suddenly he looked up and saw 6 mares walking up to him, he instantly stiffened
"Hello there." Said a Lavender mare with a horn and wings, Horns and wings... A princess!? Loopy thought to himself.
Loopy answered, he stuttered a bit though "H-Hi There..." Really Loopy? That's the best you got? Come on! you're in the presence of royalty!
The Lavender mare smiled "My name is Twilight Sparkle, Nice to meet you, these are my friends."
Twilight gestured to her friends, and they each introduced themselves
The first to introduce herself was an orange mare wearing a hat "Howdy partner, My name is Applejack" She said in a southern accent
Then a white unicorn with a purple mane went up to him "Hello there, My name is Rarity, Pleasure to meet you!" She said in a Posh accent
Then the next one to introduce herself was a yellow mare with a pink mane, She seemed shy, "My name is... fluttershy..." She said her name so softly that he couldn't hear it, So Loopy tried to get her to be less shy.
"Don't worry, You can come out." Loopy said softly too her
She showed herself a little more and repeated "My name... is Fluttershy
"Fluttershy?" Loopy asked, She nodded
Then a mare with a Rainbow Colored mane flew up "I'm pretty sure you remember me." She said in a rude way
Loopy rolled his eyes "Well, you were the mare who gave me directions to the city hall."
The mare looked at him "What's my name?"
Loopy just looked at her "I don't remember, It didn't really seem important for me too." He said in a rude way
"My name... Is Rainbow Dash" She said through her teeth
"Alright, I'll remember it this time..." He said in an annoyed way
Pinkie hopped in next "My name is Pinkie Pie, Though i'm sure you already knew that!" She said, she seemed really hyper
Then he noticed a small dragon in the back, Twilight noticed where we was glancing "Oh I completely forgot to introduce you to Spike!" She said and then moved out of the way to reveal a small dragon walking towards him
Loopy instantly froze Oh my goodness... HE'S SO ADORABLE! Loopy thought to himself, Actually smiling again, Rainbow Dash noticed this and her mouth instantly gaped open, she never expected to see him smile
"Hello there, My name is Spike!" He held out his claw for him to shake, Loopy didn't hesitate and grabbed it to shake it.
"I've never seen a dragon before, it is such a pleasure to meet you!" Loopy said to Spike, Causing him to blush slightly, Loopy then let go of his claw, and slapped his own face "Oh Sweet Celestia, I've neglected to introduce myself, My name is Loopy, and this is my friend Faith!" He gestured at Faith who had cake in her mouth, she swallowed it and cleaned her face "Nice to meet ya!" Loopy was blushing so much staring at Faith
But then Discord Teleported out of nowhere and exclaimed "Aww are you two in love?" Loopy and Faith were both red as tomatoes "N-No! Why would you think that!?" Loopy said, clearly embarrassed
Everypony then laughed, though Loopy sat there still blushing My life is about to get interesting He thought to himself
Soon after the party ended and everyone left, Faith and Loopy were looking around the house
"Well... That was certainly a welcome..." Loopy said as he unpacked his suitcase
Faith nodded "I agree, I've never had so much fun in my life!" She exclaimed
Loopy smiled "Well, now that the party is over we can finally get some sleep, I am beat." Loopy said as he yawned
Faith looked at Loopy, she seemed concerned about something "Can you try to not be rude to ponies please?
Loopy looked at Faith, kind of shocked, "I'm not rude!" Loopy said
"You were rude to Rainbow Dash before we bought the house, and you were rude at the party, Please try to be nicer, For me?" Faith was looking at Loopy with a frown, Loopy sighed "Fine I'll try to not blow up in front of them."
"Thank you." Faith gave him a hug, Loopy blushed slightly
Best. Night. Ever...
Hope you enjoyed the first chapter! Now lemme explain a few things about my OC
First off, He really is a nice guy, He's just a little snobby and rude, which I will explain in another chapter, don't worry he won't be rude and snobby forever, Once he learns about the magic of FRIENDSHIP!
Now about my Girlfriends OC, She's the one that tries to keep Loopy from blowing up in front of everyone, Loopy has made a few friends, but he and Rainbow Dash won't get along until later in the story, anyways, Hope you enjoy! I'll work on the second chapter tomorrow and hopefully get it out as soon as possible!