Ok this is my first ever fanfiction for Maximum Ride. I do not Own Maximum Ride or any of the characters. James Patterson does.
Warning! Spoilers: This is when Fang decides to leave Max in Maximum Ride 3. The song featured in this is Usher, Burn.
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Chapter 1: Burn
Fangs P.OV.
Girl, understand
why
See it's burning me to hold onto this
I know this is
something I gotta do
But that don't mean I want to
What I'm
trying to say is that I-love-you I just
I feel like this is coming
to an end
And its better for me to let it go now than hold on and
hurt you
I gotta let it burn
I couldn't believe my ears when I heard Max tell Ari to come with us. After all he did to us, all the pain. The numerous times he tried to kill us, and she just offered him a free ticket to just betray us, and kill us. Well, I wasn't going down like that. I love Max, but I wasn't staying around to see Ari rip me apart again.
It's gonna burn for
me to say this
But it's coming from my heart
It's been a long
time coming
But we done been fell apart
Really wanna work this
out
But I don't think ya gonna change ya
Me and Max had argued earlier. I told her to choose between me or Ari, and she refused to leave that confused, sick, 7-year-old, who tried to kill us about….A hundred times, behind. I flew off, and now, I'm heading back. I had a plan, and it didn't include Ari.
I do but you
don't
Think it's best we go our separate ways
Tell me why I
should stay in this relationship
When I'm hurting baby, I ain't
happy baby
Plus theres so many other things I gotta deal with
I
think that you should let it burn
"I've decided to go my own way. Almost anyone is welcome to come with me." I told the flock when I returned.
"I think we should all stick together until Fang comes back." Max said to them.
"You guys shouldn't do this." Nudge said, she looked worried, and that was the shortest sentence she had ever said.
When your feeling
ain't the same and your body don't want to
But you know gotta let
it go cause the party ain't jumpin' like it used to
Even though
this might bruise you
Let it burn
Let it burn
Gotta let it
burn
Iggy and Gazzy chose to come with me. Angel, Nudge, Total, and of course that poor excuse of an Eraser, chose to stay with Max.
Deep down you know
it's best for yourself but you
Hate the thought of her being with
someone else
But you know that it's over
You know that it was
through
Let it burn
Let it burn
Gotta let it burn
Max just wouldn't listen to me. I didn't trust Ari, and I really hated him being near her.
Sendin' pages I
ain't supposed to
Got somebody here but I want you
Cause the
feeling ain't the same find myself
Callin' her your name
Ladies
tell me do you understand?
Now all my fellas do you feel my
pain?
It's the way I feel
I know I made a mistake
Now it's
too late
I know she ain't coming back
What I gotta do now
To
get my shorty back
Oh oh oh oh
Man I don't know what I'm gonna
do
Without my boo
You've been gone for too long
It's been
fifty-eleven days, um-teen hours
I'mma be burnin' till you return
(let it burn)
Now that me, Iggy and Gazzy had started west, I felt like I was missing something without Max. But I couldn't turn back. She wouldn't let me live it down. Plus, Ari was with her, and I had no clue where they went. I had actually kissed her, and she flew off. But she did say she loved me when she was under that surgery in Dr. Martinez office. I don't understand what's going on in her head.
Max's P.O.V.
When your feeling
ain't the same and your body don't want to
But you know gotta let
it go cause the party ain't jumpin' like it used to
Even though
this might bruise you
Let it burn (let it burn, let it burn, you
gonna learn)
Let it burn (gotta let it burn)
Gotta let it burn
The voice told us to head to England, Europe. What he wanted us to do there, I had no clue. I guess to find some schools and stuff. I felt lost and a little sick to my stomach without Fang on the plane with us. And now that I was on the plane, I couldn't go back to him. Right now I really would. If I could just leave Ari without feeling guilty…
Deep down you know
it's best for yourself but you
Hate the thought of her being with
someone else
But you know that it's over
you know that it was
through
Let it burn
Let it burn
Gotta let it burn
I know that we have a mission. And Fang's idea was just bizarre. He wanted to listen to normal humans and follow their plan to save the world. They haven't been through what we've been through. They won't understand the full story. Sometimes, Fang can be so handsome…I mean stubborn. That did not just come out of me. I did not just think that. I looked over at Angel to see if she heard what I was thinking, but she was just petting Total, both seemed to be half-sleep. I let out a sigh of relief.
I'm twisted cause
one side of me is tellin' me that I need to move on
On the other
side I wanna break down and cry (oh)
I'm twisted cause one side of
me is tellin' me that I need to move on
On the other side I wanna
break down and cry (yeah)
Right now, I was really itching to jump out of this plane and fly back to Fang, but I knew I had a mission. But as soon as I finish it, I was going to hunt him down and return.
Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh
oh So many days, so many hours
Ooh ooh oh (can ya feel me burnin'?)
Ooh ooh ooh oh ooh
oh
I'm still burnin' till you
return
Right now, I wanted to freaking cry. Cry about being separated from Fang. Cry about all the disappointing people and events I've gone through. But I couldn't. I couldn't let the mini flock see me cry, again.
When your feeling
ain't the same and your body don't want to
But you know gotta let
it go cause the party ain't jumpin' like it used to
Even though
this might bruise you
Let it burn
Let it burn
Gotta let it
burn
I closed my eyes on the plane, and let reality sink in. This is what was happening. Ari was going to die soon, I am separated from my best friend Fang, and I'm on a plane to Europe. Oh, and I forgot the wonderful (that's sarcasm by the way) voice.
Deep down you know
it's best for yourself but you
Hate the thought of her being with
someone else
But you know that it's over
You know that it was
through
If only I didn't have to save the world. I know I should be with Fang and the others right now…but that wasn't happening anytime soon. Nope. We had split up.
Let it burn
I really missed those guys right now.
Fang's P.O.V.
If only I could use this blog to track Max, I could see if she and the others are alright. I missed her so much.
Let it burn
Gotta
let it burn
Ok, so what did you guys think…I know it kinda sucks, but bare with me, I never wrote a fanfiction story like Maximum ride before.
