Hello! This is my first fanfiction I am letting people read. It is about my oc, Kyli Mitchel. Constructive Criticism is helpful! Please read and enjoy!
Halloween night and I walked alone in a small forest. I liked this forest. I had always gone to it when I was sad or mad or wanted to get away for a little bit. Besides, forests were hard to come by where I lived.
Sorry, I live in Chicago. My name is Kyli Mitchel. I am 13. Mom and Dad were in the army. Mom was killed in battle, and Dad is a retired officer. I lived with Mom and Dad until I was 4, when my Mom died. Dad retired after that and moved with me back to Chicago. It's kind of an odd place to go after you retire from the army, but that's where Dad met Mom, and where I was born.
Anyway, Dad was away and I didn't feel like going trick-or-treating.
I was walking through the most questionable path I had laid out. I never really got the hang of walking through this path, but it was Halloween and I wanted to take a risk. So, there I was walking.
About halfway through the path I heard a low groan coming from ahead. I stopped for a second, then went on carefully, but it didn't matter. In a open clearing I didn't know existed was a large being.
It was sleeping, it seemed. I walked around to see it's face. It had a big head and only one closed eye. I imeadiatly though 'Cyclopes!' Because of my Ancient Cities Class at school, but cyclopeses wern't real, I thought.
I walked closer to its face when the eye opened and the cyclopes smiled evilly.
Sorry it's short! I'll be posting chapter 2 soon!