Ok Everybody I am not very good at writing stories as you all can tell by looking at what I tried to write. But I normally come up with good ideas I just cant trasfer them from my head to paper but I figured I would through this idea out there for someone to try and write about.
Ok the set requirments are-
Naru/Hina- andyother pairings are good but no harems
Hinata has to have some problem with her family- I know it is always that way but, Hiashi has to be in her corner not against her. In other words the elders are the problem, I would like to see Hiashi trick Naruto into taking Hinata in and if you want you can through Hanabi in on it to.
Before I write this part I want everyone to know that I dont hate Sakura but fore this story idea she has to be kinda the witch. Have her not want to be on the same team as Naruto anymore, reason for is that he either killed Sasuke or brought him back in pretty bad shape.
The Kyubi also has to play apart in all this to, when I first came up with this idea I thought about having Ero-Sannin alter the seal allowing Naruto to use its chakra or having the chakra split between Naruto or Hinata in someway.
Finally have naruto a little smarter than he is and dont make Naruto and Hinata' relationship develope to slow but not to fast either. As for Sasuke I dont really care for him to much but he make a great bad guy in or out of the village.
