OLS Story 1
"The Stranger at Twilight part 1"
Mistytogepi@hotmail.com By: WaterMyhoshi77
Notes (July 2001)
Okay people, I know that this story may seem corny, but deal with it. I mean give
me a break. This'll be the first one I have put on the web. So though I appreciate
suggestions please don't be too harsh. I have tried, for the most part, to keep my facts
straight, which is kinda hard to do, considering that; I don't know all that much about
"Outlaw Star" which is probably why I find it so interesting. I may have gotten some
names and spelling wrong. Please bear with me.
If you think my story's pointless, boring and full of crap, well…get over it!
Most of the characters in this story are owned by someone who isn't me. I don't
know who created "Outlaw Star", but it definitely wasn't me(but I wish I was that
talented!)! They are being used without permission and all that other junk you have to put
in, but the other characters and story are completely my own, I don't care what any one
says!!! If by any chance my story is similar in any with yours, it is not my fault. I don't
get on the web enough to read other fanfics!
This story has been sent through the spell checker, which I absolutely hate. = P
One last thing, this is a Gene/Suzuka fanfic so if your against them being together
not only will you read a corny fic, but you'll probably hate it. In this case I'd advise
against reading it, but hey, The decisions yours to make. Have a good day! ^_^
Now to the story-
"Gene," Suzuka said softly.
"Yeah?" He asked flipping through channels.
"Where are the others?"
"Well, Jim is out with Mel and Aisha, I think they went out clothes shopping, the poor
guy. Why, don't you remember? You're feeling better since the fight against the pirates,
right? You remembered to put a clean bandage on, right?" He replied looking over at her,
worriedly. It was true she was quite beautiful, long legs, dark hair and eyes, her face was
turning a slight pink, quite pretty, he thought waiting for her answer.
"Because… I just… wanted… to say…" She began to reply.
"Hey were back!" Aisha called.
Suzuka shook her head and sighed, then faded back into the dark depths of her room.
Gene went out to help the others.
-Later that night-
"Hey Mel, this is really a all time best!" Jim exclaimed pointing down at his plate
as Aisha got up to get sixths.
Melfina blushed slightly, "Oh, thank you, but it's nothing really." She replied
nervously, looking down at her plate.
"No, Mel, he's right, this is really good." Suzuka responded, her eyes darting
from her plate to Gene and back.
"But you haven't even tried it yet, w-Oww! Hey that hurt, Gene!" Aisha yowled
as Gene jabbed his booted foot into one of her bare feet.
" I'm sorry, but I've got some…um… unfinished business to take care of, I'll be
back soon." Suzuka said softly turning to leave.
"Wait, do you want the rest of your dinner?" Aisha asked.
"No, you can have it." Suzuka replied, leaving she shut the door quietly behind
her.
"There is defiantly some thing wrong with her. That is the second time this week
she has missed a meal." Jim said after five minutes to make sure she had left.
Gene shrugged, "I don't know, Jim, but she has been acting kind of odd lately,
that much I know for sure."
The others nodded their agreement.
-Six Hours Later-
"Bartender, another." Suzuka said, resting her chin in the palm of her hand.
"You sure, Miss?" He asked slowly.
"Yeah now get me my goddamned drink!" She snapped.
"Bad day, huh?" A man, two seats down, asked.
"More like a bad week." She said, her breath smelled of whiskey, but then again,
his did, too.
"Sounds like you got it worse than me." He replied.
"Yeah now bug off, I want to be alone in my misery."
The man shrugged and turned back to the drink he was nursing.
I've got to get out of this place, she thought downing a shot, she put some money
on the counter and walked out the door, you wouldn't have been able to tell she been
drinking other than from the smell. She headed towards 'Shamarien Bridge' and dove
into the water. She leaped off the bridge to wash away the smell and climbed back out.
Suddenly it felt like she was being torn apart. No, not again this cannot be
happening, she thought. She screamed falling down to the ground; she heard footsteps,
followed by questions. She shook her head trying to clear the image, but felt as though
she couldn't breathe. Slowly her vision came into focus, "Gene?" She asked softly, her
eyes glassy.
He could tell it was so hard for her to breathe and he put one finger over her lips.
She could feel her body piece itself together, She groaned in agony trying sit up.
She was breathing easier now.
"Suzuka, I'm going to call the hospital-" he began, but as soon as he said the word
hospital, she screamed out.
"No! You can't please don't!" She exclaimed loudly.
"Why not?"
"No one, please tell no one, not even the others." She said, her eyes pleading with
him.
"Are you sure?" He asked, "Will you be all right?"
She nodded and stood up, but then stumbled slightly. "I'll be fine, it was just a
little worse today, but I'll be fine, really."
" Okay, but were going out and I'm getting you something else to wear. You're
soaking wet! If you're not careful you might get pneumonia." He said.
She nodded and let him drag her back into the city.
"Why don't you just tell him how you feel?" A voice in the back of her head
asked.
"I can't. His answer may break my heart." Her mind replied.
"But you know you want him, right? Why not let your body have the pleasure it
wants?" the voice replied.
"I can't, what if he says no?" She asked in reply.
"Don't be such a chicken wuss, just ask him, or I will!"
"Suzuka? Anyone home?" Gene asked waving a hand in front of her face.
It took her several minutes to realize that they had stopped, "Oh, what?" She
asked Gene.
"Hey you want to go in there to find some clothes?" He asked her, to which she
shrugged and they walked in together.
She let him go look by himself after she told him her size. She leaned over the
counter looking at some of the necklaces on display.
"Hello, do you need help with anything Miss?" Asked a female voice.
Suzuka looked up blushing, " Oh no, my friend is getting me some clothes
because I fell into some water and have nothing else to wear. I'm just looking at this
necklace. It is very pretty."
The woman behind the counter nodded.
"Here try this." Gene said, handing her a violet colored dress and matching wrap-
a-round shawl.
"I'll show you where the dressing rooms are." The woman said.
Suzuka followed while Gene stayed and looked down at the counter. Soon the
woman returned. "Is she your girlfriend?" The woman asked curiously.
Gene laughed quietly and shook his head, "What was she looking at?" He asked.
"This necklace," the woman replied, "Why?"
"Can you get it out? I'd like to see it." He said. The woman nodded and opened
the case. Pulling out the necklace she handed it to him, "It's real silver?" he asked.
"OF course, everything here is completely one of a kind and handmade with all
natural minerals."
"I'm buying it. Just ring it up quickly, it's a surprise." He said. He finished paying
just in time and quickly shoved it deep into one of the deep folds of his cloak.
"Wow!" Gene murmured.
"You don't like it, do you?" She asked, her voice carrying slight note of sadness.
"That's not it at all! It's just…I mean, I know it looked nice before, but now it's
beautiful, I mean on you, that is." Gene said, alarmed that she had thought that he would
ever think she was ugly. Heck, she was the most beautiful thing on two legs.
"You think she knows you feel that way about her you never told her loved her,
did you?" Asked a voice in the back of his head.
"Yes I did, but she was asleep and didn't hear me." He replied, defensively.
"Why not tell her you love her while she's awake?"
"What if she hates me and never wants to talk to me again afterwards?"
"What if she doesn't?"
"Who are you to be meddling in my business anyway?"
"Someone very close to of you, for now I have to remain anonymous, it's for my
own safety. It's embarrassingly obvious, she looks at you, but looks down blushing when
she sees you look at her. And during dinner you did defend her, meaning to or not."
"Yeah, so? I'd do that for any of my friends. Besides, I'm already involved with
Mel."
"Melfina wouldn't mind if you broke up with her… she's happy just being
friends. She wants you to be happy, then so shall she."
"How do you know all this? Your Mel aren't you?"
"Do not ask, I cannot tell you until you and Suzuka reveal your true feelings,
maybe you should start by giving her that necklace you bought for her?"
"Gene, Gene, Gene, what is up with you?" Suzuka asked throwing down her wet
clothes on the bed.
"Huh, what?" Gene asked.
"Finally, you've been like this for half an hour! I got us a room at this hotel, hope
you don't mind, but it only has one bed. I'll sleep on the floor though, and I called Jim
and the others, they're all right, except Jim had a small fainting spell. Aisha's taking care
of him." Suzuka grinned evilly, " I'm gonna take a shower and you probably should to.
What do you want, stand up or tub?"
"I really don't care."
"Okay, Stand up it is!" She said dragging him in to one of the bathrooms, Towels
are up there." She said pointing up at a rack.
She grabbed a towel and left for the tub. Filling it up with bubbles and steaming
hot water. She sighed as she stepped in the water. It felt so good against her cold skin and
she sunk down so only her eyes were above water. Then all the way down into the hot
water and back up so her breasts and all below were covered by bubbly water. After a
couple of seconds she got up and left, letting the water drain. She dried herself and put a
new bandage around her chest. She had nothing to wear so grabbed one of the robes
hanging on the wall and tied it tightly around her slim waist. Going out, she folded her
new clothes and laid the wet ones out to dry. She put her sword by the dry clothes and
stuck them in the corner. She grabbed a pillow and blanket and made a small bed on the
floor.
-End of chapter 1-
Authors note: Depending on how many people like this than I may decide to put the next
couple of chapters up, so if you like it tell me. Also I give thanks to Diana(Little Cat
Diana of the moon) she has been such a great help and supportive, even though I'm a
major pain in the ass to work with. She is the one who knows how to post these things I
can't figure it out (Well that and the fact that the computer so totally hates me! It gets me
so mad…Gr.….) Yeah, my favorite songs on yipee!
"The Stranger at Twilight part 1"
Mistytogepi@hotmail.com By: WaterMyhoshi77
Notes (July 2001)
Okay people, I know that this story may seem corny, but deal with it. I mean give
me a break. This'll be the first one I have put on the web. So though I appreciate
suggestions please don't be too harsh. I have tried, for the most part, to keep my facts
straight, which is kinda hard to do, considering that; I don't know all that much about
"Outlaw Star" which is probably why I find it so interesting. I may have gotten some
names and spelling wrong. Please bear with me.
If you think my story's pointless, boring and full of crap, well…get over it!
Most of the characters in this story are owned by someone who isn't me. I don't
know who created "Outlaw Star", but it definitely wasn't me(but I wish I was that
talented!)! They are being used without permission and all that other junk you have to put
in, but the other characters and story are completely my own, I don't care what any one
says!!! If by any chance my story is similar in any with yours, it is not my fault. I don't
get on the web enough to read other fanfics!
This story has been sent through the spell checker, which I absolutely hate. = P
One last thing, this is a Gene/Suzuka fanfic so if your against them being together
not only will you read a corny fic, but you'll probably hate it. In this case I'd advise
against reading it, but hey, The decisions yours to make. Have a good day! ^_^
Now to the story-
"Gene," Suzuka said softly.
"Yeah?" He asked flipping through channels.
"Where are the others?"
"Well, Jim is out with Mel and Aisha, I think they went out clothes shopping, the poor
guy. Why, don't you remember? You're feeling better since the fight against the pirates,
right? You remembered to put a clean bandage on, right?" He replied looking over at her,
worriedly. It was true she was quite beautiful, long legs, dark hair and eyes, her face was
turning a slight pink, quite pretty, he thought waiting for her answer.
"Because… I just… wanted… to say…" She began to reply.
"Hey were back!" Aisha called.
Suzuka shook her head and sighed, then faded back into the dark depths of her room.
Gene went out to help the others.
-Later that night-
"Hey Mel, this is really a all time best!" Jim exclaimed pointing down at his plate
as Aisha got up to get sixths.
Melfina blushed slightly, "Oh, thank you, but it's nothing really." She replied
nervously, looking down at her plate.
"No, Mel, he's right, this is really good." Suzuka responded, her eyes darting
from her plate to Gene and back.
"But you haven't even tried it yet, w-Oww! Hey that hurt, Gene!" Aisha yowled
as Gene jabbed his booted foot into one of her bare feet.
" I'm sorry, but I've got some…um… unfinished business to take care of, I'll be
back soon." Suzuka said softly turning to leave.
"Wait, do you want the rest of your dinner?" Aisha asked.
"No, you can have it." Suzuka replied, leaving she shut the door quietly behind
her.
"There is defiantly some thing wrong with her. That is the second time this week
she has missed a meal." Jim said after five minutes to make sure she had left.
Gene shrugged, "I don't know, Jim, but she has been acting kind of odd lately,
that much I know for sure."
The others nodded their agreement.
-Six Hours Later-
"Bartender, another." Suzuka said, resting her chin in the palm of her hand.
"You sure, Miss?" He asked slowly.
"Yeah now get me my goddamned drink!" She snapped.
"Bad day, huh?" A man, two seats down, asked.
"More like a bad week." She said, her breath smelled of whiskey, but then again,
his did, too.
"Sounds like you got it worse than me." He replied.
"Yeah now bug off, I want to be alone in my misery."
The man shrugged and turned back to the drink he was nursing.
I've got to get out of this place, she thought downing a shot, she put some money
on the counter and walked out the door, you wouldn't have been able to tell she been
drinking other than from the smell. She headed towards 'Shamarien Bridge' and dove
into the water. She leaped off the bridge to wash away the smell and climbed back out.
Suddenly it felt like she was being torn apart. No, not again this cannot be
happening, she thought. She screamed falling down to the ground; she heard footsteps,
followed by questions. She shook her head trying to clear the image, but felt as though
she couldn't breathe. Slowly her vision came into focus, "Gene?" She asked softly, her
eyes glassy.
He could tell it was so hard for her to breathe and he put one finger over her lips.
She could feel her body piece itself together, She groaned in agony trying sit up.
She was breathing easier now.
"Suzuka, I'm going to call the hospital-" he began, but as soon as he said the word
hospital, she screamed out.
"No! You can't please don't!" She exclaimed loudly.
"Why not?"
"No one, please tell no one, not even the others." She said, her eyes pleading with
him.
"Are you sure?" He asked, "Will you be all right?"
She nodded and stood up, but then stumbled slightly. "I'll be fine, it was just a
little worse today, but I'll be fine, really."
" Okay, but were going out and I'm getting you something else to wear. You're
soaking wet! If you're not careful you might get pneumonia." He said.
She nodded and let him drag her back into the city.
"Why don't you just tell him how you feel?" A voice in the back of her head
asked.
"I can't. His answer may break my heart." Her mind replied.
"But you know you want him, right? Why not let your body have the pleasure it
wants?" the voice replied.
"I can't, what if he says no?" She asked in reply.
"Don't be such a chicken wuss, just ask him, or I will!"
"Suzuka? Anyone home?" Gene asked waving a hand in front of her face.
It took her several minutes to realize that they had stopped, "Oh, what?" She
asked Gene.
"Hey you want to go in there to find some clothes?" He asked her, to which she
shrugged and they walked in together.
She let him go look by himself after she told him her size. She leaned over the
counter looking at some of the necklaces on display.
"Hello, do you need help with anything Miss?" Asked a female voice.
Suzuka looked up blushing, " Oh no, my friend is getting me some clothes
because I fell into some water and have nothing else to wear. I'm just looking at this
necklace. It is very pretty."
The woman behind the counter nodded.
"Here try this." Gene said, handing her a violet colored dress and matching wrap-
a-round shawl.
"I'll show you where the dressing rooms are." The woman said.
Suzuka followed while Gene stayed and looked down at the counter. Soon the
woman returned. "Is she your girlfriend?" The woman asked curiously.
Gene laughed quietly and shook his head, "What was she looking at?" He asked.
"This necklace," the woman replied, "Why?"
"Can you get it out? I'd like to see it." He said. The woman nodded and opened
the case. Pulling out the necklace she handed it to him, "It's real silver?" he asked.
"OF course, everything here is completely one of a kind and handmade with all
natural minerals."
"I'm buying it. Just ring it up quickly, it's a surprise." He said. He finished paying
just in time and quickly shoved it deep into one of the deep folds of his cloak.
"Wow!" Gene murmured.
"You don't like it, do you?" She asked, her voice carrying slight note of sadness.
"That's not it at all! It's just…I mean, I know it looked nice before, but now it's
beautiful, I mean on you, that is." Gene said, alarmed that she had thought that he would
ever think she was ugly. Heck, she was the most beautiful thing on two legs.
"You think she knows you feel that way about her you never told her loved her,
did you?" Asked a voice in the back of his head.
"Yes I did, but she was asleep and didn't hear me." He replied, defensively.
"Why not tell her you love her while she's awake?"
"What if she hates me and never wants to talk to me again afterwards?"
"What if she doesn't?"
"Who are you to be meddling in my business anyway?"
"Someone very close to of you, for now I have to remain anonymous, it's for my
own safety. It's embarrassingly obvious, she looks at you, but looks down blushing when
she sees you look at her. And during dinner you did defend her, meaning to or not."
"Yeah, so? I'd do that for any of my friends. Besides, I'm already involved with
Mel."
"Melfina wouldn't mind if you broke up with her… she's happy just being
friends. She wants you to be happy, then so shall she."
"How do you know all this? Your Mel aren't you?"
"Do not ask, I cannot tell you until you and Suzuka reveal your true feelings,
maybe you should start by giving her that necklace you bought for her?"
"Gene, Gene, Gene, what is up with you?" Suzuka asked throwing down her wet
clothes on the bed.
"Huh, what?" Gene asked.
"Finally, you've been like this for half an hour! I got us a room at this hotel, hope
you don't mind, but it only has one bed. I'll sleep on the floor though, and I called Jim
and the others, they're all right, except Jim had a small fainting spell. Aisha's taking care
of him." Suzuka grinned evilly, " I'm gonna take a shower and you probably should to.
What do you want, stand up or tub?"
"I really don't care."
"Okay, Stand up it is!" She said dragging him in to one of the bathrooms, Towels
are up there." She said pointing up at a rack.
She grabbed a towel and left for the tub. Filling it up with bubbles and steaming
hot water. She sighed as she stepped in the water. It felt so good against her cold skin and
she sunk down so only her eyes were above water. Then all the way down into the hot
water and back up so her breasts and all below were covered by bubbly water. After a
couple of seconds she got up and left, letting the water drain. She dried herself and put a
new bandage around her chest. She had nothing to wear so grabbed one of the robes
hanging on the wall and tied it tightly around her slim waist. Going out, she folded her
new clothes and laid the wet ones out to dry. She put her sword by the dry clothes and
stuck them in the corner. She grabbed a pillow and blanket and made a small bed on the
floor.
-End of chapter 1-
Authors note: Depending on how many people like this than I may decide to put the next
couple of chapters up, so if you like it tell me. Also I give thanks to Diana(Little Cat
Diana of the moon) she has been such a great help and supportive, even though I'm a
major pain in the ass to work with. She is the one who knows how to post these things I
can't figure it out (Well that and the fact that the computer so totally hates me! It gets me
so mad…Gr.….) Yeah, my favorite songs on yipee!