Ok so here's my first story ( well my first McFly story).

I hope you like it! and please review. even though if their mean reviews i don't mind , ok maybe i do, but

hey try to be gentle. try!

I DO NOT own McFly even though we all wished we did.

bla bla blah. you know the deal.

ok here goes ....

" I cant believe you're here" I said as I wrapped my arms around my boyfriend , who had just came from Florida for a visit. He stroked my hair " I've missed you" he whispered into my hair. I smiled , amazed that I got so lucky. I love him was the only thing I thought every time I was with picked me up and carried me into my room. He put me on my bed gently " so when does your room mate come back" I smirked " one week". He smiled " great."

I moved his arm way from me and got my towel. I got my slippers on and walked towards the bathroom when his cell phone rang. I stared at it then back at him he was sleeping so peacefully. I smiled and got his cell phone and picked it up

" hello?" I said into the phone. There's was light breathing

" who is this?" It was a girls voice. Someone from his record label I thought , he's in a band.

" I'm Arlene , Chris's girlfriend" then she hung up. I stared at the phone the screen read

" Heather 00:56" I looked at Chris. I shook it off and walked into the bathroom for a shower.

I yawned as I dried my hair with my bowl dryer. I had to look nice , my boyfriend was back.

I turned off the blow dryer and combed my hair.

" I'm sorry Heather" I heard Chris whisper , I leaned towards the door " I told you I was going to California … we can't … I know but It was a mistake… Heather I have to go". Then he stopped talking , I heard him sigh loudly. I took a deep breath preparing myself

" who were you talking to?" I asked as opened the bathroom door. He smiled at me and put his phone on the dresser " record label people , forgot to tell them I was coming" I smiled " well you should take a shower so we could go get lunch" he kissed me and left into the bathroom. The phone rang. Chris didn't hear it , he was singing as he turned on the shower. I grabbed his phone and ran to the small space I call my living room.

" who is this?" I asked I as I answered it.

" Heather" I swallowed " ok Heather what do you want" I asked as I sat down on my couch.

" Your boyfriend" I scowled and ran my hand through my hair.

" Chris is mine" I reminded her " who are you ?". She laughed , a very wicked laugh.

" I'm the girl who has been keeping your boyfriend company for the past two months , you know how can guys can be they get very lonely" I shook my head

" Chris would never cheat on me! I know him he would never do that" she laughed again

" he wouldn't do that" I repeated. It wasn't working. I couldn't convince myself. I knew she was telling the truth. I hung up and put my hand over my mouth. Don't cry I demanded don't cry over him. I shook my head and let the tears fall from my eyes.

When you dated a guy for a two years and learn he has been cheating on you , you just cant help to wonder how long he had been playing you. I trusted him. Stupid! God I'm such an idiot. Why? Why! Why did he have to ruin it . I get from the couch and run out of my apartment. I had to come back and confront him when I was calm. I ran until I got to the city. I started walking as I wrapped my arms around myself. Tears kept falling down. I couldn't stop them. They wouldn't stop. Suddenly I couldn't take anymore I leaned against a wall and slowly fell to the ground as I broke down.

" You okay?" I wiped my tears on my sleeve. I looked up and sniffled loudly. A boy kneeled down and moved the my hair out of my face. He smiled at me " you okay love" I stared at him , he had a thick accent. Beautiful accent.

" I … um …. No" I whispered. He frowned "what's your name?" he asked as he sat down next to me. I looked around everybody around us was walking around none of them paying attention.

" Arlene" I sniffled. He smiled and put his arm around my shoulder "I'm Danny" he said happily " Danny Jones".

Danny POV when he first see's Arlene

" This is hard" Dougie mumbled as he put his head on the table. Tom laughed

" you're the one that wanted to write a song , me and Danny told you it wasn't going to be easy" I patted Dougie on the back.

" its alright mate come on , I'll help" Dougie stared at me and put his head up slowly from the table " fine but you two better not leave like Harry did" .

" I won't , now come sing what you have down so far" Dougie cleared his throat

" people marching to the drums everybody's having fun to the sound of love …" he sang , I smiled and looked around a couple from the table next to us stared at poor Dougie. He continued to sing something about the world being ugly and if he was right something, something then a girl passing by our table crying got my attention. Tears streamed down her face , but you could still tell she was pretty. I got up from my chair and followed her.

" Hey!" Dougie yelled " Danny you …." I tuned him out and continued to follow this mysterious girl. She started walking a bit faster , maybe she thought I was a stalker . Then I realized all she wanted to do lean against a wall and cry some more. I walked over to her as she slowly slid to the ground.

" You okay?" I asked her , she wiped her tears on her sleeve and looked up at me. She sniffled as I kneel down to were she was sitting at. I couldn't see her eyes so I moved the hair out of her face , I smiled as I saw her eyes they were beautiful so was she.

" you okay love?" I asked again , she stared at me for a long time then I realized I must have sound different to her. " I… um …no" I frowned I didn't like seeing girls cry. I sat down next her " so what's your name?" I stared at her she had black hair , with gray eyes that would drive you crazy, she even looked cute when she cried.

" Arlene" she sniffled cutely , I smiled " I'm Danny , Danny Jones". She stuck out her hand " well its nice meeting you …. I guess" Arlene said avoiding eye contact with me. I wanted to make her look at me, but she wouldn't. I sighed and cupped my hand under her chin

" look at me" I whispered. Arlene took in a deep breath then stared at me

" yes?" she asked , I wiped her tears away with my thumb. Arlene sighed and continued to cry on my shoulder silently. I stroked her hair , and wrapped my arms around her.

" why are you doing this?" she asked , I felt her breath on my neck.

" what do you mean" I asked , she moved her head and faced me.

" why are helping me?" she asked , Arlene eyes were blood shot red , but still I couldn't stop of thinking about her " I don't know , why are you crying?" . She moved away from me " I can't tell you … I barely met you". I sighed , were all American's this complicated.

" Well I'm Danny Jones , I'm from the UK , born in Bolton as you can tell from my accent … uh I'm in a band" she got up from the floor and walked away hurriedly.

" hey!" I catchedup with her " did I say something wrong" Arlene stayed quiet as I walked beside her , obviously ignoring me. I blocked her away , she stared at me " excuse me" she said coldly. I shookmy head " nope not until you tell me why you walked off like that". She stood there " because. I. hate. Musicians." she said and pushed me out of her way , I stood there shocked. Every girl loved a musicians. Well , don't they? I shook it off and continued to follow her " not true" I said trying to keep my pace with her.

She raised her eyebrows " really? How would you know what I like or hate" I thought about her question for a second.

" well because you play an instrument" she stopped walking and stared at me "I can tell and I'm also guessing a musician made you cry right now" . Arlene stared at me

" I play the guitar" I smiled " but I stopped years ago and yes a stupid drummer made me cry. Got it? Good. Now leave me alone" She walked off. I thought about two things I could do at this moment A. talk to her some more or B. sleep with her. Ah , they both include her so lets go for both I though to myself. I followed her into a small park , I knew she knew I was following her , but hey I get what I want.

" so" I said as I was right behind her " Arlene tell me is this drummer person your boyfriend?" she flipped the finger and kept on walking. I laughed , I saw her smile a little.

" weird laugh , you have there Mr. Jones" she said as she moved out of the way for a lady with a stroller. I smiled again , I think I have her.

" Mr. Jones?" I laughed " yes I know its very loud" she nodded in agreement " do you like it?". She stopped walking and shook her head as she scrunched up her nose , very cute I thought.

" well don't I feel offended" I said as I put my hand on my chest. She shook her head and took out her cell phone " I'm sorry" she said as she stared at the screen , she looked up " hey Danny how would you like to go … somewhere?" I smiled " I thought I was going to have to ask .. And sure I would love to go anywhere with you". Arlene put her phone back into her pocket " let's go to where your staying" she said as she put her hair behind her ears. I smiled wider " sure". I grabbed her hand in mine and started walking , she let me take her hand , no budging. Huh?

" Arlene" she kissed me quickly on the lips " uh". I stayed quiet as we kept on walking. Wow. I touched my lips when she looked to her side , they tingled , weird they never done that before. We walked to the hotel I was staying at with my best mates. I opened my hotel room door slowly , yes! The maid had cleaned my room. Phew.

" how long are you staying in America ?" she asked as she looked around the room. I took off my shoes " we don't know yet , not long though" she sat down awkwardly on a chair in the room " who's we?" she asked me. I smiled " my band" she nodded " if your lucky maybe you'll get to meet them later". She smiled , a small one , but still I was trapped I had a feeling I really liked her " why can't I meet them now?" Arlene asked as she moved to sit down on my bed instead.

" because if they see you they'll try to take you away" I said as I looked through the mini fridge , I took out two waters.

" take me away?" I handed her a water bottle , I nodded as I took a long sip.

" yup I'm guessing Harry would take you , Dougie's too shy at first , and Tom has a girlfriend so … Harry would definitely try to take you away from me". She laughed , as I almost gagged on the water I was drinking. I'm falling for her. No stop it Danny.

" Danny I'm going to sound like a total desperate whore , but I don't know how to say this so …" she got up from the bed and kissed me , a nice long one. I sighed feeling the tingly feeling again , but this time it was all over my body. I liked it. I slowly lead us to the bed as we fell gently on it. I heard her moan under me , I smiled and continued.

" I want you" I told her as our lips parted. She smiled and whispered into my ear

" then take me" and I did.

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