You talk big for a small-time critic with no account on Fanfiction . net.In case you haven't noticed, despite their name, allows poetry on their site--as long as it is made in honor of other copyrighted creations that aren't your own. What the authorities of the site do not allow are essays or original fiction or poetry. (I'm hoping that you know the difference between essays and fiction?) Anyway, you have acted in an unacceptable manner by telling me that my poetry is poorly done prose that isn't allowed on "fanfiction-dot-net."
Well, my dear critic, it seems that you do not know a few well-known facts about literature. Poetry does not equal poorly done prose. And Poetry certainly does not equal crap. Please get your facts straight before spitting out bull shit about stuff you obviously have no idea about.
And another thing; you didn't say anything about the content of my poetry, other than it being 'crap' that should be removed from this site. You didn't even put effort in criticizing it properly. So, in my book, you've just lost your credibility as a reviewer, a reader, or even an intellectual human being.
So, Borg, I will dismiss your 'review' as nothing more than a mindless sentence created out of the sheer purpose of stirring excitement in your probably eventless life. Maybe you should find another hobby. You're just making a big fool of yourself. And you're giving critics a bad name. Tsk, tsk. Shame on you.
On with the poem:
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Morbidity
by Riquisel Yutifae
I'd love
to see
someone
happy;
but then
she is
bleeding
and she
does not
know it.
But will
these things
matter?
When her
dreams will
shatter...
And she
will never
find out...
That I
am the
cause of
her one
pain that
only I
can see
in her
crimson
dead eyes.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Author's Note: Written in Sephiroth's point of view for... Tifa. Yes, I'm a TifaxSephiroth too. So shoot me! Now for bad critics, go ahead... waste your goddamn energy for typing nonsense and bullcrap reviews. Pollute with your brainless bullshit!!!
Forgive me for being so angry and violent. I can't help it. I'm doing this for self-defense because I have just been violated. I'm not removing the nasty reviews so that people will know that polluted minds such as that reviewer/critic exists in this wonderful place for writers.