A/n This poem I wrote while listening to a boring church sermon. I hope you like it. Please review me and give me your honest opinion. If you didn't like it you can write that but please tell me why and maybe what I could do better. Thanks for all of your help.
What He Did
He created a wonderful place
With everything we need
He came down to Earth
So his message we would heed
He gave up all his powers
To become one of us
He worked as a slave
In the fields, in the dust
He took a criminal's punishment
For something he didn't do
He died on the cross
For me and for you
With each nail in his hand
He took away a sin
By the time he was dead
A clean life we could begin
We put him in the tomb
And rolled away the stone
People weeped and cried
As they turned away for home
And on Easter morning
He came back to life
He gave us hope and faith
That after death, there's life
He gave us love and joy
Sadness and trust
He gave us hope
And a wonderful life to us
For everything he has given us
He has only one request
Just that you believe in him
For God loves you the best
A/n so what do you think? Well please read and review. I hope to be coming out with more poems in the future. Have a good day and thanks for reading this poem!
What He Did
He created a wonderful place
With everything we need
He came down to Earth
So his message we would heed
He gave up all his powers
To become one of us
He worked as a slave
In the fields, in the dust
He took a criminal's punishment
For something he didn't do
He died on the cross
For me and for you
With each nail in his hand
He took away a sin
By the time he was dead
A clean life we could begin
We put him in the tomb
And rolled away the stone
People weeped and cried
As they turned away for home
And on Easter morning
He came back to life
He gave us hope and faith
That after death, there's life
He gave us love and joy
Sadness and trust
He gave us hope
And a wonderful life to us
For everything he has given us
He has only one request
Just that you believe in him
For God loves you the best
A/n so what do you think? Well please read and review. I hope to be coming out with more poems in the future. Have a good day and thanks for reading this poem!
