Hi guyz,, this iz my first fanfic and im really proud of myself cuzz ive written 6 chapterz already and iv spent heapz of time on it.!! okk this chapter isnt perfect and itz super short! but itz da shortest chapter by 1001 wordz so plzz put this story on story alert and i relly want u 2 tell me what u think,, az a performer i can take critism very well so give me a headz up but remeber im only 13 (14 in 2 monthz~ im want a penguin!) so be nice cuzz da most crit ism iv had iz "sorry if u wanna be in startstruck u must use dinamicz" when i was!!!!!!! anyway enjoy nd review plzz!! remember this chapter iz only lyk a well preview of some sort. hehe,,ily freya xoxo
Chapter 1- Unusual Routine
Sonny's Point Of View...
They're the Check It Out Girls and they're checkin out for you! Check It Out!
"Check out this new body-care store!" Tawni said in her best snobby teen voice she called speak without dropping her gum out her mouth.
"Let's totally check it out!" My best friend, Lucy, taught me how to be a b- a Portlyn. Go Sonny, remember what Lucy told you: Obnoxious, annoying, bitchy!
"Check out the perfume isle!"
"Check out this cologne!" I said as I sprayed water all over my body. I was
literally drenched. "Check it out, check it out!"
"Check it out, you smell like an old man!" Tawni ran in the opposite direction to a lipstick stand. As I followed her, she picked up the brightest red prop lipstick she could find. And just as planned, she smeared the red lipstick around her lips and over her nose. "Check it out, I'm red as!"
I skipped to the powder section and searched for the right prop. Ok, Marshall said he put Tawni's powder on the 3rd row, the 7th one from the right, I thought as I searched for the prop. I quickly grabbed the designated powder and skipped back to Tawni. I opened the lid of the powder container and chucked its skin-coloured contents on her face. Wait, skin-coloured? Shit, Sonny! Wrong colour! What'd I do now? Crap, ahh... I panicked as I looked for a decoy. The audience was now silent. I just stared, looking for something. And then, in the middle of the audience, I spotted that something, only different. A certain three-named jerkthrob. Chad Dylan Cooper... Who was mouthing something to me? What the hell, Chad? I then he did some sort of action, probably meaning turn around. I did exactly that, but not knowing Tawni was right behind me, I ran fall blast into her causing us to fall smack bam on the ground, my nose being the only thing blocking my mouth and teeth from Tawni's elbow.
"Sonny! What are y- EWWWW!" Tawni cried.
"I'm not that ugly, Tawni! And if you think I'm fat well you must be going through hell now!" I yelled in my defence. By now I realised I was sitting on her and that she wasn't very strong.
"No, your nose is spewing blood!" She beamed. Just then I felt a sharp pain in my nose. Now everyone was just staring at me crying. Not for the pain, no, for the embarrassment. I got off of Tawni, covering my now blood-stained nose, and ran off in front of 500 people in tears. No, more. I had just run off a live broadcast, a live audience, everyone at Condor Studios and... Chad.
Did you like it? there will be more i promise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ily freya xoxo