Hey Guys I'm Shadow16 and I'm new, actually my first one! I don't mind flames, actually I like flames. Just Help me out on what I can do to make my stories better.'Kay?
What would happen if Ichigo was killed before Rukia could make him a soul REaper? He would become an arrancar of Course! So Ichigo wakes up as a Hollow in the Forest and then Aizen finds him and recognizes his spiritual Pressure. Ichigo has no memories and becomes an Espada! Ranked numero dos. BTW I tell All my stories from third person.
The hollow stumbled along, occasionally tripping over his small, delicate feet. He tripped again, but this time it was different. It wasn't his fault that an enourmas spiritual pressure came and hit a menos grandes, who fell on him and flattened him. It was just his luck that the spiritual pressure came rights towards him and he couldn't get up to fight it! This is the end the hollow thought and began to laugh. He would die by the hand of a power equal or lower to his, and all because he was stuck under a menos grande.
Aizen and Gin were recruiting when they felt an unmistakably familiar spiritual pressure. Gin looked to Aizen and Aizen nodded, standing up off of his throne. They both flashstepped out of the room and to the forest. The spiritual pressure had been going off for the longest time and it seemed the owner was in trouble, by the way the pressure was out of control. The walked forward, picking their way through the unconcious hollows to reach an unconcious menos grande, crushing a small hollow, who upon sighting them, his spritual pressure laced itself with irony. Aizen frowned, why would a hollow laugh when it was nearly dead? He looked around for the spiritual pressure was still there but he didn't see an arancar... unless it was the hollow. He looked to Gin, who nodded and walked over to the hollow, who continued to glare at him when Gin let out his spiritual pressure, even though Gn knew he had felt it. Hollows began to evaporate, killed off by Gin's spiritual pressure.
"Is the little hollow caught under the big-" Gin stopped when the hollow, exerted his pressure and the menos disappeared over him. Gin stepped back, but Aizen strode froward and asked,"How would you, a lowly hollow, like to become an espada?" The hollow sneered at him, but it cut off his face when he shrunk down to Aizen's size, almost the exact same hieght. He stood up,feeling a little light headed.
Aizen looked on in a misture of interest and amusement as the powerful hollow pitched forward to the ground and lay there, exhausted. Aizen walekd even closer and picked up the hollow bridal-style. He touched the hollow's face and the mask peeled back to reveal a young face, with perfect skin, a permanent scowl and shocking orange hair. Aizen carefully chipped away at it until the mask only covered his right eye and twisted along his quite reaching it. That young man was beautiful, most likely taking after his mother, because his father was not by any means handsome at all.
"Gin, would you take him to Szayel to try to wake him up?" Gin nodded then took the young man from Aizen
" Yes Aizen-sama." Gin turned and vanished, appearing to disappear. As Gin ran, he studied the young face before him. The man mumbled and a blank face replaced his scowl as he slept. Gin liked the look of the unscowling face on the so somber face of Ichigo Kurosaki.