All right! I am sooooo sorry! But I have thought about this story so much in the past few days and I have had an epiphany!! This story is now under major construction!! And it will be better than before!! I have finally figured out how to put things like I want them, and yet still have all of you guys' and my favorite scenes…. It'll just be out of order from the first one.

So, without further ado, here is the first chapter redone!!

By reading this story, you will embark on a journey, one of love, lust, hurt, and way too much drama.

This is my story—and his story, but his doesn't even start for a while—at times, you may feel the need to cry, or feel sorry for me—or him… but that's off topic.

Here in this time, on this new Earth, we are smarter. We have not killed off any entire races, we have not committed any holocausts, we have never enslaved anyone, and we have never tried to 'fix' the world, because it has never been broken.

We still have cell phones, and cars, and electricity—thanks to you guys—but instead of using non-renewable, not biodegradable, and environmentally unsafe products; we use biodegradable, renewable, and environmentally safe products. Our cars run on liquefied wheat (don't ask me how) and our plastics can decompose within a month.

We were given our world after you all destroyed yours. Our race was derived from the people who cared deeply about trying to save yours, and because of that, everyone in our new world strives to leave it alone, and not mess too much with it.

As a result of our world being based and built from yours, we still have things around that were written/created/made from your time… have you ever heard of the Twilight series? By Stephanie Myers? Those are my favorite books, the only ones I ever take anywhere with me, but sadly, only the first three of that series ever made it to our world from yours, so I have never known how the story ended.

Now, enough about the world, and my surroundings… on to the beginning of my adventure.

I am a girl, who lost her parents at ten, was torn away from her life-long friends, and then two years later, abandoned by her older brother when he left for his school of choice.

I have been moved from foster home to foster home since I was ten, up until I was twelve, my older brother left me to go to school, one of the special schools, Pandora. In our new world, most everyone has powers, super powers. The ones who don't are accepted as they are, but they don't get the experience of the schools. I was one of them—the duds. Even though my brother inherited his powers gene from our parents—the greatest super heroes of all time, along with my friends' parents—I didn't get it… or so I thought.

I know, I know! Don't yell at me!! But I garuntee you that this version will be better in the end! I will even put up more than one chapter today!