Hey everyone I'm redoing the story. The last one had too many mistakes and made no sense. I'm changing a few things. James love interest name was Emily I think she going to have a new name. James love interest is now Mackenzie.
BTW I DON'T own any of the Big Time Rush Character only thing I own are the character I make up and I don't own any songs. I don't own any of the outfits that I do for the characters as well.
P.S: If you need to give me any suggestions to make my story better just PM me. Please don't criticize my writing I know It's not perfect but please don't make fun of it.
Chapter 1 Big City, Big Dreams
Mackenzie POV
It's my first day at The Palm Woods and I'm excited. I'm originally from New York my mom a Photographer for magazine, and my dad is in school to become a director/producer he used to be a short film maker but now he wants to be known for his work. So now I'm going to pursue my dream of being an actress. I entered The Palm Woods with confidence and I walked to the manager desk.
What do you want Mr. Bitters asked. I like my key it should under Daniel. You're in room 2K beware your room is next to the hockey heads. Hockey heads what does that mean I wondered. As I walked towards the elevator I bumped into someone he has tall, gorgeous with short brown fluffy hair.
Are you ok he asked. Yeah I'm fine. He helped me up was we both fell over which is sweet of him. I'm James he said. Hi James I'm Mackenzie I just moved in. Hey which your room are you in James asked? I'm in room 2K, next to the so-called hockey heads do you know them I said. Yeah I'm that Hockey head well me and my three friends James said. Oh well I guess were neighbor I said.
Two weeks later
I'm all moved in and I had a few audition, which I think went pretty well If I do say so myself. I made some new friends (Kendall, Carlos, Logan, Katie, Jo, Jennifer's, Camille and James.) Since me and James met we just clicked we became friends like in a blink of an eye we hang out everyday and I think something between us like a connection but I won't say anything if he doesn't feel the same way.
End of Mackenzie POV
James POV
Today I'm hanging out with Mackenzie, The Guys, Camille, Jo and the Jennifer's. Mackenzie has been here for a couple of weeks and I know that I may not know her well but I like her I have deep feelings for her. I know I'm moving fast but I can't help it. There is just something about her I don't what it is, but it gets me going. Maybe it's her smile her personality or just her in general I want to show her and tell her how I feel but what if she doesn't like me back it could change everything between us I'll keep it to myself for now.
End of James POV
As they were all hanging by the pool James and Mackenzie couldn't get their eyes off each other and the other's are curious wondering what going on between them. "Is everything ok you to you keeping staring at each other Kendall asked?" Yeah Mackenzie and James said at the same time. Which made this situation so much weirder. Mackenzie got a call she then left the table. I wonder who that is they all wonder.
Mackenzie POV
They almost saw right through that I like James that was close, but why was he staring at me that what I'm wondering I got a call from my manager. Hello I said. You know the show that you just audition for my manager said. Yeah New Town High ( The main star Megan left and they needed a replacement. If you don't know Megan she was in Big Time Crush.) You got the part my manager said. Oh my gosh that AMAZING. I ended the call I was so excited that I got the part I was so dedicated in the role it suited me perfectly. Now I have to tell the other.
End of Mackenzie POV
Mackenzie walks back to the table and everyone staring at her. Well everyone said except Mackenzie. My manager called I audition for the new lead of New Town High and I got the part Mackenzie said without taking a breath. Everyone cheered and hugged Mackenzie. James was happy but a little hurt because he couldn't see Mackenzie as much as he wants to but he was happy. Mackenzie noticed James wasn't so excited so she walked over "Everything ok Mackenzie said. Yeah I'm happy for you but I won't see you everyday James said. James I'll make time extra just for you I promise Mackenzie said. James and Mackenzie hugged and they all going to continue to hangout by the pool for the rest of the day.
The Next day
James POV
So yesterday I was a little bummed that I won't see her as much but that okay because she promised to make time to hang out just me and her so that make it easier to tell her how I feel without any interruption and feeling embarrassed. I walk into the living room and the guys are there. You look nice what's the occasion Kendall asked.
TBA hoped you like the first chapter I'll post the second chapter when I'm doing updating it hope you like this better than the old one. This one feel more fresh and better I hope I have no mistakes.
Peace out :)