Hello! Here is the OC story that I have been wanting to do! So I don't really expect this to get as much feedback as Pyrrha(c) Victory, but this is more for fun than anything and I still welcome all criticisms, both good and bad. I don't know when I'll update, but again, I work better when my ego's being fed. I also have another story I want to start.

I decided to do trailers like they did for RWBY because I will accept OC's (Look at bottom for more details) and that'll give me more time to incorporate them.

Anyways, here's N of NAVD.


"Everything in life needs a little luck. No matter how much skill or power you have, there is no escaping fate."

Deep within one of the many forests of Vale, two Ursa's skulked below the canopy, searching for any prey that may be about. Many of the trees were grey and their leaves were scattered amongst the ground due to the season. The skies were cloudy and a slight breeze ruffled the fur of the monsters. Unknown to the two Grimm, however, another followed, quietly stalking and waiting for the right moment to strike. The stalker smirked to herself when the two beasts parted ways. The young huntress followed the larger of the two, hoping to take out the tougher one first. Moving from tree to tree, she quickly closed the distance. The Ursa stopped when she was only mere feet away and began to sniff the air. The huntress held her breath, hoping that the monster would not notice her, but the creature was already making its way to her position.

"Well, It's all or nothing now," the huntress, always the risk taker, chuckled.

The Ursa jumped back in surprise when a small figure leaped from behind the tree. Her hair, platinum blonde with streaks of black, cascaded down to her waist, brushing against her red tunic. Along with the tunic, she wore white pants and brown boots. She was short and her pale complexion contrasted her deep blue eyes. However, the most noticeable features of this young girl was the two fox ears that sat upon her head that matched the bushy fox tail that sprouted from the small of her back. In her hand was a small device that appeared to be a handheld gun with a disk attached to the top and a long coil wrapped around the disk.

Pointing her weapon to the now growling Ursa, the Faunus pulled the trigger and a small jet of flame spewed from the device and into the Grimm's face. The beast reeled back with a howl of pain, allowing the huntress to close the distance between them. When she positioned herself next to the Ursa's head, she flipped a switch on her weapon, causing the coil to unravel itself and the rest of the device to reconfigure. When the transformation was complete, the Ursa the huntress holding a whip about the length of her own body. Pulling the trigger on the handle, the huntress caused the tip of her whip to ignite with a small flame.

The Grimm growled again and swept at its attacker with a powerful claw, but its target jumped back with ease and snapped at it with her whip. As it struck the beast's arm, the whip also left a trail of fire, singing the creature where ever it hit. The Ursa's arm recoiled as it roared at the young Faunus, who danced around her prey, striking it again and again with her whip. The huntress gave an inner cheer when the Ursa stumbled and fell on its side, one attack away from defeat. However, as she approached the downed monster, she heard another roar from behind her and spun around in time to see the other Ursa charging her.

Rolling out of the way, the huntress transformed her weapon back into the hand-held flamethrower and sprayed the ground between herself and the Grimm's, hoping to keep them at bay. Unfortunately, the second Ursa ignored the fire and rammed its head into the huntress, sending her flying back into a tree. The Faunus slumped to the ground, woozy from the hit, but snapped out of her daze when she spotted the monster charging at her. Focusing, the huntress called upon her aura and targeted the beast with her semblance. The Ursa, unaware of what was happening to it, glowed a faint red. As it charged, one of its paws stepped in some particularly slippery mud, causing the monster to fall and slide across the ground, stopping only a inch short of the barrel of the huntress' weapon. "Looks like you had a bit of bad luck," the huntress mocked with a chuckle.

She blasted the Ursa in the face and the creature fell still, dead. The huntress' victory was short lived, however, for the other Grimm had returned to its feet and began its own charge. Thinking quickly, the huntress spun around and set the base of the tree she hit on fire. Already weakened by the Faunus' impact, the tree moaned as it waved back and forth. The huntress waited for the last moment before dodging the Ursa's snapping maw and rolled to the side. The Grimm slammed into tree, the wood creaking in protest as the tree dangerously leaned from side to side. It seemed as if the tree was going to fall away from the Ursa. The huntress focused again, this time on the remaining Grimm. The beast would've been lucky that the trap had failed, that is, if it were fighting anyone other than this particular huntress. The Ursa glowed a faint red, similar to what its fallen comrade had glowed. A strong wind came and the tree was blown so that it would fall on top of the unsuspecting monster.

With a crash, the tree came down and crushed the Ursa, killing it instantly. When the dust settled, the huntress approached the to inspect her handiwork. Smirking to herself, the huntress went to lean on another tree, exhausted from using her semblance twice. She sheathed her weapon on her belt and sat on the ground, watching the smoke that was produced from the remaining fire. "You two may have been tough, but that'll only get you so far," the Faunus chuckled to herself. "I'd rather be lucky than good any day."

After a few moments of rest, the huntress stood back up and began to walk back to her village. "Well it wasn't flawless," she muttered to herself, "but it should be good enough for Beacon."


So for those who want to send me an OC, I'd appreciate it if you'd follow this form and please send me them through PM's. (It's not necessary, but it'll improve your chances). For an example, I'll show you what it looks like for the huntress of this chapter.

Name: Nadda Chance

Race: Faunus (fox)

Appearance: (Skipping this because I'm lazy)

Weapon Name: Thread of fate

Weapon capabilities: A one handed flamethrower than transforms in a whip that can shoot flame from the tip.

Semblance: Probability control. The ability to manipulate the chances of something good happening for her or something bad for her enemies. However, it takes a lot of her aura and can be used only twice in battle before becoming tired.

Fighting style: Light on her feet, Nadda dances around her enemy, blasting them with fire and relying on dodging, for her defense is weak.

Personality: Nadda is cocky and temperamental. She distrusts humans because of past prejudice that she's faced due to her race, but is not out right mean to them. She thinks she can take on any challenge and loves to gamble, no matter what the odds are.


Now this is a quick example and I like plenty of detail, so feel free to give me a paragraph or two. I'm also looking for uniqueness and please don't make your OC overpowered. I'd also like some 'Cardin' (jerk) characters to use as minor villains.

Sorry, forgot the new rules. clean form is on profile.