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"Hey Ash! Look they got that Wii thing!" My twin sister Bridget yelled from across the room. We are identical twin sisters. WE both have dirty blond hair, Bridget browner than blond, and me, Ashton, with more blond than brown. That is how most people tell us apart, other than that we look the same. Blue eyes, freckles only across our nose to both our check bones, lightly tanned skin and about five foot and a half.
"Where is it? I want to play!" I screamed back at her.
"Over here by the pinball machines!"
After I run past my favorite pinball machines, I see the brand new Wii and my sister. I grabbed the white remote and put the string around my skinny wrist and it buzzes to life with the device. We both look at the screen in front of us and it say to "Press A." So I do and the bright white screen flashes up; there are boxes with things in them. The first box reads: "Wii Sports". The second one reads: "Mii". I click on it an I make my mii; round face, check, big blue eyes, check, nose, check, height, check, and all the other things and it looks like me! While Bridget makes her I go and look at the games: "Monkey Ball", "Wii fit", "Cooking Mama", plus hundreds of others, but I choose to stick with this "Wii Sports." Whatever that is.
"Ready to play Brig?" I ask.
"Yep."
"Let's go!" I click Wii Sports when one of the wonderers come around and turn it off. They are the people in charge of us, they tell us what to do. Wonderers are not more than robots that look like men (Trust me I sneak around sometimes.)
We head to our next place, the first meal room, and Mr. Lotus says his good mornings over the intercoms, "Good morning children and for the new comers. Welcome to the Locus Hotel and Casino."