Hey everyone, time for a new story i have been working on for a while, so I am eager to see what people think.
Here you guys go!
Dedicated to ideas concocted at one in the morning
Chapter 1: A Nights Event
All these people everywhere
kept me waiting and not knowing
holding to myself fear is all that kept me going
-Minimal Compact
Fireworks exploded in the sky with an explosion of color. Lighting up the star filled night in a way never thought possible. Amazing shades of blue, white, red and green exploded in the sky, capturing the crowds of people in the jaw dropping display.
Five friends sat under the stars, faces turned upwards toward the sky. They were all amazed at the sight, despite from where they were sitting, they could only see a fraction of the stars. The friends had chosen to sit in a small clearing away from the noisy crowd, away from the inconsiderate people.
These five teenagers were what schools like to call the outcasts.
There was only one guy in the group, and he was scary to all the other guys. He was known as Saïx, and was feared at school because of his 'berserk' state that he gets when his anger gets out of control. He was really only able to control his temper around select people, and right now those select people were the girls sitting around him.
Next to Saïx was a blonde. She sat with her knees to her chest, arms wrapped around them. She clung a notebook tightly in both hands. Her blonde hair was swept across one shoulder and she wore a pure white sun dress, perfect for the warm summer night. People could hardly get a word out of her, and some of her teachers didn't even know her name. Her best friends did though and it was Namine.
On the other side of Namine was a red head. She, if she wanted to, could have been one of 'the popular kids'. She wouldn't let herself be swept into that group, after they talked trash about Xion, her cousin. Kairi wore a bright pink dress, covered with zippers. It went perfectly with her red hair.
Xion, Kairi's cousin sat next to her. They were complete opposites, Xion had black hair and dressed in all black from head to toe. She wore a studded bracelet and kept to herself. She didn't have much self-confidence, and kept everything bottled up. Xion was loyal though and was more than willing to give herself up for her friends or the greater good.
All three of the girls had bright blue eyes.
Finally there was one last person. She sat next to Namine, and was the oldest of the group. Sparkling silver hair that fell down to her shoulders, she had purple eyes that matched her strange hair color. She sat perfectly still next to Namine looking at the fireworks. Namine was her younger sister, and everyone else was her closest friend. Emi wore a plain dark red t-shirt and black jeans.
The fireworks would soon end and the crowds would disperse. Emi and Namine would go and stay with Saïx tonight, his parents didn't really care if he brought girls over. As the last of the fireworks faded from the night, Emi and her friends got up from where they were sitting and started to make their way out of the clearing. The night itself without the fireworks was dark, but where the crowds were the lights came on, giving their small clearing just enough light for them to be able to see.
As everyone slowly got up, they began to chat about what they saw and how beautiful the fireworks were. Emi was the only one not partaking in the conversation. She was looking into the words, convinced that she had heard something. When a while passed and nothing emerged and no other sound was heard, she turned away and followed her friends who went ahead of her.
"Emi! Hurry up!" She heard Namine call. Emi quickened her pace, quickly catching up with her friends and sister.
The trail got really small just for an instant, and then opened up into the area where the crowd was. Everyone had to go through one at a time, with Saïx going first. The lights in the main clearing shut off; everyone else always leaves right after the fireworks end.
Emi was the last person to leave the trail. As she took a step out, a hand grabbed her arm and pulled her roughly out. Without even thinking she reached into her pocket and grabbed her knife, before she can even fight the knife was ripped from her hand. Emi was forced against something, something alive. She realized that her back was pressed against someone, not something. She could feel them breathing but not their heartbeat. She tried to get away, but a pair of arms had her pinned in place. She looked up and saw each of her friends in the exact same position that she was in, even her sister.
In the blink of an eye, Emi's head was tilted to the side and she felt a breath on her throat. The next second pain pierced her neck, like a snake bit her. The pain quickly passed, leaving only awareness that someone actually had their mouth on her neck. This seemed to last for hours but was really only minutes.
Emi felt herself begin to grow weaker, her knees starting to buckle. She knew that if whatever he was doing kept up, she wouldn't last much longer. With the last of her strength she stomped her foot down on the offenders. She felt him grunt and he lifted his mouth away from her neck. Without saying a word, he picked her up and brought her over to one of the other men there.
"Alright get her out of here. Everyone stop we need to check them all." The man said. The one carrying her started walking. Emi saw the stars, then darkness, and now a ceiling. She kept herself awake.
"Hey are you alright?" the man asked
"My names Zexion" he said. And with a swift motion he pulled back his hood.
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