Hello, Dreamer here. I just found a poem on my computer that I feel describes Naruto and wanted to post it. I don't know if anyone will read it or not but I wanted to share it with those who might be interested. If you read this please leave a review telling me what you like and don't like about it. I love writing poetry but I think I am horrible at it and would like to know what I can do to improve myself.
Hated and feared by all those surrounding
Sadness and pain inside you mounting
You can pretend it isn't there
But one day they will see your tears
Put on a mask and pretend
That one day the pain will end
And that they will see you
The true you, not the mask
But in the meantime
Return to them in kind
The hate they gave
And the pain too
With laughs smiles
All the while
Haunted eyes
Look back
At you
Forever
Thanks for reading and please take the time to review. It would really help me to improve my poems.