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SALAZAR'S INVASION- Prologue
AN/ I decided to re write Salazar's invasion because I fucked up the other one and I didn't really like it. This time I'm starting with a prologue.
"I did it," the young man thought to himself in pure relief, "I finally finished them." He held up what appeared to be some kind of watch in front of his face. On his work desk sat two more. "We can finally go back and stop all of this happening, and we won't just be entering some other timeline but our own. With these time watches we won't be constricted." He looked to the ceiling, tired eyes swelling with gratitude and relief, "My god mother you're a genius to come up with these blue prints."
AN/ Prologue. Short and sweet. To be honest I really wasn't liking this story when it was uploaded before. The beginning was fine but then it went too far into Trunks' story telling and I wanna make it all more subtle and not so rushed. I don't want it to happen all at once because that's boring. The next couple of chapters aren't much different but the ones where I start the story telling will be.
And another thing. I need some reviews to tell me what I should do with the way the stories set out. Should I continue centering it or would you find it easier if it was aligned to the left?
