This is my first Fanfiction so please review it and please tell me ways in with I can improve! Also im taking some OC's!

Mako ran as fast as he could, nearly tripping over his own leg on the way. He was so excited from his battle the day before that he couldn't wait to battle another blader. He was told by leon that if he ever wanted a rematch that he must come to the beypark. With his beyblade Sol Lyrica in hand he pulled the 2 stadium doors open. He looked around and the beypark but it was mostly empty. Only a girl and a few young kids, standing at the arena area.

"I don't see Leon anywhere, me and lyrica wanted a rematch." Mako said.

Just then out of nowhere the girl shouted.

"Go now snow Lia, Special move! Snow blizzard! She shouted

Suddenly a massive snow storm erupted from her light blue bey. Leaving snow and ice all over the stadium floor, the kids beys were trapped unable to move.

" Are they having a tag match against that girl, and she looks like shes doing alright and her special move. THIS IS AMAZING!" Mako exclaimed

The small light blue beyblade smashed through the small beys sending them flying in many different directions.

"She just sent them flying!" Mako excitedly said

"Thats the way snow!" The girl said

Mako ran to the other side of the stadium revved up for a battle.

"Excuse me, do you mind battling me" Mako requested.

"I don't know, who are you" She questioned

"I'm Mako, your match with those kids was so great and it got me pumped. Im actually waiting for someone so if you don't mind could we please have a beyblade battle with me" Mako said.

"Sure, Im always up for a unknown challenge" she said. "I'm Icedra and i don't lose"

The 2 bladers readied their beys and Shouted 3,2,1 let it rip. Before shouting there Beys into the arena.

"My lyrica is alot taller than her bey, but I don't know what she is capable of" Mako thought. "Go now Sol Lyrica."

Sol Lyrica smashed into the small bey, sending it into the wall of the stadium before it bounced back.

"Strange, I can't tell what kinda bey that is. With a wheel and tip like that I would think It was an attack type but that attack wasn't all that strong. Either he is gauging me or he is just a weak blader." Icedra thought. "We wont go down that easily."

Snow Lia circled around the stadium before running into Lyrica from behind, pushing it towards the end of the ring.

"Am man, I can't stop her. Her beyblade is so heavy.I have to get out of it for now" Mako said

Lyrica ran faster breaking away from Snow lia.

"My strategy has to be perfect, or she will deflect my attempts and send me flying." Mako thought.

Lyrica shot towards the defense type.

What will mako do against this new challenge in the blade Icedra. TO BE CONTINUED.