Hi guys this is my first fanfic so don't be too harsh. Thank you for taking your time to read this.
Chapter 1 A new pony in town
As Twilight Sparkle looked out her window, she began to cry. She couldnt handle the pain anymore. Always having your friends was nice but she wanted something more, but she just couldn't place her hoof on what she was wanting. She used her magic to bring a book to herself. She began to read when out of nowhere there was a knock at her door.
She wiped away her tears and walked to the door. She answered it to find a pony with gold armor on. "He must have came from the castle." She thought to herself. "Hi, my name is Flash Sentry and I am new in town." He said with a smile on his muzzle. "Hi, i'm Twilight Sparkle." She smiled back but deep down she was dying.
"I know I kinda ran into five friends of yours and they all insisted I come to your house and ask if you can show me around. You see they're kinda following me, too. So I had no choice but to come here and ask." He said while slowly lowered his head. "They are kind of annoying at first, but they'll grow on you trust me, Mr. Sentry." Twilight said.
"I hope so." He said as he raised his head to look at her eyes. "Gosh she has such beautiful eyes." She quickly turned away to hide her blushing face. She had never had another pony look at her that way. Why did she feel so happy talking to him.
He started to walk away and then heard "Wait... don't stop, go on." It was Rainbow Dash. He turned his head around before Twilight had a chance to shut the door. "So how about that tour?" She looked at him. "Yes i'd love to show you around ponyville. How about tomorrow around lunch?" She said with a smile on her face bigger than life itself. "That'll be fine." He then walked off.
Rainbow Dash bolted around the corner. "Well what did she say?" He just kept walking and said "She said she would see me around lunch tomorrow, why?" She started to do flips and loops in the air. "Do you know what this means, she likes you. I mean did you see her look away from you when you looked her and the eyes. She was probably blushing." He stopped. He looked at her like his mind had been blown.
He started thinking hard. "Maybe Rainbow Dash is right. Maybe she does like me. Or maybe it is just going to be a tour. I don't know i'll just wait and find out tomorrow." He looked at Rainbow Dash. "I hope you're right." She looked at him and winked. "Trust me I know these things."
Well thank you again for taking your time to read this. I hope you liked it. Feel free to critique me on anything just don't be too harsh. Also be on the look out for my shadamy stories.