Trouble In Paradise!!!
Hee hee hee! This is my very first story so if anyone could help me to tweak my stories a bit,
please say it nicely and gently 'cuz I sometimes I could be a bit sensitive. Anyway, I hope you
like the story. I had my friends read it and it's pretty cool. Enjoy!
After the many adventures the Human Hams, they all decided to vacation in the ever tropical and
beautiful Hawaii. As the limo stopped, teenaged human-hams spewed out of the limo like the time
I made my friend laugh while drinking soda. (Some even came out of her nose...)
"Okay! Let's beach partay!" Hamtaro laughed.
"Hey! I wanted to say that!!!" Stan cried.
Sandy whacked Stan with a huge beach umbrella,"Stan! Like, grow up would ya?!"
"Look who's talkin'! Hitting your twin brother like that. I'm more mature than YOU!"
"YOU can prove your mature by putting this umbrella up!"
"Okay! I'll prove it to you!'
Stan quickly grabbed the umbrella and searched for a spot to put the umbrella when suddenly,
He saw someone drowning. A GIRL drowning!
Just my luck! I'll save the girl, and she'll be head over heels for me!!
"Don't worry! I'll save you!"
Stan headed to the water and dove in after her. His eyes were stinging like mad, but he managed to
get her. Once he reached land, he opened his eyes, and was about to kiss her until she slapped
him. Instead of a girl, he saw an old woman in his arms.
"I know I'm good lookin', but that's no reason to kiss me!"
"Okay! Sorry..."
"Here. As a reward, I'll give you this."
Stan had a glittery hot pink clip that had a heart with wings on it, resting in the palm of his hand.
"Stan!" Sandy cried."Stan are you okay? You almost made out with an old lady! Anyway, we
have to check on Hamtaro! He just saved the girl you wanted to save!"
"How do you know that wanted to do that!?"
"Hello? We're twins! That equals twin telepathy! Come on let's go!!"
As they reached their destination, Stan discovered Sandy was right. There WAS a girl.
"Sweet! She's not breathing! Hamtaro, I'll do the honors."
Stan grabbed her and saw that she had chocolate brown hair with matching huge hamster ears.
Stan just sat there then leaned in. His lips were a just a hairline away from hers when she
coughed up salt water in his mouth. Stan screamed in pain (More like gagged) since the
saltwater went up his nose and they were burning like mad. Hee heh heh ha mwa haa...
"Thanks for saving me!" she said, grabbing Hamtaro's hand."What's your name?"
Hamtaro's face was turning red once he stared at her eyes, almost the color of periwinkle.
"H-h-h-hamm-m-m-m-t-t-t-a-a-a-r-r-r-o-o-"Hamtaro stammered nevously.
Why is this happening to me?! I'm always cool to be friends with girls, but with this girl...
Thanks for reading! I hope you liked it! I could really think of anything really funny since I read
Starburst's story. I didn't want to copy her... Anyway, R&R!!! I'll write back! I promise!