Disclaimer: I own nothing in Tortall, Tamora Pierce does.

A/N: This is a poetic drabble of what Eleni Cooper "saw" in Alanna when George first introduced them. I haven't attempted poetry of any kind since I finished school, so please be kind. Thanks!


"Give me your hand."

Alanna obeyed. The woman just touched her fingers, then pulled away as if she had been burned.

"Now what?" Alanna wanted to know.

Alanna: The First Adventure - Tamora Pierce


What Eleni Saw

White hot light with purple blazes

The Goddess' emerald green gaze

Heartbreak, grief, a father's neglect

Alone, except for servants, to raise

Wildness, stubbornness, bitterness, pain

Deception of the most cunning sort

Chopped hair, boy's clothes, never seen naked

Lips ever ready with a snappy retort

Dreadful sickness, heat, horrible pain

Revelations at the height of a fight

Friendships, love, complicated romance

Hopes, passions, disappointment in the night

Eyes of purple, seen in eyes of hazel

The same seen in eyes of sapphire

One would become the first troubled love

The other would become love's lasting desire

Death, healing, new love, new lives

Horror, redemption, security at last

Struggles to live a life free from pain

All seen so briefly, so fast


"Poor lass," There was pity in the woman's face. "The Goddess has Her hand on you. You've been given a hard path to walk." She tried to smile. "Luck to you Alanna of Trebond. You'll need it."

Alanna: The First Adventure - Tamora Pierce


A/N: Please be honest - R&R. Thanks!