Here is my first fanfic in English. It's a translation of my own fic "Cuándo él me pidió matrimonio".
I translated this for myself and English is not my natural language. I only did it for practice. I hope this is ok.
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter universe, with its locations and characters are J. K. Rowling's, not mine.
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It was Saturday and there was not classes. As I had finished my homework the day before, I decided to visit my boyfriend. Severus had some papers to mark but I rarely scaped to see him without a previous date, he put the away. We went into his private chambers and sat down on the couch, he with a Firewhisky glass on hand a I with a Butterbeer. We spoke about a lot of things for a long time but we did not say anything. I noticed that Sev was a little bit nervous, and you know how he is, he never, or hardly ever, lets his feelings to be seen. Suddenly, he asked me in a casual way:
—Do you know what to do after graduate, Harry?
—I'm not sure—I answered—. I'm thinking in making a muggle degree.
—I thought that you wanted to be an Auror—he told.
—And I wanted, but I already have enough dark wizards for the rest of my life thank to the war—I answered quietly—. Also, I want have the same opportunities and live my university time like any other boy, without all the Boy-Who-Lived-And-Won thing.
—It's ok with me—he approved—. And do you know where you'll live?
—Well... I was thinking about going to Potter Manor. Maybe there I can learn more about my family.
—I see—and Sev became disillusioned almost imperceptibly.
—But I'm open at all kind of suggestions—I added when I saw mu words effect over him.
—At all kind?— he asked with renovated illusions. I nodded— Then...
He began to look for something in his robe pocket. When he found it, he got up, them knelt down, extended the thing what he was looking for, and staring to me said:
—Harry Potter, would you marry me?
I saw to him, the I put my eyes in the simple ring he tended to me and then I return my sight to his eyes. There was fear in them, fear that my answer was not. And it was clear for me, I couldn't live without him.
My eyes locked on his and I answered him without doubt:
—Yes, Severus, I want marry you.
He got up and put the ring on my finger, kissing me.
—Soon, that kiss led to many others and what comes after that it's your father and I's matter and I'm not talking about it with you—he finished the story—. And now, to sleep. Good night, my children.
—Good night, daddy.
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What do you think? I did a good job translating this? Please, review and tell me what I can improve for the next time.
Thank you for reading.
See you.