(A/N: Hey, this is like my first fic, plz be nice but if you want to...um it's ok? Anyway, it's not really my first fan fic, but this is official I guess. Arrrggghhh! I'm so uncertain these days. I'm writing this story as it goes but I hope it flows out nicely. I know it's not the smartest thing to do but I'll proofread. Please, please CAN SOMEONE BE MY BETA-READER??? Just email me, or say it in your reviews. Thx and I hope you enjoy! This is not)
Just a little clearage, 'stuff between these are thoughts (unless it's between " ") ' and "stuff here are words said aloud"
Disclaimer: You know that I so didn't make up the Harry Potter characters. Though characters you're not familiar with are my characters (unless you forgot). And the plot, you could say, is mine, even though this story is sort of a cliché. Why am I writing, I honestly don't know...
This is not a really good chapter, it's quite boring, I bet you
HERE I GO...
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Seems Like Forever-BY Susie-Clover
Chapter 1: This is My Life
Lily is well, not the most popular girl in school, even though she IS head girl. The total outcast some would say. Lily was chubby but not fat, she was a little pale with bushy bright red hair. The only things she liked about herself were her beautiful sparkling forest green eyes that looked beautiful even under big red-rectangular framed glasses. A guy could just melt to see her eyes regardless of the other parts, although no one takes more than a second to look at her because of the major distractions that stand out more. And the other thing she like about herself was her lips. They were soft delicate lips that can give a meaningful, memorable, and the most perfect kiss. The only friends she had were her cousin, Amber Wright and a non-relative, Lucy Hayden.
Lucy had long dark-brown hair just above her elbows with hazel-coloured eyes. She had a tan that made her look hot, she was in her 7th year and in Gryffindor. She doesn't hang out with the Marauders although Sirius takes all the chances he can get to ask her out. Though, he can't get it in his brainless head that the answer will be none other than 'no'. She had almost the same style as Amber except for the boys. Lucy was pretty popular but has no boy in her life whatsoever.
Amber was probably one of the girls who's head-over-heels for the Marauders. She was pretty but not the most beautiful girl in school. She had light brown hair with blonde highlights and sapphire blue eyes. She was slim and about 5'7" tall. She was a 6th year prefect. She usually wore tight clothes and a short skirt, which is so vice versa for Lily. Where as, Lily wear baggy clothing in her spare time to hide her chubbiness better.
"Brrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiinnnnnnngggggggggg!" Her alarm went off. Lily slammed the snooze button.
'Great! It's Monday' thought Lily, It was the second week of school in her 7th year. Nothing has changed since her first day at Hogwarts. How she made it through those years of torture, it's hard to say,
'Well, at least the bright side to this is that this is my last year, free from those preppy sluts, and the annoying Marauders: James Potter, the arrogant ring leader, Sirius Black, his mental sarcastic sidekick, and Remus Lupin, probably the most intelligent, nicest, hottest guy on Earth (A/N: I'm taking Peter out of this, he just doesn't go with the group; the odd-ball-out if you know what I mean).' thought Lily dreamily. Lily closed her eyes, but remembered that breakfast already started.
"Great, I can't wash my hair again." How long has it been, a week and two days? All she could tell was that her bushy hair seems all so greasy and smelly. "Oh well, guess I could do it tomorrow," said Lily annoyed.
"BRRRRRRRRRIINNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG" Her alarm went. Lily shut the alarm and got up half asleep. She brushed her braced teeth, changed her clothes, got her books and went downstairs to the Great Hall.
There stood four long tables for each house. She went to sit at her usual place on the table wear no one bothered her, well almost. See, she's unpopular but famous for being the prime target of pranks pulled by none other than the Marauders.
"Why can't they just leave me alone?!" muttered Lily quite loudly as she ate her cereal.
"Excuse me? What did you say? You want everybody to leave you and me alone?" smiled James rather evilly.
"What do you want Potty? This isn't my day so just leave me alone with no 'you'." said Lily.
"Don't call me Potty, Bushbeard Evans, as if I would ever allow us to be stuck together alone or in any other cases 'with you,'" spat James "anyway, I wanted to give you this..." James handed Lily a small box. Lily opened it and saw a ring with a beautiful smooth stone bordered with tiny diamonds 'probably fake' thought Lily, The ring had a metal sheen that glistened. Lily was quite fond of it and then remembered who gave it to her.
"What? After those ugly comments, you want to marry me?" Lily asked sarcastically.
"Thought you would like it" smiled James. For a second, Lily thought it was a kind smile, but for a second, maybe a nanosecond, 'Hello, this is James Potter we're talking about not Prince Charming'
"What the hell? Why the hell did you give this to me, don't you have your whore-iffic girlfriends to give it to? What makes you think I want this piece of crap?" said Lily. She almost felt guilty for calling the ring a piece of crap, almost.
"F.Y.I, it's not crap, it's a mood reflector. It shows you my mood, blue means happy and so on, and when it turns pearl, it means I'm nearby." said James matter-of-factly.
"Again, why do I need this? Give it to Beverly, I don't want it. Like why would I want it? Why do I want to know how you're feeling, it's disgusting! I know your mood, you only have one, and that's 'horny' but I don't think they have that here. At least I know you're not like that around me, thank God!" added Lily. James rolled his eyes and had a look that shouted 'ya, thank God!'.
"Whatever, I don't need this, I mean why do I wanna know that you are 'nearby'? I had enough of you as it is." Lily sighed, "I guess it comes to its uses when it shows me the sign that you're nearby, to give me the cue to go further away from you!" said Lily satisfied.
"You know I'm irresistible..." said James, with his nails rubbing on his chest. Lily rolled her eyes, "Get over yourself."
"You talk to much you know, Evans? Anyway I'm outtie." with that, James got up and smirked and walked to his friends with a gang of girls around them.
'I think James should get his brains check, if he has any, because he had a lot of nerve to-' thought Lily but was interrupted when the ring turned yellow, to purple, to green. Lily was utterly confused when the stone turned blood red. 'Uh, oh! This isn't one of their-' but was again interrupted when blood-red liquid spread out from the ring.
(A/N: I don't know what I'm writing about. I don't really know a lot about pranks so spare me, if you can think of a better one that could go with this, tell me so I can change it.)
Lily struggled to take off the ring, but then the stone turned pink, Lily would of gazed at it longer if only what happened next didn't happen. The stone got bigger, bigger, and bigger and exploded in front of her face. With all the goo on her school uniform; the pink goo was like acid, it started to melt all the clothes she was wearing (and she was wearing lots of layers of clothing) but that didn't stop the acid going, it just did its job. Wooo! She stunk; if you were the audience to this, you'd rather go breathe in a trashcan. When halfway melting her uniform, something else was showing up in replacement of her clothing, a hot-pink coloured bikini.
"Omigod, this isn't happening. Oh Lord, please say this is just a dream, i mean ' nightmare!'" Lily pleaded and cried. Her chubbiness showed now all right. With some plump part in the sides, etc... Amber and Lucy were talking about something while they entered the Great Hall and saw what was happening. At first, they didn't take in what was happening, but when they heard the roars of laughter and saw whom everybody was pointing at...
"Oh gosh!" said Amber surprised and ran over to Lily with Lucy following. Lily was so upset.
"W-Wha-What happened?" asked Lucy shakily. Lily cried louder while everybody laughed harder as her skin rurned a tint of red.
"P-Prank" sobbed Lily as she pointed to the Marauders. Before she could mention who did it, even though all the members of the Marauders planned this, Lucy marched to the Marauders angrily. At the sight of Sirius, she immediately slapped him across the face.
"What the hell was that for? I didn't do anything it was James, go slap him!" shouted Sirius as he and some girls caressed his slapped cheek.
"You planned this together, didn't you?!" raged Lucy. She looked over to Sirius and to James, and then to Remus, "Are you involved?!" Lucy asked fiercely.
"Well, I came up with the idea-" Lucy grunted, "but-but I didn't know they chose Evans, THAT was Sirius' idea" said Remus pointing to Sirius. Girls were screaming madly as Lucy raised her hand for Sirius' other cheek (for some reason she loved hurting him), but was interrupted when Lily got up on the table to start a bellydance (part of the prank, maybe the pink goo got to her head?). Amber helped her down the table. Lucy rushed over and helped Amber to the Moaning Myrtle's bathroom.
"I'm Ok" weeped Lily while she tried to get up. Lucy came to the bathroom and handed clean robes and stuff. "I better hurry to class" said Lily quickly.
"Wow, do you have any idea how brave that is?" asked Amber trying to cheer Lily up. Lily snorted.
"Ya well, guess that's why I was sorted to Gryffindor."
Professor Flitwich gave her a spell to clear off all the messiness and the pink tan. Lily pointed her wand to herself, "Lavio."
"Why didn't you do that before?" asked Amber as if it was the most obvious thing to do.
"Well, one thing is I had no control and second I was distraught!"
"Oops, sorry." apologized Amber.
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"So what do we have today, Luce?" asked Lily as Amber went her separate way.
"Um, let me think...Oh, we have Charms, then Divination, History of Magic, and Transfiguration"
Lily smiled. Charms was her best class, she got her house a lot of points for answering Professor Flitwick's questions. At least that cheered her up.
When Lily got to her seat, she heard a few people snickering and whispering.
Lily earned 30 points during her Charms class and 5 points in Transfiguration, although James did SO much better, 'I wonder why, it's so difficult, transforming Boggarts yourself to something else intentionally?!' wondered Lily.
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After Transfiguration, Lily rushed to her common room that she HAD to share with James, what luck?. But then she literally bumped into someone with a quite impressive body. 'Wow' thought Lily, but then saw that the body belonged to James.
"Watch where you're going Bushy-Bitch, you don't want to destroy Jamesie's uniform with your greasy hair, who knows how long has it been since your last wash, a year, two years, never?" smirked Beverly holding James' arm.
"What the hell are you doing here?" barked Lily.
"Chill," said James, "It's none of your business, so why don't you and your hair, fuck off." With that Beverly stood in front of him with her back turned to Lily, Beverly's hands were going around James' body and snaked her hands around James' handsome neck, while James did the same, but on Beverly's waist. James kissed Beverly roughly. At the sight of that, Lily thought she was going to throw up, she looked at them with immense disgust.
"Get a room," muttered Lily.
"Exactly what we were gonna do, so if you don't mind, you worthless piece of shit, why don't you get your butt-ugly face and get out of the way!...Candy-Face (password to Lily and James' common room)" shouted James.
When they entered, Lily followed and ran to her room crying, thinking about what James said.
'Am I worthless? Well I'll show you butt-ugly.' said Lily confidently and stormed to the Great Hall for dinner and stared at the Marauders and some girls sitting there.
"What a pathetic piece of flesh they are, that bunch! Even Remus! That bloody git came up with the idea!" sighed Lily aghasted, then stared at the laughing James.
'Laugh while you still can, Potter. I'll get you back, James, don't know what it is now, but I'll find a way. This may be my life...but nobody said I can't change it' thought Lily darkly.
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Okey dokie, done with the first chapter. Please Review, plzplzplzplzplz........Should I continue or not? And your ideas could make a great contribution, if you want, thank you and I hope you enjoyed that. I personally thought it was bad....
Well, whatever you tell me what YOU think,
*****OH, CAN SOMEONE TELL ME HOW YOU PUT STUFF IN BOLD, UNDERLINE, AND ITALICS????*****
Just a little clearage, 'stuff between these are thoughts (unless it's between " ") ' and "stuff here are words said aloud"
Disclaimer: You know that I so didn't make up the Harry Potter characters. Though characters you're not familiar with are my characters (unless you forgot). And the plot, you could say, is mine, even though this story is sort of a cliché. Why am I writing, I honestly don't know...
This is not a really good chapter, it's quite boring, I bet you
HERE I GO...
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Seems Like Forever-BY Susie-Clover
Chapter 1: This is My Life
Lily is well, not the most popular girl in school, even though she IS head girl. The total outcast some would say. Lily was chubby but not fat, she was a little pale with bushy bright red hair. The only things she liked about herself were her beautiful sparkling forest green eyes that looked beautiful even under big red-rectangular framed glasses. A guy could just melt to see her eyes regardless of the other parts, although no one takes more than a second to look at her because of the major distractions that stand out more. And the other thing she like about herself was her lips. They were soft delicate lips that can give a meaningful, memorable, and the most perfect kiss. The only friends she had were her cousin, Amber Wright and a non-relative, Lucy Hayden.
Lucy had long dark-brown hair just above her elbows with hazel-coloured eyes. She had a tan that made her look hot, she was in her 7th year and in Gryffindor. She doesn't hang out with the Marauders although Sirius takes all the chances he can get to ask her out. Though, he can't get it in his brainless head that the answer will be none other than 'no'. She had almost the same style as Amber except for the boys. Lucy was pretty popular but has no boy in her life whatsoever.
Amber was probably one of the girls who's head-over-heels for the Marauders. She was pretty but not the most beautiful girl in school. She had light brown hair with blonde highlights and sapphire blue eyes. She was slim and about 5'7" tall. She was a 6th year prefect. She usually wore tight clothes and a short skirt, which is so vice versa for Lily. Where as, Lily wear baggy clothing in her spare time to hide her chubbiness better.
"Brrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiinnnnnnngggggggggg!" Her alarm went off. Lily slammed the snooze button.
'Great! It's Monday' thought Lily, It was the second week of school in her 7th year. Nothing has changed since her first day at Hogwarts. How she made it through those years of torture, it's hard to say,
'Well, at least the bright side to this is that this is my last year, free from those preppy sluts, and the annoying Marauders: James Potter, the arrogant ring leader, Sirius Black, his mental sarcastic sidekick, and Remus Lupin, probably the most intelligent, nicest, hottest guy on Earth (A/N: I'm taking Peter out of this, he just doesn't go with the group; the odd-ball-out if you know what I mean).' thought Lily dreamily. Lily closed her eyes, but remembered that breakfast already started.
"Great, I can't wash my hair again." How long has it been, a week and two days? All she could tell was that her bushy hair seems all so greasy and smelly. "Oh well, guess I could do it tomorrow," said Lily annoyed.
"BRRRRRRRRRIINNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG" Her alarm went. Lily shut the alarm and got up half asleep. She brushed her braced teeth, changed her clothes, got her books and went downstairs to the Great Hall.
There stood four long tables for each house. She went to sit at her usual place on the table wear no one bothered her, well almost. See, she's unpopular but famous for being the prime target of pranks pulled by none other than the Marauders.
"Why can't they just leave me alone?!" muttered Lily quite loudly as she ate her cereal.
"Excuse me? What did you say? You want everybody to leave you and me alone?" smiled James rather evilly.
"What do you want Potty? This isn't my day so just leave me alone with no 'you'." said Lily.
"Don't call me Potty, Bushbeard Evans, as if I would ever allow us to be stuck together alone or in any other cases 'with you,'" spat James "anyway, I wanted to give you this..." James handed Lily a small box. Lily opened it and saw a ring with a beautiful smooth stone bordered with tiny diamonds 'probably fake' thought Lily, The ring had a metal sheen that glistened. Lily was quite fond of it and then remembered who gave it to her.
"What? After those ugly comments, you want to marry me?" Lily asked sarcastically.
"Thought you would like it" smiled James. For a second, Lily thought it was a kind smile, but for a second, maybe a nanosecond, 'Hello, this is James Potter we're talking about not Prince Charming'
"What the hell? Why the hell did you give this to me, don't you have your whore-iffic girlfriends to give it to? What makes you think I want this piece of crap?" said Lily. She almost felt guilty for calling the ring a piece of crap, almost.
"F.Y.I, it's not crap, it's a mood reflector. It shows you my mood, blue means happy and so on, and when it turns pearl, it means I'm nearby." said James matter-of-factly.
"Again, why do I need this? Give it to Beverly, I don't want it. Like why would I want it? Why do I want to know how you're feeling, it's disgusting! I know your mood, you only have one, and that's 'horny' but I don't think they have that here. At least I know you're not like that around me, thank God!" added Lily. James rolled his eyes and had a look that shouted 'ya, thank God!'.
"Whatever, I don't need this, I mean why do I wanna know that you are 'nearby'? I had enough of you as it is." Lily sighed, "I guess it comes to its uses when it shows me the sign that you're nearby, to give me the cue to go further away from you!" said Lily satisfied.
"You know I'm irresistible..." said James, with his nails rubbing on his chest. Lily rolled her eyes, "Get over yourself."
"You talk to much you know, Evans? Anyway I'm outtie." with that, James got up and smirked and walked to his friends with a gang of girls around them.
'I think James should get his brains check, if he has any, because he had a lot of nerve to-' thought Lily but was interrupted when the ring turned yellow, to purple, to green. Lily was utterly confused when the stone turned blood red. 'Uh, oh! This isn't one of their-' but was again interrupted when blood-red liquid spread out from the ring.
(A/N: I don't know what I'm writing about. I don't really know a lot about pranks so spare me, if you can think of a better one that could go with this, tell me so I can change it.)
Lily struggled to take off the ring, but then the stone turned pink, Lily would of gazed at it longer if only what happened next didn't happen. The stone got bigger, bigger, and bigger and exploded in front of her face. With all the goo on her school uniform; the pink goo was like acid, it started to melt all the clothes she was wearing (and she was wearing lots of layers of clothing) but that didn't stop the acid going, it just did its job. Wooo! She stunk; if you were the audience to this, you'd rather go breathe in a trashcan. When halfway melting her uniform, something else was showing up in replacement of her clothing, a hot-pink coloured bikini.
"Omigod, this isn't happening. Oh Lord, please say this is just a dream, i mean ' nightmare!'" Lily pleaded and cried. Her chubbiness showed now all right. With some plump part in the sides, etc... Amber and Lucy were talking about something while they entered the Great Hall and saw what was happening. At first, they didn't take in what was happening, but when they heard the roars of laughter and saw whom everybody was pointing at...
"Oh gosh!" said Amber surprised and ran over to Lily with Lucy following. Lily was so upset.
"W-Wha-What happened?" asked Lucy shakily. Lily cried louder while everybody laughed harder as her skin rurned a tint of red.
"P-Prank" sobbed Lily as she pointed to the Marauders. Before she could mention who did it, even though all the members of the Marauders planned this, Lucy marched to the Marauders angrily. At the sight of Sirius, she immediately slapped him across the face.
"What the hell was that for? I didn't do anything it was James, go slap him!" shouted Sirius as he and some girls caressed his slapped cheek.
"You planned this together, didn't you?!" raged Lucy. She looked over to Sirius and to James, and then to Remus, "Are you involved?!" Lucy asked fiercely.
"Well, I came up with the idea-" Lucy grunted, "but-but I didn't know they chose Evans, THAT was Sirius' idea" said Remus pointing to Sirius. Girls were screaming madly as Lucy raised her hand for Sirius' other cheek (for some reason she loved hurting him), but was interrupted when Lily got up on the table to start a bellydance (part of the prank, maybe the pink goo got to her head?). Amber helped her down the table. Lucy rushed over and helped Amber to the Moaning Myrtle's bathroom.
"I'm Ok" weeped Lily while she tried to get up. Lucy came to the bathroom and handed clean robes and stuff. "I better hurry to class" said Lily quickly.
"Wow, do you have any idea how brave that is?" asked Amber trying to cheer Lily up. Lily snorted.
"Ya well, guess that's why I was sorted to Gryffindor."
Professor Flitwich gave her a spell to clear off all the messiness and the pink tan. Lily pointed her wand to herself, "Lavio."
"Why didn't you do that before?" asked Amber as if it was the most obvious thing to do.
"Well, one thing is I had no control and second I was distraught!"
"Oops, sorry." apologized Amber.
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"So what do we have today, Luce?" asked Lily as Amber went her separate way.
"Um, let me think...Oh, we have Charms, then Divination, History of Magic, and Transfiguration"
Lily smiled. Charms was her best class, she got her house a lot of points for answering Professor Flitwick's questions. At least that cheered her up.
When Lily got to her seat, she heard a few people snickering and whispering.
Lily earned 30 points during her Charms class and 5 points in Transfiguration, although James did SO much better, 'I wonder why, it's so difficult, transforming Boggarts yourself to something else intentionally?!' wondered Lily.
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After Transfiguration, Lily rushed to her common room that she HAD to share with James, what luck?. But then she literally bumped into someone with a quite impressive body. 'Wow' thought Lily, but then saw that the body belonged to James.
"Watch where you're going Bushy-Bitch, you don't want to destroy Jamesie's uniform with your greasy hair, who knows how long has it been since your last wash, a year, two years, never?" smirked Beverly holding James' arm.
"What the hell are you doing here?" barked Lily.
"Chill," said James, "It's none of your business, so why don't you and your hair, fuck off." With that Beverly stood in front of him with her back turned to Lily, Beverly's hands were going around James' body and snaked her hands around James' handsome neck, while James did the same, but on Beverly's waist. James kissed Beverly roughly. At the sight of that, Lily thought she was going to throw up, she looked at them with immense disgust.
"Get a room," muttered Lily.
"Exactly what we were gonna do, so if you don't mind, you worthless piece of shit, why don't you get your butt-ugly face and get out of the way!...Candy-Face (password to Lily and James' common room)" shouted James.
When they entered, Lily followed and ran to her room crying, thinking about what James said.
'Am I worthless? Well I'll show you butt-ugly.' said Lily confidently and stormed to the Great Hall for dinner and stared at the Marauders and some girls sitting there.
"What a pathetic piece of flesh they are, that bunch! Even Remus! That bloody git came up with the idea!" sighed Lily aghasted, then stared at the laughing James.
'Laugh while you still can, Potter. I'll get you back, James, don't know what it is now, but I'll find a way. This may be my life...but nobody said I can't change it' thought Lily darkly.
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[2323 words in this chappie (without this notice)]
Okey dokie, done with the first chapter. Please Review, plzplzplzplzplz........Should I continue or not? And your ideas could make a great contribution, if you want, thank you and I hope you enjoyed that. I personally thought it was bad....
Well, whatever you tell me what YOU think,
*****OH, CAN SOMEONE TELL ME HOW YOU PUT STUFF IN BOLD, UNDERLINE, AND ITALICS????*****