Finally, the renewed Angels Fall (:
If you've already read most of this in crap detail please still read this as more happens and you must follow carefully to undertsand the plot(:
ENJOY:
The night was a sea of blackness, lethal waters that no-one daren't swim. And the only light came shining dimly down from the heavens as stars billions of miles away twinkled in the black sky.
And as a cold nipping breeze rippled the still air like pebbles in water somewhere on the half of the world that was now shrouded in darkness golden locks were lifted from a pair of elegant shoulders.
From far off one would think her a ghost, covered in trailing white, disturbing the fallen leaves of autumn that rustled in protest.
But of course it was no lost and lonely spirit that had not yet found the bravery needed to pass to the next world.
It was a young girl. With long strawberry blonde locks sitting at her back like spirals of ocean mystery curled behind a wall of suspense.
Her face was a sculpture of pure perfection, her eyes the colour of bright blue sapphires twinkling similarly to the stars above her. She had a perfect nose and perfect lips, thick and shaped, the colour of the pinkest horizon.
She could make men start wars for her smile and make women go insane with jealousy of her beauty.
Tonight was this girls 16th birthday and she walked without reason around the perimeter of the church that she had learnt to call home.
This girls name was Charlotte.
She was an angel. An angel that was cursed. Cursed to walk the unfair earth until she had fulfilled a purpose.
She was placed on the cruel earth to take the evil out of it.
Dracula.
She was blessed with great power, but "with great power comes great responsibility."
Charlotte had lived at the church all her life, found on the doorstep of the church in nothing but a bundle of blankets. Her mother found dead just outside the boundary of the church, a rich maiden who had run away from home to conceal her pregnancy. She had died just after giving birth to Charlotte.
The priests had found upon her the markings of an angel upon the tiny baby. Two tiny cuts in her back where wings would one day sprout forth from.
So Charlotte had been raised in the church and learnt to call it home. She prayed to her father in heaven and became a dedicated Christian.
And as a clock somewhere above her chimed 1am she had turned 16. She was of age, the age where her angelic powers came to life. However It would be years of training before she was to face Dracula. But now the power to sprout wings and cast light was hers.
Charlotte smiled as a breeze wafted past and she turned and walked back towards the church.
Little did she know that the very thing she was intent on destroying was a little too close for comfort. As a dark shadow flew over the distanced mountains. A dark shadow that would change her life forever.
Now if you were kind enough to read, please be kind enough to reveiw?
Constructive Critisism WELCOMED as an old friend(:
PLEASE READ:
I know I said I'd change the title but I really am stuck for one, so any ideas are welcomed as you get to know more of the story!
Because "Angels Fall" is pretty suckish --
REVEIW BITCHES(:
signed:chaseyoungsdaughter.