I will re-write it fully so please understand... It would be a better story I promise...
"Hey guys... Has anyone here know a girl named Nashi Heartfilia Dragneel ?" A boy ( 6 years old ) with black haired ask looking around the city. "Why shouldn't we know ? She's the daughter of the heroes," an elderly man answered. "So... Where is she if I may ask ?" "Haven't you heard ?" "Heard about what ?" The boy asked the elderly man. "It was told that Nashi Heartfilia Dragneel has disappeared together with her twin after their parents funeral," the elderly man tell. "What ?" He was shocked hearing the new info. "She had disappear from public since 3 years ago," an elderly woman answers. "Okay then thank you for answering my question auntie, uncle," the boy said as he leave the two elderly people and go to the forest. He walked constantly for probably 15 minutes until he found a treehouse that could fit for a very big family. Even though it looked so poor on the outside, the inside is a very elegant house with electricity, magic water pump, some big sofa, 20 Queen size bed, 20 bathroom full of luxury, and many Lacrima including a very rare life lacrima. "Hey Lu-tan," he shout wondering where she was. "Na-chan I'm over here," the boy followed the girl voice to a room which were twice it size of other room. He then saw a pinkish blonde hair with sea blue eyes and wears a white sun dress that reach her knee was sitting with her back against the bed head."I haven't found the girl yet..." The boy said. "It's okay Nasu-kun," "are you sure Luna-tan ?" "Yes... It's just a piece of memory I'm not even sure she's the girl my mom was talking about," the girl Luna answered. "Yeah... we had been searching for her for... For... How long had we been searching for that troublesome girl again ?" "3 whole years." Luna then giggled. "Yeah,3 whole Years," Nasu was very angry. Luna then coughed. "Luna... Are you okay ?" "I'm fine Na-chan... It's just... I'm getting dizzy again..." Luna said. "Not again..." Nasu sighed. "Na-chan," Luna whispered as her consciousness slip. "I'm sorry Luna... Ever since that accident no one could Heal you... I'm... I'm really sorry... I know you since we were born but... I never have seen you so fragile... Every time I hug you... I felt that.. If I'm to strong, I'll break you... I want to see your carefree self that can't be hold back by sickness... It's my fault that accident happened... I'm sorry Luna," Nasu said in a low voice. Even in distance you could hear his breaking voice full of regrets. Tears strolled down his face as he was silently moping to realizing he was reliving the event.
FLASH BACK 3 years and a half before the present...
"hey Nasu... Is it safe to go here ?" Luna ask as she was holding Nasu's hand tightly. "It's okay Luna... If something happened I'll be there to protect you," Nasu grinned. "I'm afraid Nasu..." "Just hold my hand and everything would be okay," he grinned another 700 watt smile. Luna hold Nasu hand stronger as she sees the creepy house. The tree was all dead giving the dead impression and the door that was squeaky make the horror impression and what other aspect that you think it was a haunted house. They walked together and explore the house. Luna's stomach was churning filled with bad things. She has a bad feeling about this... "Na-Nasu... I-I think someone's f-following u-us," Luna stuttered quite badly. "Don't worry... no one live here so it's fine... No one would be following us..." Natsu give another smile. "Okay... If you say so," Luna said easily feeling save together with Nasu. But Luna's feeling is right.. A shadow of a person was following them. "Nasu... I don't think it's save anymore," Luna said as she was hugging her other hand as she retracted her hand from Nasu's hand. "It's okaaaaaaayyyyy," Nasu dragged his word as he was smelling something that interest him that he run towards the smell source. "Nasu..." Luna shout trying to reach him running following him. She fall then she lost track of him. She pull herself up and shout searching for his best friend, Luna kept shouting his name until she give up and give up and said,"NASU... NASU... I'm... I'm scared," Lucy said the last part. She then heard panting sound and go towards the source of the sound. She hide herself and saw Nasu was pinned to the ground and couldn't attack using his magic. As the guy who pinned Nasu down wanted to stab him. Luna got in the way, making the guy stumbled backwards and get herself stab in her right chest. Right at her right lungs. She fall unconscious on top of Nasu and when Nasu saw her he carried her bridal style to the nearest doctor. They were having operation to take care of her right lungs and her heart that was a bit cut. She was in a critical condition for more then a month and when she wake up her chest has 8 knitted mark. "Um... What happened Nasu ?" Luna ask waking up. "Be-because of m-me yo-you were stabbed," Nasu sob. "It wasn't your fault it was the man who stabbed me... So cheer up Nasu," Luna then smiled and give Nasu a very reassuring smile. "I'm sorry that I couldn't protect you..." "It's fine Nasu Starlight," "but still I'm sorry Luna Flary," Nasu said. Nasu then lied in the bed next to her and sleep beside her.
PRESENT TIME...
"I guess I should start searching for more info... I'll definitely save you this time Luna," Nasu said as he goes out again to search for more info. "Hey do you think those brat could make it ?" "Of course they could Aquarius," "Leo-Kun... Why does we have to take care of them ? I'm sorry, I'm sorry," "What could we do Aries... It is Celestial Spirit King demand," the lion sigh seeing the princess lying in the bed. "We should take care of princess Luna. Even though I don't know why the King ask us to call her Princess," Loke smile gently. "Seeing her here reminded me of Layla-sama's death," Capricorn said. "It does," Aquarius frowned. "Hey Babe don't be sad... I'll bet that Layla-sama won't want 's to be sad 'bout 'er," Scorpio said Trying to brighten his girlfriends mood. "You're right," the mermaid wipe her falling tear and smiled gently. "I guess there's no need to hide my real form now," Aquarius said as she was swirled by clouds of steam. When the steam disappear there stood a light blue girl with white with golden stripe short, tank top with gold color and white stripe with some ruffles here and there and gold flip flop. "Guess we all need to change again so that no one will recognize us," Gemini said. They all change their appearance. But only 1 thing remains... Its their hair color. "Delilah," a very tiny voice groaned. "I'll be there in a minute princess," Aquarius change her name to Delilah while introducing her self. "Then I'll be back guys. Oh yeah don't forget to follow Nasu, if not he may be in big trouble," Delilah said to the other. "Sagittarius change your current identity with Tokuya Kogawa," Leo (now Akuto) command. "Moshi, Moshi Akuto-San," Tokuya Kogawa answered as he jumped out and follow Nasu. "Hey Riko (Cancer) could you help Rina (Aries) and Vina (Virgo) cook ?" Akuto command. "Of course," as Riko then go to the kitchen to help. "the rest of you guys could help clean the house," Leo said as Libra (Rukia), Capricorn (Kizu), Pisces (mother : Lucia, Son : Lucas), Taurus (Rukose), Gemini (Naruse), Scorpio (Juda), help cleaning the humongous house. Delilah then quit the room slowly and quietly closing the room door. She then sigh. "Vir-Vina... Has the porridge ready ?" "Yes, it has Delilah," Vina said as she quit the kitchen and give Delilah a bowl full of porridge. "Thank you Vina, by the way tell Akuto to send more back up for Nasu. Even though he has the platinum and crystal key he still need help. And I have a very bad feeling about this..." Delilah said.
"I will tell Akuto about it now Delilah... By the way, the porridge just done being made so be careful when you feed her, it's very hot," Vina said as he go towards where Akuto was. Delilah was going inside the door but when she sees the sun sets she remember of her... Her previous master... She said," I'm sorry Lucy... I was always rude to you... Please come back," Delilah shed her tears as she watch the sun sets. At that moment Luna's body glowed as she have some convulsion. Her body glow disappear leaving Luna gasping for air and having a very bad convulsion. Delilah who realized this let the bowl slip from her grasp. It break at the moment it reach the ground as Delilah run towards the room where Luna is. "LUNA," Delilah shout so worried. "LUNA... AKUTO, VINA, RINA ANYONE HELP," Delilah shout not knowing what to do. "What is it Delilah," Akuto shout as he opened the door so fast that the other need to hold their clothes so that their clothes won't flew. "Akuto... Help her," Delilah beg as she doesn't want another people that she come to love dies. "Vina fast the calmer injection," Akuto shout giving order. "Kizu, Lucas, Rukose, Juda, hold her," Akuto shout. They held her hand and legs that the only thing that could move from her was her chest and her head. "VINA," Akuto shout. "I'm here Akuto," Vina said as she injected the calming medicine on Luna's body. Luna's convulsion stopped slowly. "Wh-why did she so suddenly have convulsion ? "Rina ask. "I don't know... I just remembers Lucy-sama and then she have it," Delilah said. "I, I, it can't be right ?" eyes water as he falls to the ground his hand couldn't move and tears dripping.
"no... No DON'T REMIND ME OF HER AGAIN," Rina shout losing herself. "She's the best one I got yet... I can't protect her... I'm sorry... I'm sorry," Rina got Down to her knees and cried to Akuto's chest. "I know how you feel Aries... But... There was many of us that was unlucky to be with Yukino, Lucy, or Layla or other that was kind... I... I was.. I was angry for myself... To let L-Layla-sama dies ... I, I let it out on Lucy... How despicable am I ?" Delilah said covering her face with her hand as she was dropping herself down. "There will never be any mentioning of any dead summoner anymore.. Because it only make us drop down. So if we want to remember them let them be placed within our heart," Naruse said holding the place of her heart. "Yeah... Let's just go back to what we supposed to do," Akuto said agreeing with Naruse. They all divide to what they were doing. All of them except Tokuya thinks... "Could.. Could she be Lucy-sama reincarnation ? No it can't be," they then do what they should have do. After a few hours Nasu comeback with some food, drinks and calming medicine. "Hey Vina," he said as a pink haired girl as fast as lightning get to his side and bow," yes, Prince Nasu," "save this," Nasu said as he handed the plastic bag and goes to Luna's room. "Luna... I get a new story.. It is said that this year the Dragneel's will join the Grand Magic Games... It's in 2 months so let's see it okay," Nasu whispered as he lie down beside Luna and then fell asleep. "Hey, Akuto... It's time for us to recharge," "you're right Tokuya," with that all of them goes to celestial world to recharge.
This is it... I'll be waiting for more reviews ^_^ because reviews gives me the courage to do my best ^_^
