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On the smoldering remains on Takadona a groan came up from a figure on the ground. Where it's chest was is now a large blast wound. The figure couldn't help but laugh. It survived the bowcaster shot because he was a riot-control stormtrooper so his armour was harder. He looked around weakly the battlefield didn't have another living soul on it.
He slowly crawled towards his captain lying on the ground, Captain Troot, he knew that each captain had a emergency signal in case their battalion was left behind. He initiated it.
On the other side of the galaxy Snoke was addressing General Huxley.
"Good work on retrieving my apprentice but I fear the wounds inflicted on his body are to severe he might not survive."
"My lord." Began Huxley "I suggest that we find a suitable body to merge with Ren's own."
"I suggest you look for one immediately" commanded Snoke.
"It will be done my lord."
So new story I hope you guys like it. I personally actually found it quite hard to get the Commanders name as all the ones I thought of sounded weird.
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