Disclaimer: I don't own Percy Jackson Rick Riordian does. First fanfic so go easy on me.
Percy's POV
I am afraid of everything. Two time war hero and savior of Olympus, Percy Jackson, who has gone through hell and back was terrified for the first time since Tartarus. I am sitting with my girlfriend unaware of my surroundings she being the only thing that comforts me, my Wisegirl. I am but a shell of myself, my true self trying to break free, but when your tortured for 500 years and are cursed with half immortality and painful nightmares of your last torture you wouldn't be able to stay strong for long.
Flashback: 5 years ago
(Still Percy's POV)
The prophecy of the Seven finally came to an end. We have lost Leo who sacrificed himself to blow up Gaia and save everyone. We are all meeting in the Olympus throne room and by everyone I mean the seven (or six now, including me) and all of the campers from Camp Half Blood and the new found Roman demigods from New Rome. We all gathered around and looked expectantly at Zeus for him to begin who was beaming with pride for Jason. "Ahem" Everyone quieted down. "I would like all of the 7 to come forward please" Boomed Zeus' voice. We stepped forward and bowed. "I am granting you all Immortality and the praetors of New Rome and all Camp Half Blood cabin leaders half immortality do you all accept?" Everyone said yes except for me who declined as well as Annabeth. "Lord Zeus we have everything we could ever ask for so we both ask for one thing and one thing only. That the two camps be combined!" Zeus grumbled with disappointment and said " very well Perseus Jackson and Annabeth Chase your wish shall be granted. Now for the rest of you leave while we make them immortal. Annabeth and I decided that we should head back to camp and get some shut eye defeating a primordial was not easy work. As we were walking out of the Empire State Building I noticed a figure who seemed to be staring at me and motioning for me to come. "Hey Annabeth why don't you head over to camp I'll meet you their I just gotta check on something." "Ok but don't take to long Seaweed Brain." When I got to the figure it seemed to float and hovered towards me and said in a ghostly voice "Time is inevitable and is everlasting" I looked at him confused as I felt a bang at the back of my head and everything faded to darkness as I fell into unconsciousness.
Piper's POV
I was excited i looked at Jason straight in the eyes and mouth "love you" as we walked forwards hand in hand to Meet Zeus and become immortal. Zeus' voice echoed with power and said "those of the seven who have accepted come forth." Jason, Frank, Hazel, and I came forward and bowed. Then Zeus spoke to the other Olympians "let us begin" the Olympians chanted something in Greek and Zeus' voice boomed with power and chanted "I Zeus king of the gods grant these half bloods the gift of immortality and allow them to ascend to godhood." There were flowing orbs of light and they went to to each of us I felt a sudden pain and i felt like my blood was made of fire. Then after about a minute we all stood up and bowed. I felt more powerful and more youthful than ever. We headed out of Olympus as Zeus called forth the Head of the cabins and game them partial immortality. Once we headed down we all decided to go back to camp until Zeus was ready to explain our domains and powers and such.
Timeskip one hour
When I got back to camp I could see Annabeth in her orange Camp Half Blood shirt running up to me. "Have you seen Percy I have been looking everywhere for him and he still hasn't come back since he left to go check on something near Olympus." "No I haven't" I replied slightly worried, "did he say where he was going?" "No he just headed away torwads an alley and hasn't come back since she!" She had tears starting to form around her eyes ,"what if something happened to him and so soon after the war-"Annabeth cracked and started crying. I pulled her towards me and said "He will be fine he's a tough guy and you know that." We headed to the campfire and I sat down with her and comforted her.
3rd POV
Percy woke up to see a dark figure in front of him with a black coat on. Percy was chained to the roof of a weird room that looked like a dungeon and had one door with a bar as a window. The hooded figure moves forward and said in a quiet and menacing voice "Time is always moving Perseus Jackson and I have come back to torture you until you break and succumb to my will." Percy looked up as the figure took off his hood and saw an enemy who he never wanted to see again. Kronos. "Torture? Really, that's so boring. Why don't you face me one on one in a fair fight?" "Silence! Kronos screamed while slicing Percy's cheek with a small curved dagger that he had hidden in his cloak. "I will break your spirit and you will wish I had just killer you in he beginning. To further make you feel like escape is impossible and that there is no point, which there isn't, I will tell you a bit about this room." He said with a vicious smile. This room is enchanted by me to have time move 100 times faster than the real world. Say you have stayed here for a hundred years it would only be five years in the outside world. I have also made it so no other enchantments or powers can be used in this room other than the things I deem worthy. So no magic swords or water powers here. I have made it so you are half immortal so that you will be able to die by combat but not by age, which you would age normally as if you were outside this room in the outside world. I have also cursed you with having nightmares of your last torture that you have felt whenever you are asleep." His eyes looked insane and happy with the thought of being able to torture the man who assured his downfall. As he began to leave the room Percy called out "I will escape and if I don't t my friend will find me. Count on it!" "Oh I will count on it. Which is why I am going to break you before that happens." And with that Kronos left and left Percy Jackson inside his cell of torture to think of what pain he will feel first.
Well that's it guys please tell me how you feel tips would be indeed helpful and review on how you want this story to go. I have the structural idea but I want to know if you guys have any plot ideas for the future. Expect more in the future! :)