QDG: He he. Hi. Okay, I know your all hating me for not updating COSS
(Chronicles Of The Silver Sun) but my compy is broken and all I can work on
are short ficys like this.
This is a poem I wrote during band class when I was feeling really down. I
hope you like it. There is mudshiping and a little valeshiping, but it is
squashed by the mud. mwahahaha
BTW, thanks to all you who reviewed Fallen Angel..
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The sun sets
Over the horizon
She sits in wait
Adorned with bridal gown
A tear falls down
Her fair white face.
~*He's not coming*~
She clutches her flowers
Hope high in her heart
They tell her to go home
That this is pointless
But she stays
With hope but the words echo through her brain
~*He's not coming*~
She cannot see him,
Riding on his steed
Away, and away
Going farther and farther
Throwing the ring of his finger,
Tears rolling down his cheeks
~*He's not coming*~
She tears of her veil
Her eyes heavy with sadness
She has been betrayed
Too many times for this
To be forgotten
Ignored again and again
~*He's not coming*~
Blue hair waving in the breeze
White ribbon flying away
He gave it to her
He had given her hope
But now he had left her for the fire of his heart
It slowly crossed her mind
~*He's not coming*~
His riding was halted
As he looked to the north
This hurt him so much
If only she knew
Maybe then she would forgive him
For running away it tore at him that
~*He's not coming*~
But he thought he loved her
His friend of the flame
Her blazing eyes
Her blinding beauty
That is why he ran
Why he fled
~*He's not coming*~
But still she waited
A flicker of hope
That he would not leave her
Leave her heart to freeze
Maybe he did love her
As she loved him but,
~*He's not coming*~
He saw it coming
Twisting and furling in the wind
A white ribbon
Like a message from above
He gripped the fine silk
He held it to him close, but still
~*He's not coming*~
He thought of her laugh
Her soft healing hands
He picked up his ring
Brushing of the clinging snow
Reading the inscription
"Water and Earth, Sea and Land Unite"
~*He's not coming*~
He slid the cold metal
Around his finger
Flinching at
The biting ice
He longed to hold her
But. who did he love
~*He's not coming*~
She sat, pale as Ivory
Waiting and waiting
Minutes turned to hours
Hours turned to days
But still she stayed
Waiting for her love to come, but
~*He's not coming*~
He stayed at an inn
Staring at the ring
Unsure what to do
Were to go
His mind strained and struggled
But his heart remained silent
~*He's not coming*~
She stayed on the bench
No light shined on her.
No hope remained
But still she stayed
She still waited
Even though she knew
~*He's not coming*~
He stepped into the cold
Yearning to no the truth
He clutched the ribbon
Beginning to see it
He re-saddled his steed
But he didn't move farther
~*He's not coming*~
The rain began to fall
Reminding him of her
He couldn't leave her now
He now knew he loved her
He turned his steed
Heading to his love
~*He is coming*~
He saw her from afar
Pale and cold as ice
He grit his teeth and
Hurried his horse
"I love you!" he murmured
"Hang on."
~*He is coming*~
She saw him and she broke out into a fresh set of tears
Her eyes were huge with disbelief
"He didn't forget,." she thought
"He does love me!"
She stood shakily
Basking in the Gold light emitting from him
~*He is coming*~
They embraced, as gold mixed with blue
They game together in an emerald light
They smiled and kissed
And the heavens sang out
They knew nothing at the moment
Except for the hope and love they would hold forever
~*He had come*~
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Well there you have it! What do you thing? All reviews are welcome, even
flames. Please tell me if I sucked, then I'll stop bugging the world with
ficys like these. Thank you!
~*QueenDragonGoddess*~
(Chronicles Of The Silver Sun) but my compy is broken and all I can work on
are short ficys like this.
This is a poem I wrote during band class when I was feeling really down. I
hope you like it. There is mudshiping and a little valeshiping, but it is
squashed by the mud. mwahahaha
BTW, thanks to all you who reviewed Fallen Angel..
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
The sun sets
Over the horizon
She sits in wait
Adorned with bridal gown
A tear falls down
Her fair white face.
~*He's not coming*~
She clutches her flowers
Hope high in her heart
They tell her to go home
That this is pointless
But she stays
With hope but the words echo through her brain
~*He's not coming*~
She cannot see him,
Riding on his steed
Away, and away
Going farther and farther
Throwing the ring of his finger,
Tears rolling down his cheeks
~*He's not coming*~
She tears of her veil
Her eyes heavy with sadness
She has been betrayed
Too many times for this
To be forgotten
Ignored again and again
~*He's not coming*~
Blue hair waving in the breeze
White ribbon flying away
He gave it to her
He had given her hope
But now he had left her for the fire of his heart
It slowly crossed her mind
~*He's not coming*~
His riding was halted
As he looked to the north
This hurt him so much
If only she knew
Maybe then she would forgive him
For running away it tore at him that
~*He's not coming*~
But he thought he loved her
His friend of the flame
Her blazing eyes
Her blinding beauty
That is why he ran
Why he fled
~*He's not coming*~
But still she waited
A flicker of hope
That he would not leave her
Leave her heart to freeze
Maybe he did love her
As she loved him but,
~*He's not coming*~
He saw it coming
Twisting and furling in the wind
A white ribbon
Like a message from above
He gripped the fine silk
He held it to him close, but still
~*He's not coming*~
He thought of her laugh
Her soft healing hands
He picked up his ring
Brushing of the clinging snow
Reading the inscription
"Water and Earth, Sea and Land Unite"
~*He's not coming*~
He slid the cold metal
Around his finger
Flinching at
The biting ice
He longed to hold her
But. who did he love
~*He's not coming*~
She sat, pale as Ivory
Waiting and waiting
Minutes turned to hours
Hours turned to days
But still she stayed
Waiting for her love to come, but
~*He's not coming*~
He stayed at an inn
Staring at the ring
Unsure what to do
Were to go
His mind strained and struggled
But his heart remained silent
~*He's not coming*~
She stayed on the bench
No light shined on her.
No hope remained
But still she stayed
She still waited
Even though she knew
~*He's not coming*~
He stepped into the cold
Yearning to no the truth
He clutched the ribbon
Beginning to see it
He re-saddled his steed
But he didn't move farther
~*He's not coming*~
The rain began to fall
Reminding him of her
He couldn't leave her now
He now knew he loved her
He turned his steed
Heading to his love
~*He is coming*~
He saw her from afar
Pale and cold as ice
He grit his teeth and
Hurried his horse
"I love you!" he murmured
"Hang on."
~*He is coming*~
She saw him and she broke out into a fresh set of tears
Her eyes were huge with disbelief
"He didn't forget,." she thought
"He does love me!"
She stood shakily
Basking in the Gold light emitting from him
~*He is coming*~
They embraced, as gold mixed with blue
They game together in an emerald light
They smiled and kissed
And the heavens sang out
They knew nothing at the moment
Except for the hope and love they would hold forever
~*He had come*~
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Well there you have it! What do you thing? All reviews are welcome, even
flames. Please tell me if I sucked, then I'll stop bugging the world with
ficys like these. Thank you!
~*QueenDragonGoddess*~