This is a re-make of 'Sharingan Naruto' and hopefully it won't suck as much. Now it is time to fix the huge mess I made. Oh and hopefully I won't get too carried away with it. Unfortunately this will be a tad different than this guys predecessor but in this case that's a good thing!
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"Ahh!" Naruto yelled in pain as more senbon needles struck his body.
"Naruto!" Sasuke yelled in concern. 'Damn, if this keeps up we'll get more screwed than Paris Hilton.' Sasuke thought to himself as he examined his fallen comrade. It appears that Naruto has passed out from exhaustion.
"You cannot revive him." Haku said to Sasuke as he stared down the young Uchiha.
"Well at least I don't sound like women," Sasuke replied with a sharp tongue. 'Focus, see everything," He thought to himself. He had to protect his friend no matter what.
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Naruto felt groggy.
'Uhh, what the hell happened?' He asked himself. He looked up to only see Sasuke, with Haku on the ground before them.
"Sasuke you did it!" Naruto yelled in excitement. 'Though I wish I was more helpful.' He thought to himself.
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"Don't let your dreams die….Naruto." Sasuke said as he 'died'.
"He fought like a true shin obi." Haku remarked. But none of this registered in Naruto's mind. All he felt was fury, immense furry.
"You'll pay." Naruto muttered. "I'll kill you!" He yelled as red chakra started to form around him. But that wasn't all. Along with the chakra something happened to his eyes. His Sharingan activated.
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"Hmm, so your saying Konoha gives their Ninja's healthcare too!?" Zabuza said as he stared at Kakashi in awe.
"Yeah, doesn't Bloody Mist do that?" Kakashi asked the swordsman.
"Hell no! We don't even get dental!"
"Darn that sucks." The Copy Ninja replied. "Hey, how about joining us, it's a lot better than being an assassin, trust me."
"I can tell, alright, from hence forth, Haku and I are now officially Leaf ninja!"
'Heh, I am one bad ass negotiator.' Kakashi thought as he just got Zabuza as a new comrade. He then looked over to Naruto to see he was basically kicking Haku's ass.
"Should we…"
"Nah," Zabuza interrupted. "I'm sure everything will turn out just fine.
"Ahh, ouch, gah, Zabuza-sama, help me!"
"Yup, just fine."
"So, just want to leave it as a cliff hanger?" Kakashi asked the no longer rogue ninja.
"Um, sure." was his answer.
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Tune in next month for the not-so-thrilling conclusion!
