A/N: This is my first fanfic. Please, no flames! Thanks everyone who even clicked on the link thingy for this! I am SO grateful. :D
Disclaimer: I don't own ANY of these characters! Every single person belongs to the AWESOME Stephenie Meyer. So, PLEASE DON'T SUE ME!
EDIT: I AM RECONSTRUCTING THE ENTIRE THING. i luv the cute sexy vampire, if you're reading this…um…sorry? WILL BE UPDATED SPARDONICALLY (such an awesome word).
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Chapter One - Mission
Elizabeth Masen POV
"Paul," I said, shifting from one translucent foot to another. "Where—may I ask—are you taking us?"
"Liza," Eddie—Edward Masen Senior, my husband—said gently, squeezing my hand. "You need to learn to have patience. You would think that after a hundred years of waiting, you would have gained some sort of patience." He rolled his eyes at me, smirking.
I glared.
"I've been told to take you two to your Mission Destination," Paul said from the front of the bus. We rolled to a gentle stop. "And now we're at your Mission Destination, so get off." He ran his fingers through his hair gruffly.
"Thank you for taking the time," Being polite was just one of the things you had to do when you grew up in the late 1800s.
He grunted.
Eddie kept a loose hold on my right hand, and led me to the front. "Thank you very much, Paul."
He grunted again.
The modern-like doors of the bus slid open with a low hiss that my ears could barely detect. A cold gust of wind swirled in, causing me to feel momentarily sick. Once it settled into a gentle and un-harmful breeze, I took one step forward, ready to jump. We had been taught how to do this before…but it had never really occurred to us (Eddie and I) that we would get to really go forward and fulfill a Mission. Hardly anyone ends up being able to.
"Ready, Liza?" Eddie whispered in my ear. The sound of his familiar voice is comforting. "It's only a couple thousand feet, anyway." I could hear the smirk in his voice.
Annoyed, I glared at him again. "You better hold my hand the entire time, or else I will divorce you."
He smiled. "Of course I will, Liza."
"Oh, just jump off already." Paul complained behind us.
Listening to an elder ghost for one, I took a deep breath and jumped, clinging to Eddie for everything I had.
A/N: Sorry that was extremely short! I just felt like that was good place to stop...so...Please review! I'll be your bestest friend...PLEASE! Thanks...:)
EDIT: How did you like this new one? I think I gave the characters a bit more depth this time, and my writing has definitely improved over the course of 22 other fanfics. :P R&R and tell me if it's better, or worse. OR, if you're new, then, great, tell me if you like it or hate it!
