Hi, this is my first story (Here) and I hope it won't be my last.
P. you like this story, I wrote it; if you do not, my sister did(JK).
X"You sent us in here after having 'forgotten' to mention the wholedamn bomb set to explode minutes before hand!yeah, you and Iheal, but Gumbo and Sinclairdon't!" Loganwas yelling himself hoarse at X-23
"they survived." was the girls answer
"thats not my point," He growled, grabing her arm tighter,
"Let me go, Wolverine,"X ordered her voice measured"Wolfsbane was not my mission!"
"what the hells that supposed to mean?"
And she just looked at him, just looked at him with those eyes, so full of sadness and anger, loss and betrayal.X
CLICK! CLICK! CLICK!
Laura's gun was out of ammunition, useless, {weapon is out of ammunition}
{Collect visual data. Two known occupants, two unknown}
Laura's superhearing picked up the radio transmissions, {cannot make visual on last occupant}
CLICK! Laura was still out of ammo, dropping the gun, she whispered "I failed." the helicopter rose into the air as she took of running into the woods, Slam! she ran strait into Logan
"what is the matter with you, Laura? Risemans still got Rahne and now he's going to kill her!" Logan yelled in her face "Rahne was one of the first kids Chuck brought here to the school after I got there" he told her, "she was one of the new mutants and I helped to train her." [Chuck, Professor Charles Xavier. Status unknown]
"Then she should have known better." Was Laura's blunt answer
"Shut up and listen!" Logan screamed, pinning her to a tree with his arm
XThinking back now, he sincerely regretted it; but no time to dwell on thatX
"Sinclair is who we die for!"
"Hauk!" Laura choked, clawing at his arm, "shut up and listen!" he screeched, pinning her harder, "Rahne Sinclair has two things we'll never get back: hope… and innocence," he drew a breath, "She's who we die for!"
"Logan," Gambit warned, Pulling him off Laura,(Laura crumpled to the ground, massaging her throat) "Sinclair is more important than you or me! Our lives are nothing compared to hers!"
"Have you gone nuts, old man?" Gambit yelled, tightening his grip on Logan, "come on, we're going home," L aura looked at him when he said 'we're going home'. Remy dragged Logan off to the Jet, he then jumped in himself and the jet lifted off before Laura could even get up off the ground.
[I do not understand] Laura popped a claw and began to dig it into her arm, little rivulets running down her hand [I do not understand] the snow was tainted red with blood [I do not understand] she let the slight dizziness wash over her before it was gone, leaving only the melancholy, betrayed feeling [I do not understand] leaning back against the tree she'd crumpled upon. Drawing, a great, shuddering breath she pulled her knees up to her chest and heaved a sigh; this was going to be a long night
the line in the middle was an accident, so sorry, I'll write the second chap later.