hey guys new story Enjoy

Loren's POV

* hi i'm Loren Tate a 18 year old girl who loves to sing and write music but have stage fright im starting school at "West Valley Carter" i went to my old school and was the geek of the school but now i'm going to change that say goodbye to the geek i get up and take a bath and get dressed i were a black shirt that say " I don't get Cute i get drop dead gorgeous" on it i where high waisted red shorts and red wedged sneakers then i let my hair down my back and go to my mom*

Nora: sweety you look beautiful

Loren: thanks mom see ya i love you

Nora: i love you too bye

Loren: bye

* i hop on my Yamaha FJR1300 and put on my helmet and ride to school while listening to "Lay Your Body Down" by Pretty Willie

Eddie's POV

* me and my friends Tyler,Phill,and Ian and we get out and lean on my red Lamborghini and start talking*

Tyler: hey Eddie have you talked to Chloe?

Me: hell no we were done over the summer but she was asking like a complete stalker

Phill: man she does not know when too stop something is mentally wrong with her

Ian: i know right she came too my house looking for you man!

* i shake my head we were still talking until this dude on this cool bike pulls by my car and was listening to "Lay Your Body Down" we all start laughing*

Ian: dude are you gay?

Phill: i know like seriously

Tyler: plus you need a serious hair cut

Me: come on guys leave him alone!

* then the dude took off the helmet and we seen she was a girl we all stopped laughing and stared then she looked at us and smirked*

Girl: do i need a serious haircut now?

* we all shook our heads then she chuckled and got off the bike and walks to the entrance with everyone staring at her*

Phill: dude i wanna get with that

Tyler: I know right becausec seriously i wanna squeeze that till it ain't no more squeezing left in me

Ian: got that right mate!

*while my friends were making gross comments i was still looking at her i thought she was the most gorgeous thing i have ever seen i really loved her beautiful hazel eyes we all walked in and seen her by my locker, her locker was right next to mine so i walked over*

Me: hi i'm Eddie sorry for laughing back there and thinking you were a dude

Girl: it's okay i'm Loren by the way

Me: nice to meet you

Girl: i'm new here so do you think you could show me around?

Me: sure

* we started walking till we got stopped by the DEVIL Chloe Carter*

hey guys what you think should i continue or naw?