AN: My first actual story! Bring out the champagne bottles! I know some people don't like OCs because of Mary Sueness but I'm trying to make these characters as realistic as possible. Well, as realistic as the Narutoverse can be :p. They'll have their flaws and will face challenges that both Shinobi and girls their age face. There will be some reader interaction as I'm open to suggestions on how to make this story better. The first chapter is in 3rd person but I prefer to write in the 1st person voice because I like actually voicing the thoughts of my characters and it gives the reader a perspective on why the character acts the way they do. If you have any questions, ask me in your review and I'll answer them .
Naruto belongs to Masashi Kishimoto.
Chapter 1
An awkward silence fills the room as the teacher leaves to go chase after the class clown. The students vary in their reactions.
Silent and studious Hazuki Ishiyama takes the opportunity to crack open a book and get ahead in her cramming for tomorrow's final exam. Not one for caring about appearances, her hair is frizzy and unconditioned. To avoid too much hassle, she simply wears it up in a high ponytail. Modest and plain clothing hang loosely on her slim figure. Her brunette locks swing in the early spring breeze as she turns the page in her book, brown eyes scanning the page at an inhuman speed while her peers chatter aimlessly around her.
Towards the back of the room, Raina Kokura tells the latest gossip to a gaggle of girls who cling to her every word. Easily the most popular girl in class, Raina has it all. Stunning looks, money and charm. Shoulder-length red hair frames seductive golden eyes and delicate feminine features. Trendy clothing clings to her figure. She is well-developed for a girl her age. An expensive-looking diamond ring sparkles on her left ring finger. Several boys hang on the fringe of the group, hoping to be acknowledged by the academy's beauty queen.
In the front of the room a group of boys make lewd jokes about the girls in the class. Among the group is Tomie Fukuhara, the sole girl. Her cropped blonde hair is arranged in a cute pixie cut and her green eyes sparkle with mirth. She playfully punches Kiba to get his attention.
"You're staring at her again. Man up and talk to her already," Tomie teases. Akamaru barks in agreement.
"I wasn't staring. I just thought I saw something in her direction…" Kiba trails off as Raina laughs at something one of her admirers said.
"You've been staring for the past 2 minutes. I bet you didn't even notice that Chouji had eaten 4 bags of chips and is starting on his 5th and 6th ones." Tomie knows that Kiba would rather stare at the girl he's had a major crush on ever since he started noticing girls but she would do anything to get his attention.
"Chouji, you know what I said about eating too many chips," Hazuki says without looking up from her book.
"Come on, Snoozuki. Let him eat all he wants. He's going to need the calories for our sparring match later," Tomie insists while handing Chouji another bag of chips.
"Cool! Barbeque flavor!" Chouji says excitedly before scarfing the bag down as fast as he can.
A loud snore comes from the back of the room and Raina looks over in irritation. "Can't he keep his eyes open for 5 minutes? I swear Shikamaru is part sloth. He's lucky he's hot," Raina's posse laughs.
"It'd be like dating a statue. One that only moves when he wants to roll over onto his side," Ino chimes in while checking her makeup in the mirror.
"He's not even the hottest boy in class," Sakura sighs dreamily and looks over at Sasuke who is currently glaring daggers at the tree outside the window.
"Like he'll ever like you. Your forehead is so big, it's its own country." Ino glares at Sakura.
"At least I haven't been packing on the pounds like some pig I know." Sakura glares back and tension in the room thickens.
"If both of you don't shut up, I'll go over there and seduce him myself." Raina threatens.
The threat falls on deaf ears and Ino and Sakura continue to fight over on who Sasuke likes better.
Raina sighs and stands up. The room falls silent when she struts over to where Sasuke is sitting. She sits in the empty chair next to him and waits patiently for him to notice her. When he turns to look over at her, she gives him her most coy smile. She tilts her head down so it will look like she's looking up at him through her eyelashes.
"Go away," Sasuke says in annoyance before she can get in a word otherwise.
Raina's face flushes with embarrassment when Tomie laughs hysterically at her rejection.
"I just remembered that I have something to do. Come with me, Hinata." Raina bites back tears before leaving the room with Hinata trailing after her.
Hazuki rolls her eyes at the display and mutters something about romance being a waste of time.
Iruka returns with Naruto bound up in rope. "Did you think that what you did was funny? Are you proud of yourself?" Iruka questions.
For once, Naruto keeps his mouth shut and scoffs at Iruka's interrogation. This isn't the first time Naruto angered the village with his pranks. Just last week, he replaced all the academy's textbooks with books about unspeakable things. Parents complained when their kids came home with all sorts of questions.
"As punishment, all of you have to practice your henge no jutsu and transform into me," Iruka yells at the class.
"What?!" The entire class yells, save Sasuke, Hazuki, Shino and Hinata because they don't talk much and Shikamaru because he was sleeping.
Sakura and Ino fight over who gets to go first, both of them seeing an opportunity to impress Sasuke.
"I think Sakura should go first," Naruto sides with his crush.
"Stay out of this, Naruto!" Ino yells and sends him a death glare.
"Women are so annoying." Shikamaru says lazily.
"Excuse me?!" Sakura and Ino yell at the same time before turning to Shikamaru with fire in their eyes.
"Will someone just go already?! Iruka-sensei isn't going to let us go home before everyone's done with the assignment." Tomie yells over the rest of group.
"I'll go," Hazuki says and transforms into a perfect copy of Iruka.
This inspires everyone to just continue down the line and transform into perfect copies of their sensei.
"This is all your fault, Naruto. I should be studying for tomorrow's exam." A student says accusingly.
"My mom is probably worrying about me." Another keeps glancing at the clock.
"Like I care what any of you think," Naruto defiantly states.
A whirlwind of smoke surrounds Naruto. When the smoke clears, a naked, curvaceous woman stands in his place.
"What is the meaning of this?! Why does that look like me?!" Raina shrieks in exasperation.
Tomie bites her lip in order to keep herself from laughing. She always found Naruto's pranks funny.
"That's not funny!" Raina's face is almost as red as her hair.
Iruka blanches before getting a massive nosebleed. Looks like someone is getting detention.
AN: Aaaand that concludes my first chapter. The next chapter will be in 1st person and that's when things will be getting personal with our heroines. It's up to you all now. Whose mind will we be living inside of for the next chapter? The stern bookworm, Hazuki? She may not say much but you know what they say, "Still waters run deep." The drama queen Raina? Being inside the mind of someone as privileged as her might prove to be great entertainment. Or the loud tomboy, Tomie? She has a rather… unique perspective on things. Tell me in your reviews!