My first Treasure planet FIC! WOOOOOOO!
Jim: So you own Treasure planet?!
Me: Fraid not Jim, Fraid not. But! I do own, Autumn Rose Fox, Meg and Chi-Chi Idone, Lucy and Cash Borlow, Jake, Samantha, and Reba Roster, Colton West, and Bella-Anne Barker!
All those just mentioned: YEA!
I hope you enjoy this fic, I really want to hear what you have to say, an if you do read this, please review so I know!
s the transport pod pulled up to Montresor the group of teens bounced in their seats. "I cannot wait!" Said a girl with auburn hair and green eyes. "Me neither! I can't wait to see aunt Sarah!" A girl with Brown hair and eyes said as the transport landed outside a small inn.
"Thanks for the ride." A girl with ocean eyes and red hair said happily as they all climbed out and walked closer to the inn.
A boy with dark auburn hair slung his bag and then his sisters' bags over his shoulder. "Yep, let's get in." He said with a southern drawl.
They walked in to a packed house. "HEY AUNT SARAH!" The red hair girl said once she saw their aunt. "Oh, Just-just a minute!" Their Aunt called back over the chatter.
She placed food at a few tables and then at a friend of the Family's table before. Making her way to the group of ten and giving them each a hug.
"Look at you all!" She said. "You've all gotten so big! Let's see if I can recall names to faces..." She then pointed to a girl with dark green eyes and dark red hair. She had some fake rose-colored roses tucked behind her ear and a matching set of jewelry, with earrings and necklace with roses strung on, and a choker necklace with a rose in the middle. And a light red dress and faded denim coat and some black Capri's with red bows and some red flat shoes. "Autumn Rose!" "Yep, That's me." Autumn Rose said with a little shrug.
"And you girls are Meg and Chi-Chi, right?" She asked pointing to two girls one was the brown hair and eyed girl. She had a dirty tank top and an old red cap and some shorts and military boots. While her sister Chi-Chi had bright red hair and brown eyes in very wavy locks of hair pulled back with a teal head band and a simple cream high neck tank top and some dark blue leggings. "Yep, that's us!" The two girls chorused.
"Ok and then, Lucy and Cash?" She asked pointing to two siblings who looked almost the same.
Lucy and Cash each had brown hair and eyes but Cash had a red bandana in his hair and a blue shirt with a brown vest, a red bandana around his neck, and some jeans and a simple red pair of sneakers. Lucy had a blue and red bow holding up her braid and a blue v neck elbow length shirt with a red ribbon keeping it together. She also had some jeans with holes in them and high-top boots. "Yep you caught us!" Lucy chuckled as Cash nodded.
"Ok so that means you three are Jake, Sam, and Reba?" Sarah pointed at them.
Jake and Samantha or Sam for short, had dark Auburn hair and hazel eyes. Jake had a gold yellow western shirt and a brown vest with a black bandana. He also had black jeans and boots. Sam had a high neck blue tank top and dark blue below knee leggings and black tennis shoes. Reba had ocean eyes and red-auburn hair, a black bow, and some little black music note earrings and a black choker necklace. She also had an orange shirt with yellow straps and black ruffles at the top, some faded jeans and a pair of black boots. "Yep that's us..." Reba said and Jake nodded while Sam said. "Mm-hmm!"
"Colton, correct?" Sarah asked pointing to a boy that looked almost exactly like Jake but had blue jeans and brown sneakers and didn't have a vest. "That's me, Aunt Sarah." He said politely.
"And Bella-Anne?" She pointed to the auburn-haired girl with green eyes. She had an orange tee shirt and a brown long sleeve shirt that she wore over it and then a faded denim vest and jeans, and some zip-up high-top sneakers. "you've got 'er!" Bella-Anne said with a thick city accent.
"Why don't you all put your stuff upstairs, and then come down and I'll get you guys something to eat, you all must have been famished after that long ride out here." Sarah said and so they did.
When they came back down Sarah was talking to a Candid.
Just then the door burst open. "JIM!" Sarah exclaimed as two Police robots brought him inside. "Ooooo, Wrong turn..." The Candid said.
"Ok thanks for the lift guys..." Jim said as he removed the first ones' hand. "Not so fast!" He said. Then the second said. "We apprehended your son flying a solar vehicle on a restricted property." The first one continued. "Moving violation 9,04 section 15 paragraph..." He trailed off then Jim finished his thought. "6" "Thank you... as you can imagine that's a violation of his probation."
"Yes-no-yes, I understand, it won't happen again... but could we..." Sarah trailed off trying to think of what to say before the Candid spoke up. "Ahem, pardon me, officers umm if I might interject here. I am the noted astrophysicist. Doctor Delbert Doppler, perhaps you've heard of me?... No? I have a clipping." He said.
"Are you the boys' father?" The second Officer asked.
"Oh, no Eww. No, he's just an old friend of the family!" Sarah said before the officers both said. "Back off Sir!" "Thank you Delbert I will take it from here." Sarah said. "Well Sarah if you insist... Mmm. Don't ever let me do that again." Delbert said as he walked back to his table.
"Due to repeated violations of statuette 15 C we've impounded his vehicle any more slip-ups will result in a one-way ticket juvenile hall." The second officer said.
"Kitty hues co!"
"The slammer."
"Thank you, officers, it won't happen again." Sarah said. "We see his type all the time ma'am, dead-enders, losers!" The first officer said and then the second said. "Take care now!"
They left and everyone in the room turned back to their food. "Woah..." Bella-Anne muttered. She felt good knowing she wasn't the only trouble maker at least.
Sarah began giving Jim a talking to.
Later Jim sat on the roof tossing rocks, as a spacer crashed into one of the landing docks.
A old lizard guy called 'Billy bones' staggered out and Jim brought him to the Benbow inn.
Sarah was looking at her locket and Delbert was getting ready to leave. But there was Jim holding Billy Bones. "JAMES. PLEADIOS. HAWKINS!" Sarah yelled at him in shock.
"What the is that?!" Meg said standing up from her seat. As the others Stood up and looked at the old guy. "Ma, He's hurt. Bad!" Jim said laying the old man on the floor of the Benbow. "Me, chest lad!" Billy said. "He'll be coming soon, can't let them get ahold of this!" "Who's coming?" Reba and Jim asked. "The cyborg... Beware the Cyborg...!" Billy said to Jim as he took his last breaths.
A bright light shown through the window and another Crash was heard outside making Chi-Chi yelp.
Cash peeked out of the window with Jim and saw a not so friendly group of People coming toward the inn. "WE gotta GO!" Jim said grabbing the item wrapped in cloth that Billy had given him and running upstairs with his mother and the other 15-year-olds.
Delbert went to open the door but the handle was blasted off by a laser gun.
"This is not how I imagined coming back here would go!" Lucy said as they looked for a way out of the Benbow. "I believe I'm with Jim on this one!" Delbert said as he ran up the stairs. "I don't believe I'm saying this but I agree with him to!" Cash said nervously as shots rang through-out the Benbow.
The guys burst inside and began ransacking the inn.
"DELIGHA, DELIGHA! OH, GOOD GIRL, ST-STAY!" Delbert yelled down to his Seal horse thingy. "Don't worry I'm an expert in the laws of Physics! On three! 1!" Delbert said as they prepared to jump into his carriage. "3!" Jim yelled pushing all of them into the carriage.
"GO, DELIGHA, GO!" Delbert said as Sarah and Bella-Anne looked back to the now blazing Benbow inn.
Jim unwrapped the clothed ball. And it revealed a gold sphere with strange markings.
Later they arrived at Delbert's home. "I just spoke with the constabulary, just like a pirate who fled without a trace...! I'm sorry Sarah... I'm afraid the old Benbow inn has burned to the ground." Delbert said. Everyone looked as if they wanted to say something to comfort her but didn't speak.
"Well certainly a lot of trouble over that odd little sphere. Those markings still baffle me. Unlike anything I've ever encountered. Even with my vast experience and superior intellect it will take me years... HEY!" Delbert said as Jim somehow made the little ball open. Lights like flowed out and made a map of space!
"It's a map!" Delbert said as he walked around the room. "You figure that out on your own, Sherlock?!" Meg asked sarcastically. "Buzz off Watson!" Chi-Chi said to her sister as she looked around the room in awe.
"We-we-we, this is us! The planet Montresor!" Doppler said after nearly running into the hallo-version of it. "Neat-o!" Lucy said gazing at the planet trying to find the little house on the map. "I think I..." She drawled moving a hand to it and ended up pressing it by mistake. The map began to move through-out the eutherum. "That's the magileric cloud! Whoo! And there's the coral galaxy! It-it-it's!"- Delbert couldn't finish his statement. The teens looked between one another and then back to the planet. "Treasure planet!" "The 'Treasure Planet'?" Sam asked staring at it with wide eyes. "No!" Delbert said in awe.
"THAT'S TREASURE PLANET!" Jim said with wide eyes.
Delbert then began to rant about whoever found it would be famous. "Whoo!" He said as Jim closed the map removing the cool lighting. "Mom this is the answer to all our problems!" Jim said happily. "Jim there is absolutely no way..." Sarah began but Jim countered. "Don't you remember all the stories!"
"That's all they were stories!" Sarah said but Jim wasn't about to give up easily. "With that treasure, we could rebuild the Benbow a hundred times over, with funds to spare!"
"Well-this-is-it's just? Delbert would you please explain how ridiculous this is?!" Sarah stammered over her words. "It's totally preposterous traversing the entire galaxy alone." He stated. "Now at last we hear some sense!" Sarah said. "But we'd be goin' with 'em!" Reba said her southern drawl showing the more desperate her voice grew.
"That's why I'm going with them!" Delbert said as he began packing a bag and Reba, Bella-Anne, Meg, and Sam Smiled wide at this but the others let out groans of frustration.
Ok so Chapter one is done! LOL that rhymed until next time, and so did that!