Mario and Luigi: Crossing Dimensions

Hello. This is my story, Mario and Luigi: Crossing Dimensions! Let me know what you think!

Chapter 1: The Adventure Begins

Mario and Luigi were at their house when their adventure began, as with most of their adventures. Mario asked his brother "So Luigi, what do you want to do today?" "I don't know Mario. What do you want to do today?" Luigi said in response. "I don't know, what do you want to do today?" They were sitting on chairs, simply relaxing. It was just a typical day for them. Bowser or some other villain had not kidnapped the princess, nobody was attacking the Mushroom Kingdom, or anything like that. It looked like a good day indeed.

Just then Toad ran into the house. "Guys! You got to check this out! Professor E. Gadd just made a new invention!" Curious as they were, the Mario Brothers went with Toad to check it out. "What does the invention do, Toad?" Mario asked nicely. "You'll see!" Toad said as they went to Princess Peach's Castle. "Gee, he sure seems excited." Luigi said to his older brother. "He sure does."

The Mario Bros. took a warp pipe to get to the castle, as it was very far away from their house. Toad led them to the castle, although they knew the castle like the back of their hands. After going through Toad Town, they managed to arrive at the castle in just a few minutes. They had trouble getting in, as the castle was very crowded, as many people had come to see the invention. "Excuse me, pardon me, coming through!" the Mario Bros. said as they slipped past the large amount of Toads that were entering the castle.

"Ladies and gentlemen, I am about to show you my new invention, the Dimensional Transporter! It can take anyone to any dimension they please! Mind you, it is only in testing phase." Professor E. Gadd exclaimed to the audience. Among the audience were several Toads, and Princess Peach herself. Her royal highness raised her hand. "Yes, what is it, your highness?" Professor E. Gadd asked. "Did you invite Mario and Luigi?" "Of course I did!" As soon as Professor E. Gadd answered Princess Peach's question, Mario and Luigi came in. They were exhausted from trying to get into the castle. "MARIO!" Princess Peach said. She ran over to the Mario Brothers. "Are you OK?" "Yeah I think so." Mario said. Mario and Luigi slowly got up, and went to the audience.

Professor E. Gadd turned on the invention, revealing a glowing portal. "As I said, it is only in testing phase. So nobody try it yet or fiddle with anything." Suddenly a curious young Toad went up to the invention. "What does this button do?" the young Toad asked. Professor E. Gadd responded in horror. "NO! DON'T PRESS THAT THE BUTTON! THAT'S THE-" The young toad pressed the button, causing the portal to suddenly start sucking in everybody, like a giant vacuum. Thankfully most of the Toads were a good distance away from the machine, but Mario and Luigi had gone to take a closer look. They were sucked straight in!

"-vacuum button." Professor E. Gadd said sadly as the portal closed with Mario and Luigi still inside. Mario and Luigi had vanished along with the portal, and were stranded in an unknown dimension! Just where were the two heroic plumbers?

Meanwhile, Bowser was preparing an attack plan on Peach's Castle. "Alright, here is the plan. We're going to storm into the castle, knock out anybody who gets in our way, and nab the princess. Once we have her-" "We'll take her to the dungeon and lock her in a prison cell." a Koopatrol said. "Very good! Good to see you caught on!" Bowser said to his minion. The Koopatrol rolled his eyes. It was the same every time.

So what do you think? Please R&R!