well i don't expect review for this poem. i can't think and i won't write anything else or type that is.
Tears are colliding
Yours and mine
Our last kiss
Deep and Wounded
Falling into no one's arms
Not ever agian
Still heartbeats
Not one after the other
Death's devouring me
I ask myself
Did I get what I deserve?
Skin as cold as ice
Starless eyes
All that's remaining
Rain hitting the hard ground
Your tears falling gently on my face
Color drained
Lifeless corpse
You hold me in your arms
Everything was right but the time
It's hard to let go
But you'll remember me
so how was it? Not too bad in my opinion. It probably deserves a C or something along those letters lines whatever.